SS aRhI: Once upon a Secret CH 4 updated pg 73- 28 NOV 2014

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Yellow.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

woww that was great start dear's!! everybody is having secrets... looking forward for story to unfold

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

awesome...update soon coz i cant wait to read more

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rashgirl000

@rashgirl000

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

awesome update.

great start. each and every character is playing its own special role.

almost all of the charachter knows shyam's truth.

who is mamaji following?

and who told anjali the truth about shyam?

and y buaji revealed the truth now? so many questions.

loved the first chapter.

pls update soon. waiting.

brilliantly written.👏 loved the prologue. kinda understood. i think😆

thanks for the pm.

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priyah_reddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Brillaint start to the FF 👏👏👏

Woah everyone is hiding something 😉

Glad Khushi has her brother with her 😊

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hiddenpearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

You both are awesome dear...damn good story...so interesting...thanks god in a very first chapter one truth is out.some what ARHI part is clear !!can't wait to read more...fab work dears...thanks for the pm..update soon we all waiting

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smiley4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Story sounds interesting. Waiting to read more.

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prpk525

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Too many secrets...

Great start.. Continue soon..

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.Saraa.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

wow,,nice start..loved it soo..from everyone's pov..loved the 1st update..found really interesting..cant wait for more

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Sakshi Kaul

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

woah! first off, brilliant title! It completely reflects the central idea of the story and its catchy! EVERYONE has secrets...we know that about life, but the way you introduce curiosity and suspense into your writing, Bravo! I loved every word of it, and I can't wait to read the update!