ArHi FF: Never Let Go - Ch1 Updtd n pg12 18thJun12

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Interesting...can't wait to find out why K is on coma...where is A? Not by her side...paying for her hospital bills??

-Sona

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rkapoor1382

@rkapoor1382

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Amazing start...
Wat had happend tht today khushi is in coma???
Continue soon

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bakula_gandhi

@bakula_gandhi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Great part

loved the way you have described payal's feelings, both while fighting with the present and while remembering the past

waiting to know what has happened to khushi

continue soon

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#164

Update was very well written. You have described payal's thoughts beautifully, her attempt to bring her sister back to life.

But what has happened to khushi

waiting for the next part

continue soon

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#165

great start

please PM me with updates

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Pooja

@poolovesarnav

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#166

Ohh so different from other FFs...cant wait :)

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Susmita M

@sman2195

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#167

Dearest,

sorry for the late reply.. yes love the story concept. loved the starting. can't wait to find out more. and i am ok with the slow progress of the story.. take your time... and keep me updated...

i wonder what happened, as to why khushi is in coma?

thank u for the last pm... can't wait to read the next big. keep going.. take care..

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anuramesh26

@anuramesh26

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#168

very well written! a wonderful concept. arnav seemed to love her in the prologue! OMG she had mentioned smething abt shyam to arnav. Is it bcos of shyam that she is in this condition? AND I SO TOTALLY IN WORSHIP OF YOUR CHARACTERISATION OF PAYAL! KEEP WRITING AND COULD YOU PM PLS.