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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Shobhu21-

Rae !!
😡 My lappy is such a big idiot, galti se saara erase ho gaya !! And mene itna lamba likha tha !! So if this one isnt satisfactory then blame my lappy !1

This update was just... !! I dont have words, seriously !! Just look up for the best word and put it there OK ?? You know , I just realised something after reading this update... All your characters have one thing common !! They share this *if only* moment which could have totally changes their lives forever !! And then my lappy decides to play yaariyaan while I was reading the update and my mind went numb !!


'If only' is such a terrible emotion to have...they all share it, yes...but dont we all?

The first part !! Nisha !! She knows sh shouldnt have done it, and I guess even Im like silly Nisha, you shouldnt have done it !! And now what the use of begging !! But then the way you make her sound, so vulnerable in dire need of her friend... And Armaan being the only one she can ever approach !! Armaan !! He must be hurt... Very hurt by what she did !! But Im just hoping that somehow they realise that as much as they are hurt, they just understnad that staying together as friends is better for them !! And then the last line about Nisha being a neurosurgeon and her proffesional and personal life being the same !! where she cuts nerves !! First breakdown for this update !! So a hug goes out to Nisha🤗

Yep. Nisha has had the first breakdown...but to what avail? Will it do anything or just push her deeper in despair?

And Sharman !! I dont truly get this guy !! I mean he loves Nisha irrevocably, that is pretty evident by the way he thinks about the memories he has , but then why let her go ??!! was the situation really so bad that he had to loose Nisha ? And in a way himself too ??!!! I feel bad for him tooo !!

Evidently it was. More on this very soon. But think about it this way...Arnav loves Khushi irrevocably too but he isnt with her either...why did they all let go, is the question.

And Nani giving Arnav those payals... And I was like shit ! Im in for some emotional update !! Payals and Arnav share a very weird relationship !! They bring back some of the best and the worst moments he's ever shared with her !! And that just made him hating himself more than ever , didnt it ?? And I couldnt help but feel so sad for him that I had to cry out ... He truly is stuck in a very horrible position... Having to answer so many people, keeping so many people , and in the whole process forgetting himself, dying himself !! And I ... I just wanna hug Arnav here 🤗 You truly are an amazing writer Rae, the way you just made me feel about Arnav here... I dont know... i'll probably feel tooo happy to have befriended you !!

Hahahahahahaha! The last line is so cute! :)

And yes, Arnav is in a terrible place...like all the rest.

And Payals and Arnav do share a strange relationship...sigh.

And the last part... Khushi !! I knew she was sad... knew how much ever she was inside her shell, she was very very hurt, vulnerable, as much as Arnav here !! And when she cries, seems like she's almost pleading the heavens for some thing that would change her life, take her back to where she left her heart and soul, take her to Arnav !! And then the last line

Every romantic movie she had seen had just been proved wrong.

Damn !! That just made me cry !! This woman, is so hurt !! ... I feel , I dont know !! I wanna hug Khushi !!🤗 !! I cant say anything beyond this .. *gulp* This update was crazily emotional rae !! Loved it beyond words !!

You want to hug everyone and I like it because that is what I aim for...feelings for each character because that is what will make the journey more meaningful... :)

PS: By the way i realised this turned out llonger than the previous comment, so you can be happy now😉

Take that, computer! ;) :D


🤗
AngelTeen thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

What The!

LOL!
...Doctor... thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Rae update!


Please Rae!

AngelTeen thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ri_luvs_ArShi

I read the update yesterday but couldn't comment cause my mum was watching me whether I am studying or not😆

I wanted to comment but then she was like "What are you typing?!" then I stopped...God Parents!😕

So enough blabbering!
Did I tell you that I really admire Sharman in your FF?He is so cute and he never gave up to win over Nisha's "I love you".I can also understand Armann...I think I would have done the same...but I am really emotional so I think I would just run after Nisha and forget my ego.Well,I am not so strong like Armann...and I am feeling really jealous of this😆
And your analysis of the diwali scene...It felt like that the scene is playing infront of me...Oh God Arnav misses her so much...Why the hell doesn't he go back to Khushi and fight for her? I can't see him so broken.
Now to Khushi...I have no words...Seriously...I don't know what to say.My heart cries for her.Damn! I can't even think of living so many without the man I love and not to mention seeing him marrying to an another woman...but Khushi...Hell!!

But you know what...I am upset about this: Nisha Arnav Singh Raizada...NO!!! NAHIII!!!! Woh Khushi ka suhaag hai...Ek chukti sindoor ki kimaat tum kya jano Rae😆


You do know that the whole story is based on whether she actually becomes Nisha Arnav Singh Raizada and if she does, then what happens or how it happened and if she doesnt, then why and how and what next? ;) :D

Besides, Nisha Arnav Singh Raizada isnt that unattractive a name...it sounds pretty good actually...not as good as Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada but she wasnt ever that, was she? ;) :D

And about the rest - Thank You so much! :)

Glad you are enjoying the story and the characterization.
...Doctor... thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Arnav: Rae I'm always with you.


Arnav: Come hold my hand.



Arnav: Now update sweetheart!

AngelTeen thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom

EDIT **


Okay, so I finished reading the whole thing yesterday night at around 1:40 and believe me, I'm very very angry! WHy did you have to write so brilliantly! There had been only Lyraa whose writings had hit my heart and then this! Every part I read about Arnav's attitude towards Nisha and then Khushi, I was totally ripping apart!

The whole point of hollowness and learning to lie, crying to sleep! It ached! It hurts!

I honestly don't know what to say!

on the plus point, i'm very confused about NIsha. She doesn't believe in love and marriage but then she holds Sharman responsible for a mistake! I'm curious! UPDATE SOON!

and once again, after reading the first two chapter I never guessed that it will unravel this way but hats off to you!


Thank You so much! :)

Glad you are liking it and enjoying my writing and characterizations.


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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh Hello! :)



What do we have here? :D
...Doctor... thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally varsha, you're here!
Rae this is for you.

AngelTeen thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Psychedelic

Oh Hello! :)



What do we have here? :D


Was nahin...was, is and always will be. <3

And Hello Varsha. *shakes head* :p

PS - Varsha, go read new OS. :p
Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Psychedelic

I am beyond late and for that I apologise!

Wow. Khushi's outburst made me cry. My heart totally goes out to her. She is in so much pain, not only has she been wrongly implicated for something she had no part in, she has also been rejected not once or twice but thrice by the only person her heart beats for. It pains me that she has been reduced to a state where she is questioning her own worth. I hate Arnav for doing that to her but he himself seems so tortured. Why are circumstances so bleak!

Armaan and Nisha. Yeah. Cutting yourselves off especially from the ones close to you is more than just a sign of self destruction. But thats how people's minds work, we are all flawed at the end of the day. I would have hoped Armaan would give her some support because she seems to be needing it now more than ever.

The payals and the background music. I played Soona Mann ka aangan while reading this. It was so hauntingly beautiful!

Amazing work Rae! You have successfully pulled me along with the characters into the depths of their despair!


Same here but Armaan is hurt too...and beyond that he is just amazed at how "me and you against the world" mein se he was thrown out when the chance to actually prove it came...

And Khushi is wrongly implicated or so you think, yes, but none of them are in the right place or perhaps all of them are not wrong yet nothing is write...the prologue dialogue. :)

Thank You! :)

Glad you liked it,

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