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pyaar part 3 was superb...

amazing os...

Originally posted by: sweety-reylover

Part 3

Few days later'

By now kreya was part of the basketball team'and also the group'raghav had ask ria out, and they were in love'. Swayum and Sharon who believed in love were finding love'and rey & kreya who did not believed in love were''falling for each other!!

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Will the girls accept their love

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The night before tournament! Kreya was in the court practicing'Sharon was in her room '.rey went to kreya'. And swayum went to Sharon'

---at the bb court----

R: hiiee kreya'

K: hie rey!

R: ii'.main'tum'hum

K: kya ho gaya hai aapko?

..

'.

''

Sh: kya ho gaya swayum?

Sw:Sharon, maine yeh baat kabse kehna chaata tha!

..

'.

''

K: haan bolo rey' kya bolna chate the?

R: I don't know kahan se start karo'

K: yeh kaisa sawal hai!!

Rey steps forward'and puts his finger on kreya's lip "Ssshhhssshh"

..

'.

''

Sharon went numb'.swayum's finger was still on sharon's lip'.sharon was looking into swayums's eyes'and swayum could only see Sharon'and the air started moving'making sweet sound'

..

'.

''

Kreya got back into her senses! She stepped back'.her movement got rey back into his senses too'

K: kya kehen hai aapko?

R: jab se tumhe dekha hai'tabse tum hii aati ho mere khayalo maine'.

She turned her back to rey'

..

'.

''

Sw: jab tum mere saath hoti ho tab lagta hai ki waqt yahin tam jahey'.aur maine tumhe yunhi dekha karu..

..

'.

''

R: ankhen bandh karta hun toh tum dekti ho'aakhen kholta hun '.toh sif tumhe dekhna chata hun'.

..

'.

''

Sw: tumhare saath bitaya hua har paal pyaar ho jata hai'

..

'.

''

R: tumhe apna bane ka dil chata hai

..

'.

''

Sw: I love u Sharon'

..

'.

''

R: I love you kreya

..

'.

''

Kreya turns back'.runs towards rey'and kisses him'he was first in shock'but then he got lost in the kiss'

k: I love you!

reykisses her again'.

..

'.

''

sh: rey, u are the best person, I have ever meet'.but I have my career'and I do not wanna love..i tried doing it once'ol I got is pain

sw: lekin'Sharon'

sh: I do nt love you!

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M done'.!!

with this I came to end to this ss, I know silly tha'.

But I just wanted toshow ke'.eveyone jisko pyaar se pyaar ho'.usse saacha pyaar mile aisa zaruri nahi hai'

do hit like tab...and comment

Originally posted by: sweety-reylover

Part 3

Few days later'

By now kreya was part of the basketball team'and also the group'raghav had ask ria out, and they were in love'. Swayum and Sharon who believed in love were finding love'and rey & kreya who did not believed in love were''falling for each other!!

------

Will the girls accept their love

-------

The night before tournament! Kreya was in the court practicing'Sharon was in her room '.rey went to kreya'. And swayum went to Sharon'

---at the bb court----

R: hiiee kreya'

K: hie rey!

R: ii'.main'tum'hum

K: kya ho gaya hai aapko?

..

'.

''

Sh: kya ho gaya swayum?

Sw:Sharon, maine yeh baat kabse kehna chaata tha!

..

'.

''

K: haan bolo rey' kya bolna chate the?

R: I don't know kahan se start karo'

K: yeh kaisa sawal hai!!

Rey steps forward'and puts his finger on kreya's lip "Ssshhhssshh"

..

'.

''

Sharon went numb'.swayum's finger was still on sharon's lip'.sharon was looking into swayums's eyes'and swayum could only see Sharon'and the air started moving'making sweet sound'

..

'.

''

Kreya got back into her senses! She stepped back'.her movement got rey back into his senses too'

K: kya kehen hai aapko?

R: jab se tumhe dekha hai'tabse tum hii aati ho mere khayalo maine'.

She turned her back to rey'

..

'.

''

Sw: jab tum mere saath hoti ho tab lagta hai ki waqt yahin tam jahey'.aur maine tumhe yunhi dekha karu..

..

'.

''

R: ankhen bandh karta hun toh tum dekti ho'aakhen kholta hun '.toh sif tumhe dekhna chata hun'.

..

'.

''

Sw: tumhare saath bitaya hua har paal pyaar ho jata hai'

..

'.

''

R: tumhe apna bane ka dil chata hai

..

'.

''

Sw: I love u Sharon'

..

'.

''

R: I love you kreya

..

'.

''

Kreya turns back'.runs towards rey'and kisses him'he was first in shock'but then he got lost in the kiss'

k: I love you!

reykisses her again'.

..

'.

''

sh: rey, u are the best person, I have ever meet'.but I have my career'and I do not wanna love..i tried doing it once'ol I got is pain

sw: lekin'Sharon'

sh: I do nt love you!

-----

M done'.!!

with this I came to end to this ss, I know silly tha'.

But I just wanted toshow ke'.eveyone jisko pyaar se pyaar ho'.usse saacha pyaar mile aisa zaruri nahi hai'

do hit like tab...and comment

awesom update...

kria accepted n sharon refused...

update soon sis...

awosme update
thnx for pm

Originally posted by: ...pujan...

awesom update...

kria accepted n sharon refused...

update soon sis...

Aww..so sweet..di aap kafi filmy ho..i luv it

reyam confession was awesome loved it mindblowing

Pyar part 3 was awesome...but ending seemed to b abrupt...
Pls isko continue karne ki try karna...