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...Doctor... thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Come on Rae update now.

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And the reply to your comment is on the page before. :)
Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: insanelycrazy

okay this is an awesome story, and it took me yesterday and today to get the hang of it.! 😆 love the conflicts all characters are facing and their dynamics, and how you're portraying each one' state of mind and emotional turmoil . poor khushi thinks that arnav has gotten over her but he hasn't and she just wants to be proved wrong. for some reason i can't wait for khushi and nisha to meet.. i think its going to be really calm and everything :)

Do you? Hmmm...assuming they meet that is. ;) :D

i love how you're slowly executing the plot and we're getting the answers. its like everybody is living in their own shell and dealing with their pasts and just forgetting the present which is something the focus should be on. anjali and nani dealing with khushi and trying help arnav over it,(i have a feeling there is more to nani than she or you've let on) while the protagonists are dealing with their lost loves and lives. W*F happened with sharman and nisha?!!! 😲 i'm guessing after the marriage, sharman couldn't really keep up to his promise, and something related to his mother, cus he has sense of bitterness for the mom.?😕 their meeting was so painfull and heart breaking. i just wanted him to hug her and tell her everything will be okay!! 😭 i loved how you distinguishes his easy going nature to what he is now, living in his own hell, but still he just wants nisha to be happy. loved arnav-sharman scene, i was expecting sharman to go all fist on arnav but he didn't :) that was kind of sweet, and i don't know y but i just have a feeling it was a sign of future companionship.

Ah! Finally someone who I dont have to tell to give all characters a chance! YAY! You got that on your own! Yes, there is more to Nani, more to NiSh, more to ArHi, more to NiAr...yep, more and more to come if we get there! :)

And Arnav and Sharman didnt have a conflict because they had no reason to have a conflict. Sharman knows she doesnt love him, he harbours no MU about it but he cant help it and she doesnt want to listen either...its a terrible situation...but there is more to them which makes them this way...and yes, you caught right about his mother. Hold on to it. :)

the part where arnav is hurting, while hurting khushi but keeps doing it to console his brain, was painful. its like he wants to believe that khushi's not at fault, but he's gone so ahead with his cruel treatment, he rather have her be wrong, than deal with his own demons and detest his existence for the rest of his life. he's so confused 😒"Rakh rahi thi ya phir..." he didn't complete the sentence, really because he couldn't say the words he knew would pierce her soul but he told himself that he didn't need to. i felt so bad for khushi here!! :'( i think here was when all her hopes were crushed and she just gave up, because knowing her nature, she's somebody who's very vocal but here she's like screw this shit man, i'm done proving my self!! aaah sooo sadd!!

Ah. I like how you are talking about all the important moments. Yes, he behaved terribly knowing he was behaving terribly but he is ASR, he is egged on by ego and arrogance...now look where he finds himself because of them?

And yes, Khushi got tired of fighting back with no hope...sigh.

and waise where is that shyaam? is he dead, or is there a backstory with him and anjali even today? loved the khushi-garima bond, and how she understands what her daughter is going through.

The Raizadas know the truth about Shyam but his back story in context to this will come soon. :)

She was a neurosurgeon after all - precise clean cuts were her life. love the irony in that line. her life is all cut off with relationships, and feelings and its something she resents, but that's exactly what she does for a living, and later on that's exactly what she did to her best friend, no matter how much it broke her. the different layers to her character is one of my favourite things here! and omg her and armaan waala scene was sooo sad!! :'( his outburst was soo painfull, he finally let it all out. the anger and hurt took over the bitterness both of them were masking, i'm sure it was hard for armaan too to lose his best friend, but he had the woman he loved and other friends, where as this poor girl was all alone, with not a single shoulder. i can't wait for their further conversations and how they deal with. i hope they sort things out, with that nisha will have at least somebody for her comfort.

He did. Hope they figure it out because at least someone finally took the first step. :)

and the arnav khushi dance gave me goosebumbs!! 😳 beautifully written. the possesiveness and the love, but again stupid misunderstanding.

and i wanna know wat the deeper side is which akash keeps referring to, i bet it doesn't just end with nani being arnav's mother's mother!! i've got theories, but they're all stupid, so i'm gonna keep them to myself :D ^_^ and wat's with nani being all mean to khushi? i have this weird feeling either she's in denial(not just denial but some ailment, which might risk her life?) or she doesn't know the whole truth and arnav wasn't strong enough to reveal it to the happily for the sake of anjali's happiness.

I'd like to read the theories. :)

Maybe she knows something else, thinks about something and isnt a barmy old bat most readers have taken her to be? Maybe she has reasons for being this way...

awesome story!! :) :) i loved it :D

Thank You! :)

p.s. man!! this is long.. sorry i just kept going on and on and on :/ I love such comments! :)
p.p.s. is it kind of a dill mill gayye crossoverish? Nope. :) Just has some characters from it, most important being Armaan isliye dont expect any DMG back stories. :)


Thank You! :)
...Doctor... thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
I'm going. Bye!! 😔

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Posted: 13 years ago

Reading and commenting on Meera's update. :p
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AngelTeen


Reading and commenting on Meera's update. :p



Awww! Me too! What a brilliant update!

Aap kab update kar rahi ho madame?
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!!!!!!!! How did I miss your Ff's? I read your os somedays back, "I Know you" and it literally blew me away! And so I stared stalking and here I am:D This ff is super amazing! Love Arnav , Nisha, Khushi and Sharman! I am just reading all your works and once I am done i will comment :D But could you pls send me pm's for your future works? Thank you for being such a awesome writer!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Psychedelic



Awww! Me too! What a brilliant update!

Aap kab update kar rahi ho madame?


Dekhiye, hum hamesha sach bolte hain.

Update ready hai par post karne ka mann nahin hai. ;) :D

And yes, Meeraji, brilliant work!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aapka mann kitna laalchi hai! *shakes head*

Be back soon! :P
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: BlueMystique

Hi Rae!

God woman! You are making it a mission to make me cry, aren't u? First with finally, and RT, and now this! You are evil! Yes. That is true. ;) :D

So Nisha cut Armaan off from her life? Why? She ran away, but what was so bad that she ran AWAY from the one person who was her shoulder to cry on before. And looks like Armaan doesn't know the reason why. But does everyone else hate her because of this. Because she cut Armaan off or for some other reason? Mainly because of that...when she could cut off Armaan, baakiyon ki kya aukaat thi? :p


And its not like Armaan doesnt know why...its just that Armaan doesnt understand why. She ran away 3 years ago, so that was obviously after her marriage ended so she was in a bad place...anyway, more on it as we go on.

I loved Garima's part in the update. She knows both sides of the hurt, had experienced it infact. I hope her talk with Nisha, helps nisha see just how much of a mess herlife would become if she did get married to Arnav. BTW are Arnav and Khushi legally divorced yet? I don't remember u mentioning that!

They are as are NiSh. Shall mention it properly in one of the updates. And I enjoyed writing Garima...so glad you liked her part. :)

Nisha! OMG! My heart breaks for her! For a person to be so broken, that she cannot accept the love that is so clearly there, what did her parents do!? Why is she so adamant about not loving sharman?

Because she doesnt trust the emotions. Why? We will get to there...abhi sirf hints. :)

And Sharman! He was so loving, so caring, and so sweet when she told him! What happened? Did he break her trust somehow? Why? How? When? Kyun? Gah! I need some answers Rae! Answers!

Lol! You will get them soon enough.

And I want ArHi to meet! or atleast Nisha to meet Khushi, please?

You do, really? Lets see. ;) :D

The scene with the payal! It always breaks my heart! That was their realization scene, only for Arnav to be a dick and break her heart! But now his heart is breaking and I seem to not be able to see him suffer! Please do something Rae! Please?

What can I do? He got himself in this mess! :p

Update soon! UPDATE!!!!!😆


Thank You! :)

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