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Varsha

@Psychedelic

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

I did not see that one coming so you have one less person to be worried about being in you head! :P

The plot is scandalous and I'm loving it!!

Your Khushi is awesomeness personified! And Arnav is as always hot. And the cockiness suits him. Glad to see Aman here. Shyamu is once again a Kameena. Is Anjali his poor wife? Damn! Cant wait for more.

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sweetieangel

@sweetie_angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

okay im very very confused can some one explain whats happeningwho was the fellow in the 1st chapter? plz dont say shyaam

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M

@boyznaka

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Two chapters and I say this is one of the best stories I've read. Lady, this enthralled me. I can't help but marvel at and imagine the whole set-up. This is epic!

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Damn woman!

Well color me surprised!

I didn't think Arnav would be the betrayed husband, so not the type, but I did think he would be the cheater!

Aw man! You stole my secret affair, forbidden sex fantasy! No fair Arisai!

But, I loved it!

This is so sooo different!

Don't listen to any *ahem* nice people with *ahem* nice opinions.

Write it the way you want to!

Cause...*drumroll please* You're sexy and you know it!!!😆

Edited by BlueMystique - 13 years ago

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darkblossom900

@darkblossom900

Explorer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

All I have to say is... WOW.

Okay so, I had to read it twice to sorta get it and still I'm confused LOL.

Beginning is awesome... I usually don't read stories like this because it's just not my type but good start!

Also, I have to mention.. I read alooot of fanfictions and I've never seen a story like this dude! :)

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

That's what we call a Mahatwist! both are screwing up Jha?

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Abi

@PepsiGirl101

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Right now I am...

Confused= YES

Interested= Very Much😃

Shocked= A lot 😲

but HOOKED = HELL YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤣

The sexy Khushi and ruthless Arnav...BWAHAHA! 😈What a couple!!! 👏

LOVE THE UPDATE!!!! 😆 Thanks for the PM!

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EvrydayIRabbaVe

@evrydayirabbave

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

omg that was too good pm me when ou update, please 😊

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SedonaScarlet

@SedonaScarlet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

M5 AGAIN! <3

I wonder what the dynamics of Arnav and Khushi's relationship is.I initially thought that they dont feel anything for each other but then the last few lines changed that.

Poor Shyam,always the infedile husband :P

Loved the update ! :D

Thanks for the PM :)

Cant wait for you to continue :D

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