ArHi FF: Jaane Doh Naa Updated 150 [Feb 4, '13]

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a.vaishnavi

@SankiPagal

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#811

its a beautiful fic...

waiting for the next update eagerly

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fairycake

@fairycake

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Posted: 12 years ago

#812

thank you for the beautiful update. Good luck with your exams.

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sagarika13

@sagarika13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#813

hey dearread all at nice story and very well written...

can't wait to read nxt pls pls pls... update sooonn..

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adriannaaa

@adrianne

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#814

You are one awesome writer!!

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#815

hey, just read your ff in a go.it really nice the scenes you have sketched are all extremely well i loved the scenes like

1. arnav n payal scene

2. arnav n ayesha scene

3. ayesha n khushi in the party where ayesha is drunk

4. this latest scene of arnav n khushi

you wrote them all so brilliantly. waiting for you to finish your exams. best of luck.

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mannat27

@mannat27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#816

Wonderful update!!!!!

Loved their fight, and it was absolutely needed right now. Both needed to get some things out!

Sorry for the late reply, been too busy!

Looking forward to the next update now!

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Alice

@alice54

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#817

Great Update!!!!!!!!!

The fight was very good...i also liked how Arnav is relising his mistake slowly...

Waiting to see how Arnav and Kushi will sort these differences away...and what happened to the others in RM house...

Waiting to read more...

Continue soon...

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Lalita

@luckyarnav

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Posted: 12 years ago

#818

Firstly it was a little difficult to comprehend but then i re-read some parts and there i completely agree with Khushi's point of view and I am with her.

I know some of us will be wondering why she had kept Arnav's name, why she has not moved on but thats the whole point ' she agrees she has not moved on bcoz she was always what Arnav wanted her to be but Arnav could never become the husband she wanted'

I hope thats what you were trying to say through this chapter. Arnav was always about himself, about all he wants and not about what khushi wants. Somethings were really nicely written by you, the one where khushi tells him about how he has never regretted on taking the wrong decision, about not utilizing the chances he is getting now but feeling sorry for something he has already done.

This fight was a must i guess to make Arnav understand Khushi's point 👏👏

Thank you and update soon and hoping some sense to go inside Arnav's thick head.

Ps: i wish the actual show had something like this, i was so waiting for this but never mind now its over and we can only feel bad about it.

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#819

This story is really interesting amazing updates
Please PM me too whenever u update

PS sent u a buddy request

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Dalmuthuya

@Dalmuthuya

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#820

God how I wish the dialogues were in English.. This is such an amazing story. I only read the first chapter, but I cant continue due to me not understanding Hindi. How ever I will tell you this; you are a brilliant writer. keep writing. :)