SS aRhI: Once upon a Secret CH 4 updated pg 73- 28 NOV 2014

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Wow! Great start! Awesome concept! Can't wait to read more!

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-JollyJabeen-

@-JollyJabeen-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Damn. Why am i always late!? -.-

Loved the update, Hmmm debating with myself who wrote it, Lyra or Harsh!? 😆😳

It was fantastic, I love how you not only wrote about the pain and brutal way Khushi was being manhandled, Arnav's regret and pain but you also added the other characters! WOOHOO!

The highlight of part 1. Anjali and her lover! YESSS 😳

And awww! Khushi has a brother? Karan! Awww!<3

Do update soon, This sound interesting! 😉

P.S DID I MENTION IS LOVE MADHUMATI! HAAAI RE NANDKISHORE! 😛

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mayabegum

@mayabegum

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

wow this was a great start im loving it and hooked onto it already i have sent you a buddy request so please PM whenever you update :)

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nature-lover

@nature-lover

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

What a fantastic concept totally loved it. I'm a regular follower of both Harshu and Lyraa works. Good to see both if you writing together as it will b a double treat 😃

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Loved this new FF, very interesting start. Please PM me Harshu, will send you a buddy request.

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Abi

@PepsiGirl101

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

AWWW!

Will you believe me when I tell you 'm hooked already!?! That was so heart breakingly beautiful!

I absolutely love ARHI FF's where Arnav has to prove his love. Can't wait, great start gals!

-Yours Truly, Abi ❤️

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Preeti.

@-LiveMyLife-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

That was awesome! I loved it, it was written so amazingly.

Thanks for the PM and continue soon

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Jasleen

@Jasleen

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Great first part Lyraa and Harsh! You both are amazing writers, can't wait to read more!!!

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--drama_queen--

@--drama_queen--

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

OMG when i opened my inbox i nearly fainted when i saw the msg that u sended me 😆 i got sosoosos excited nd quickly clicked on the msg nd click on the link nd read the FF 😆

it was an amazing FF 👏

i truly loved it 😃

i cant cant cant wait to read more 😃

plzz continue soon nd thank u soososos much for the PM 🤗

you and harshu are an amazing writer 👏👏

love you two sosososososos much 🤗