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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#91

This update was simply fabulous. Loved the gang and their undersatnding. They understood so quickly about the situation and didn't bothered them . SwaRon's ride was real ( thank u for that ) becuse i too would have not liked filmy things . But for me the best part was Swayam and his mom convo . It was really awesome and very real.

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Loved the complete feel of this update. The gang seems to have matured over the years.

Loved the close to real life *perfect* drive of SwaRon.

You sure made Sharon looks so cute, with everything she did and said.

The mother son talk was very sweet, loved it.

Who said we aren't waiting for an update, we are and if you had not updated in a day or two, i would have stalked your page for an update. 😉

Waiting for the next update already, and Thanks for the PM.

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oindrila585

@oindrila585

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

it was great!!!!keep up the good work!!!

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sravani

@Blessedfool

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: d3lover90
cute one... ahahh super cute one :p
love gang reaction..
hope sharon confess soon ...
pls update soon..

Thanks a lot :)

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sravani

@Blessedfool

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: rhu90
awesome and loved it... pm nahin mila...

You dint get the PM...guess what I need lessons on how to send a PM :( :( I tried my best to send it to everyone ...I'm sorry next time will make sure you get PM...thanks a lot for your comment and also for letting me know that u dint get the PM :)

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sravani

@Blessedfool

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: Sawyer_Tom
Don't ever think that nobody is waiting for your update. This story is damn interesting. I was waiting eagerly for the next part. But I failed to express it. But that's only because I hardly get time to update my own FF let alone comment on other people's FF. I read only a handful of FFs now and yours is among the few. Though now I think I should really take out time to comment on them as well. Anyways I really wanna see how they confess their love to each other. Till now they are just skirting around it, telling it to other people but not to each other. So really wanna know what happens next. Do update soon. Sorry for not commenting earlier.

Thanks a lot.Well,I thought I was grading it making you all mad.I'm glad you liked it.Comments mean a lot.It takes hell lot of time to write it and then edit it.Also to add the bold italic etc..etc..It's only after I started I understood the value of comments.Thanks a lot for you comment.As I said earlier they mean a lot.

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sravani

@Blessedfool

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: marauder
This update was simply fabulous. Loved the gang and their undersatnding. They understood so quickly about the situation and didn't bothered them . SwaRon's ride was real ( thank u for that ) becuse i too would have not liked filmy things . But for me the best part was Swayam and his mom convo . It was really awesome and very real.

Ohhh I'm so happy ...I wanted to make it real...was fed up with all girls running around in the rain getting wet ect etc...which gal would actually go out and dacne 😆 I never did.I hate rains

It was very difficult to write the conversation between swayam and his mom...considering that most of the IF members stay out of india...my idea of marriage ...thought wouldn't go well with the readers.Very happy you found it real :)

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sravani

@Blessedfool

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK
Loved the complete feel of this update. The gang seems to have matured over the years.
Loved the close to real life *perfect* drive of SwaRon.
You sure made Sharon looks so cute, with everything she did and said.
The mother son talk was very sweet, loved it.
Who said we aren't waiting for an update, we are and if you had not updated in a day or two, i would have stalked your page for an update. 😉
Waiting for the next update already, and Thanks for the PM.

Ohhh thanks a lot...It took so much of time...to write this...I'm glad you all liked it and my efforts paid off :) :) ...sharon is cute i know :D she indeed is :) Thanks a lot for your comment :) :) they mean a lot