*MN FF~Inconvenient relationship* Last part 142 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
Awesom part
loved it
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
my gosh mayank ko kia hua hai ?
nice update...
but still m confuse abt their relationship
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
nice part...
but i think Nupur needs to grow up n be a little practical..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
Nice part,loved Mayur convo on ph.
continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Writer Note

Thank u so much everyone for ur such an over

Welcoming responce and beautiful comments🤗🤗means a lot to me, 🤗🤗🤗i hope u ll liked the coming parts.

Maria...remember me in ur prayers🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Inconvenient relationship

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Part3

"Can't you hold yourself in front of everyone?" He regarded her coldly

She backed off immediately realizing her mistake and looked at her mother who was glaring her, her act turned out like this she'd not imagined, her cheeks flushed with embarrassment. She lowered her eyes, her face crumpled. "I'm sorry. Really."

Words came out like a whisper and she looked up hesitantly; Mayank took deep breath calming down his temper and muttered something giving her glare.

"I think we should go now" He announced and bid bye to Mansi and Diya backed towards the door followed by Nupur. She kept the tears back until the door was shut and she was out of her house, and then they came in a hot rush that left her depleted and sore. She wiped off her tears as he turned back to look her, "Nupur please, don't walk slow we are already get late"

"I am coming" she mumbled taking big step and get in car, her excitement had been faded somewhere, from the morning she was planning to make this evening beautiful for both of them, From the couple of weeks she was desperately waiting to spend some time with Mayank and when the Day finally came, it was getting turning the same way like it had always.

"Ermm..Nupur"finally his voice grabbed her attention and she came out of her trance, "Uh-huh!!!"She mumbled looking at him with her lashes waited him to spoke and he took long moment to say further it seemed he was finding words to say something, "Ermm.. You are looking Nice"

Her eyes widened in surprise and then fluttered, she couldn't believe she'd heard him right, it threw her totally off stride, but she recovered quickly and flushed grin, "Thanks"

she felt her heart skip a couple of times reminding his words finally something had good happened in this evening and with this like always she forgot completely what had happened few minutes before'

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Nupur followed him inside the huge restaurant and finally pacing after five minutes, they got the table at the one of corner, sitting on chair in comfortable position he lifted his gaze at her who was still standing looking around,
"Nupur please will you take seat" he grabbed her attention with his voice and she titled her head giving him disappointed look, "Mayank ,can not we go somewhere else?"She pouted looking around, though it was huge restaurant but each and every table was booked, how could they spend some time alone here in this huge restaurant?

"What is so bad in this restaurant? You know its one of expensive restaurant in the city" he rolled his eyes adding sarcasm in his statement, she backed off at his sarcastic statement and it raised her temper, he was so unromantic.

"Do you think we can spend some time alone here in the presence of many people? You are so unromantic Mayank" she almost shouted in frustration at him and following his gaze she looked around and realized everyone were seeing these two of them, she gasped in embarrassment and hesitantly titled her neck to see his glimpse whose face was now flushing in anger, she swallowed a lump formed in her throat and whisper gathering her all courage, "I'm'sorry"

"Take your seat" his authorized tone did not let her to speak further and her eyes traveled hesitantly among the rest of the diners before fixing at his face. She knew she had been made mistake and now it was almost impossible to mend things, He beckoned to a waiter and gave him ordered.

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Now its really getting irritated for her, they were on "Dinner Date" ohh excluded date she slapped her mind to adding these word and corrected herself, forget it let it be 'only dinner'

10 minutes had been passed since he gave her look though she had been said him sorry for shouting at him but he was still in no mood to talk to her.

"Mayank,I have been said sorry then why are not you talking with me?"

He lifted his gaze at her, "I am not angry at you, you talk I am listening" he sipped his juice finshing his rice; she took deep breath giving him long glance, "Listen Mayank!!You are my fiance..i mean I have right to spend some time alone with you, I know you are not comfortable with the 'Date' idea. But can't you make our small meetings little romantic and memorable for me, we met after couple of weeks and you did not even hug me gave me kiss, I know for you these are cheap things but for me they are 'Love gestures'"

She stared deep in his eyes and keeping the juice of glass aside on table he regarded at her giving serious look.

"So you want to say, I should behave like 'Teenage Lover"I should give you kiss all the time, give you hug in front of our elders or everyone and'."

"I did not mean it'"he cut short by her and followed her serious gaze..

"I just want to feel your love for me, I just want to see your little gestures of love that engulf my heart with your love"

"you know I am not that kind of person who being love sick roaming around you, I AM like this, why don't you try to understand me, you know I don't like all this" he took deep breath trying to hold his temper..

"Look Nupur,you know very well you are part of my life then why do you want me to say these words again and again? Why don't you for once understand me, For God sake.I am not a Teenage boy, I have my own responsibilities including you, but I don't like your childish behavior, today how much I get embarrassed in front of your mother and now here."

"My love for you is My Childish Behavior??" she gets aggressive at his statement and stared in his eyes for confirmation feeling something wet in her eyes which she tried to cover up.

"Nupur I doubt that your small brain has the capacity to think about anything except Love, well there are lots more thing in this world EXCEPT LOVE, you know I had to skiped my an important meeting for you as mom had scolded me in the morning for not giving time to you, I just want you to understand me. "He annoyed at the fact she never tried to understand him and shook his head, her suspicions were confirmed. He'd only agreed to meet her today because Shilpa aunty had insisted, and he didn't want to upset his mother, he did not come to meet her with his own will, her black dove-shaped eyes filled with tears blurring her view, she stood up quickly, "Thanks for giving your precious time to me, I am grateful to you"

She knew her voice was shaking badly saying these words but she gathered her courage to say him looking into his eyes, leaving him there she headed towards the door,

"Nupur'please listen me'"keeping bill on table Mayank rushed towards her but he knew damaged had been done due to his tongue slip and he scolded himself for saying those words..

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here is update...i hope you will like it
Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
it was Amazingly written,well done
their relationship is really inconvenient
i loved the way you are portraying both characters
brilliant work
please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
nice part..

both of them need to understand each other
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
nice updt maria
mayank is too practical & nupur is emotional one ..both are poles apart..waiting to know how they life lead with these different characters
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
Gr8 part!!!!
its really an amazing story,Mayur are poles apart
this part is written beautifully
Nupur is cute,adorable and emotional girl while Mayank is very mature..
continue soon

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