SS aRhI: Once upon a Secret CH 4 updated pg 73- 28 NOV 2014

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Soulmate27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Gosh...ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT 👏

Just loved all their secrets 😉

Esp the angst feelings of asr n khushi n their growing apart...
Very well described...wld luv to see how the tables are turned into trust betwn both...

Thank u sweeties for the pm...

I am really honoured to get to read ur writings...thanx for sharing 😃

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Deepthi

@ToxicLove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Aweeesome! I was just thinking this morning about this track and you delivered it in beautiful way. I cant wait to read further story. Please Update soon.

Great Start and I loved the way you guys wrote each scene involving all the family members.

Thanks a ton.

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Yuks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Okay, this was like seriously interesting. Im so intrigued.
Everyone has a secret it seems

Im waiting for more!!!!

Yuks

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

Oh boy! That was some start.
Awesome job.

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ssatny

@ssatny

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Wow!!! Any more secrets in the family? My head is spinning!! But eagerly waiting for your next update. LOVED IT!!!

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spurthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

fabulous!!!!
loved it,so arnav finally knows the truth
plz continue soon

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sweetygirl28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

hey first things first.. congrats harshu and lyraa on the new FF...

the very first chapter was a blast! i really felt very sorry for khushi. and then she meeting karan who is her brother is very suspense filled. anji meets someone in the temple i think its karan. and she hates shyam too!

mama has some affair or so mami assumes ROFL... and last not the least buaji nailed it by telling arnav the truth. WOW!!!! so many things happening in the very first chapter. Awesome... Brilliant work girls.. u ppl rock!! :)

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723461

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

NO WORDS. likre really.
like tooth fairies, you'll fulfilled my desire in less than a week.
and omg, this story...brillliant!
im a sucker for regret tracks just hope arnav doesnt it well.
and this karan sounds ilke all the yashs, adityas, shauryas in the world! anjali's partner ehh?
love you guys and update soon!