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Caroline_arhi

@Caroline_arhi

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

WOW,

MINDBLOWING,

STUNNED ACTUALLY, At first I thought Arnav is the husband and Khushi is cheating on him, But then second update, he and her are doing this to bring down Jha?

WOW,

Unique, AMAZING, though confused with the flashback, I get a feeling I will understand when you update:D

Loved it:D

Please add me to your PM list?

PLEASE?

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

that was mind blowing... till the last sentence I couldn't guess what was happening... loved it dear... update soon

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

evil little creature that was f*****g awesome you really know how to screw with some one mind asr and khushi doing this to win an election and bring shyam down mind blowing you have me hooked continue soon thanks for the pm

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KaaminiJha

@KaaminiJha

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

this is sinful.

but tempting.

I'm Intoxicated!

Do continue!

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oh.petite.one

@oh.petite.one

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

whoa *speechless*

now that was unexpected... LOL

brilliantly written 👍🏼

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frenzyy

@frenzyy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

awwsum!! so arnav s her husband & they wanna bring shyam down?

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

So you mean to say arnav knew abt shyam nd khushi and he is okay because he want to win elections...well i guess i m sounding scandlized but tell u the truth i m bit...lol...
But the concept is interesting...

Edited by Audiwalia - 13 years ago

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Sarah

@Crazy_1001

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Wait W*F?! He's pimping khushi!? BAHAHAH Oh man that is just so awesome!!

Didn't expect this for the life of me but I am totally loving it!

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--Sobi--

@--Sobi--

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

So I reserved somewhere in the back pages...and I have totally forgotten which page it was..and I am too lazy to go and find it!!!😆

Long story cut short...I am commenting once more.

I just see that you have updated chapter 2 too!!!

I am loving the story...I love dark and evil stories...and this is one hell of a story!!!

Edited by ss374 - 13 years ago