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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Nice update and thanks for the pm :-) glad you've updated after months

Nikki <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
superb mujey iska pm kabhi mila hi nahi tu pm send b karti hey ki nahi i have doubt
nivya tera kya hoga
but wow auperb os
thank god main asey hi ghoom rhi thi or j mol gya
wow i love this
update soon sweetie
mujey pta tha wo girl kriya hi ho the great kriya ghai
nd hahaha sab ki band baj rhi hey pehley sharon
then raghav
ab to poori team hi uski game dekh k
superb
ab update fast
i can't wait so update kar isey
kya baat kya baat kya baat
waiting for kriyaansh megic
lu
aroma

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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
it was terrific love til core
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy

Nice update and thanks for the pm :-) glad you've updated after months


Nikki <3



ty!!

m glad aftr updating 😉

@aroma didi : u'll also feel great aftr updating! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: anniemathias

it was terrific love til core




thank you! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: aroma.arsha

superb mujey iska pm kabhi mila hi nahi tu pm send b karti hey ki nahi i have doubt
nivya tera kya hoga
but wow auperb os
thank god main asey hi ghoom rhi thi or j mol gya
wow i love this
update soon sweetie
mujey pta tha wo girl kriya hi ho the great kriya ghai
nd hahaha sab ki band baj rhi hey pehley sharon
then raghav
ab to poori team hi uski game dekh k
superb
ab update fast
i can't wait so update kar isey
kya baat kya baat kya baat
waiting for kriyaansh megic
lu
aroma


acha laga ki aap ko accha laga...
muje bhi itni badi comment likhni hai aapke thread pe!! 😉
n pm ke bareme also i'll c!
lu
❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

ty!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98

Part 3

Few days later…

By now kreya was part of the basketball team…and also the group…raghav had ask ria out, and they were in love…. Swayum and Sharon who believed in love were finding love…and rey & kreya who did not believed in love were……falling for each other!!

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Will the girls accept their love

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The night before tournament! Kreya was in the court practicing…Sharon was in her room ….rey went to kreya…. And swayum went to Sharon…

---at the bb court----

R: hiiee kreya…

K: hie rey!

R: ii….main…tum…hum

K: kya ho gaya hai aapko?

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Sh: kya ho gaya swayum?

Sw:Sharon, maine yeh baat kabse kehna chaata tha!

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K: haan bolo rey… kya bolna chate the?

R: I don't know kahan se start karo…

K: yeh kaisa sawal hai!!

Rey steps forward…and puts his finger on kreya's lip "Ssshhhssshh"

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Sharon went numb….swayum's finger was still on sharon's lip….sharon was looking into swayums's eyes…and swayum could only see Sharon…and the air started moving…making sweet sound…

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Kreya got back into her senses! She stepped back….her movement got rey back into his senses too…

K: kya kehen hai aapko?

R: jab se tumhe dekha hai…tabse tum hii aati ho mere khayalo maine….

She turned her back to rey…

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Sw: jab tum mere saath hoti ho tab lagta hai ki waqt yahin tam jahey….aur maine tumhe yunhi dekha karu..

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R: ankhen bandh karta hun toh tum dekti ho…aakhen kholta hun ….toh sif tumhe dekhna chata hun….

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Sw: tumhare saath bitaya hua har paal pyaar ho jata hai…

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R: tumhe apna bane ka dil chata hai

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Sw: I love u Sharon…

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R: I love you kreya

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Kreya turns back….runs towards rey…and kisses him…he was first in shock…but then he got lost in the kiss…

k: I love you!

reykisses her again….

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sh: rey, u are the best person, I have ever meet….but I have my career…and I do not wanna love..i tried doing it once…ol I got is pain

sw: lekin…Sharon…

sh: I do nt love you!

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M done….!!

with this I came to end to this ss, I know silly tha….

But I just wanted toshow ke….eveyone jisko pyaar se pyaar ho….usse saacha pyaar mile aisa zaruri nahi hai…

do hit like tab...and comment

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Posted: 12 years ago
#99

One short!

Though I am a shantanu fan…I have neva thought of writing something on swaron….purely on swaron…

This isz my first swaron work….

Let's go to the update without my bakwass…

The night

I was on bed…seeing his photo…his eyes were talking to me….I was unconditionally in love with him ….i was missing him so much…that is a different thing, that it was just an hour he left me..but I cannot stay without him…not even for second…I want to be with him…forever…it should be only death which can tear us apart….love is what he does to me … love is want I do to him…. The day he proposed me in the canteen with just one rose, red rose… wow…. I was in white, and the red rose was matching my dress too…

Sharon got up from her bed…went to the music player….and "ishq wala love" started playing….and the diva's leg started dancing..on the music…with the spin...she was next to her wadrob..she opend the door..and took the red rose in her hand….her lips lightly touched the rose…she felt as if it was swayum itself…

She than started walking to towards her window, it was open and the air blew…it was like she could smell swayum…the air brought him with it…and so it was…swayum climbed the pipe..and was standing on the window…sharon thought she is dreaming…and she kissed his cheeks….swayum blushed to the core…

Abhi Sharon bina batiye..kiss karegi…toh kya hoga?

Swayum…took her face…and his lips touched her lips…it was intense, yet smooth…she was now in shock….she opened her eyes…

Sh: tum!

Sw:yes…maine!

Sh: yahan…kyun kaise…kab?

Sw: andar nahi bulaugi….gir gaya toh?

Sh: come in…

Swayum got in…

Sh: tum..yahan..kyuin..kaise…

Swayum put his finger on her lips and asked her to be quiet…she went numb…when he touched her lips..she started walking backwards…and swayum was walking with her…it was in so ryhm… she stopped as it was theend…and swayum was this close..that even air couldn't pass through them…he kissed her again….her cheeks went pink this time…she also got lost in the kiss…

Sw: maine puccha chaand se ke koi hasi hai mere yaar se…chand ne kaha chandni ki kasam koi nahi koi nahi

The lights fades off….

This is not the end to night… they toh had a really long night …it is just an end to the os…

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M done….

Hope you like it!!

ps : i have written this os... for swaron valntine week...just re-posting here!

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Posted: 12 years ago
pyaar part 3 ws awsm
loved it
Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago

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