ArHi FF: Jaane Doh Naa Updated 150 [Feb 4, '13]

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#801

Brilliant update!

You have written beautifully the feelings of Khushi ...

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Izadora

@izzy0502

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#802

hey just came across this

and let me tell you

i love it.

read it in one go

i love everything in this story from the plot, the characters, the dialouges, the narration ... everything

looking forward to the next part .

pls add me to you pm list ..

continue soon

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#803

superb part..

that was really amazing one..

a much needed part...that will turn the ASR into Arnav..

thnx for the pm...

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#804

yup there is a difference between all this
even though she kept her surname after being separated from you
her MS and all the other tid bits from her marriage to you but it dont mean you are her husband becuase you simply didnt do anything to make her think that you are her husband
i get what you are trying to portray from khushi pov at least i think i get it
it was about time he was told of all this
there is only such time she could tolerate what he did
he had to be told what she really wanted from him as a husband which he never was
so she finally snapped and told him huh
wonder what now
okay best of luck with your exams dear
and see ya after the exams are over

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multifaceted

@multifaceted

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#805

Thank you for updating...liked Khushi's p-o-v...the way you present their relationship is really intriguing...loving this FF

Thanks for the PM

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--BumbleBee--

@--BumbleBee--

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#806

That was beautifully penned.

Khushi's feelings were brought out in an awesome way. Love how you have described the two of them, their feelings and how it all just boils down to one thing.

awesome update.

please update sooon.

all the best for your exams..

thanks for the pm..