ArHi FF: Never Let Go - Ch1 Updtd n pg12 18thJun12 - Page 15

Originally posted by: vish94

hey! i just read the prologue and character introduction.

i love the story but i have to point one thing out - not to put u down, only tryin to help. i think u hagot akash's age wrong. cuz u said when their parents died, anjali was 19 arnav 17 and akash 14. according to that, akash and arnav are three years apart.

but in the 2012 part, u ahve said arnav is 24 and akash 23. only one year difference. get my point???

otger than that of course i m confusd right nw as the porlogue n all is complicated but uwrite amazingly well and am looking forward to readin this FF!

CHEERS!

hi! thanks a lot 4 pointing that out!!..fixed it😃

nice starttt...

nice update.


thanks 4 d pm

a very intresting concept in this...cant wiat to see how u have shaped arnavs character...loving payal...this is...how she shuld have been...

awesome start 👍🏼 always wanted to see Payal like this! all protective over Khushi

Nice start!

im a little confused with the story. 😕 i just need to read it again.

Loved d FB..it was so touching..innocent love..bt later so ruthlessly snatched away..wat hppnd dat khushi's in coma!?..its so painful to c her in dis state..
loved payal..she's fierce n protective..like a mother..it must b so dfficult for her to c her sis like dis..
btw,sorry for commenting late..my net was nt workin 4 d last 42hrs😕