*MN FF~Inconvenient relationship* Last part 142

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hello friends🤗 dont be surprise to see another FF of mine actually i am gonna end my two FF so thought to start another one,this is exactly opposite what i have written before,its about Relationship,the most copmplicated thing in our lives which ties us together,Relashionships demands,Love,Trust,closness,appreciation..But what happenes when we could not get these things in our relationship or we miss them somewhere ,it may lead us towards,complicated,inconvenient relationship.
i hope your appreciation will be with me in this journey😳
Love Maria (remember me in your prayers)
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pt 1...pg 1 pt2...pg 9 pt 3...pg 16 pt 4...pg 23 pt 5...pg 30 pt 6...pg 37 pt 7...pg 45 pt 8...pg 52 pt 9...pg 60 pt10..pg 68 pt 11..pg 76 pt 12...pg 82 pt 13...pg 89 pt 14...pg 97 pt 15..pg 104 pt 16...pg 111 pt 17...pg 118 pt 18...pg 128 pt 19...pg 135 Last Part...pg 142
Edited by Maria. - 12 years ago
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Inconvenient relationship

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He opened the door slowly without making noise so her sleep would not disturb and peered inside the room, taking slow step he moved towards her bed, where she was falling asleep hugging a pillow in her arms tightly, he stepped nearer her and sat beside her on bed, she fluttered her eyes feeling his scent near her and opening her eyes she swung her head to look at him who was sitting so close to her as if he wanted he could keep his lips on her, she looked at him and then smiled unbelievingly she raised her arm to pull him close to her and he smiled and pressed his palm over her cheeks leaning his face closed to her and then slightly caressed them seductively, she could feel the blood rushing in her veins and clutched the sheet in her fist, he leaned more and his warmth sharp breath touched with the flesh of her face she placed her arm around his neck and smiled shyly, he leaned more until their lips finally met she gasped taking his lower lip for kiss, Her lips were soft, neither parted nor sealed, just soft and right. She tasted good, smelled good, like baby powder and flowers, his hands roamed randomly caressing her soft skin, heating up her body with great pleasure, he was kissing her with all his heart, with all passion that she ever wished for, teasing her with his lips he wanted more, he caught her body hard in his arms pulling, smooching her under his body ,her body was getting weak with his each touch ,finally he pulled apart to give her some oxygen and she took deep breath to stable her breath and smiled looking at him then he made her sit and took her in his arms, she lay back in his arms willingly, happily, pressing his face on his chest..

"I love'."

"Nupur!!!" Someone hit her with pillow and she came out from her deep sleep with jerk and startled looking around and then finally looked at the person who was standing close to her bed.

"what ???what happened Dia?why are you screaming?and where is Mayank?"She gave her annoying look but saying those last words she again looked around to get the glimpse of that person whom she was dreaming..

"Mayank'."Dia gave look to her surrounding in confusion and then again turned her face towards Nupur whose eyes were still searching Mayank..

"Nupur,you were again day dreaming. It's almost noon now and for your kind information Mayank did not come our home."she threw herself on bed and then spoke looking at her dreamy face "Thank GOD he is not like you, sometimes I feel pity on him,Bechara he has to spend his whole life with a dramatic girl"

Dia teased Nupur and this time she got hit, "Shut up Dia.."Nupur who was already disappointed to realize it was her dream get annoyed to see her teasing..

"Nupur see your face in the mirror, you are looking like a 50's heroin with broken heart" she laughed making fun of her disappointed look and taking a pillow she again hit her hard.

"Shut up Dia,I am not in mood to listen your lame jokes"

Dia stopped giggle looking seriousness on her face and coming close to her she hugged him, "why don't you call him and talk to him"Dia suggested

And their last conversation on phone Just before bedtime last night came back to her memory..

"Nupur please try to understand, I am too much busy in my new project that I have no time even for myself. How can I take you for outning,I mean Date?"he almost replied in annoying tone correcting his last words as he did not want another fight with her at that time.It was the third time in this week when he rejected her wish, she felt her eyes pockets getting wet, how much she wanted to spend time with him, But Mayank'his first priority was his business..Only business and where would she stand? His finance, his would be wife...

"but Mayank I am missing you, its been a week we did not meet, I did not see you" tried hard to control her tears which seems like misty cloud blurring the images in front of her eyes and then they made their way and her heavy voice came out like whisper, she waited for him to say something, to say he wanted to meet her, too but as usual his reply came'

"Nupur,I am sorry but next two more weeks I am hell busy, we will go for dinner or for outing once I get finished my work and now I am really feeling sleepy ,I am tired, I will talk to you later'"

She was hurt, he had again hurt her and without giving him any reply she cut the call and threw her mobile on floor.

What do he thinks about himself? throwing her frustration, her anger on every little thing which came in her way she threw herself and fell asleep holding a pillow which he gifted her once No she corrected herself she insisted him to give her this heart shaped pillow..

"Nupur!!!"Dia shake her and she came in her senses,

"Where have you been lost? Is everything fine between you two?" Dia pressed her hand concernedly and Nupur spread faint smile on her lips, "yeah everything is fine as usual, he is busy and I don't want disturb him" saying the last words in bit sour voice she sprang out of bed, stepping towards her cupboard, and Dia understood they had fought again..

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Mayank leaned back keeping his head at the head rest flattening himself against his chair and closed his eyes for a moment to get a moment of peace but he knew it was almost the impossible thing in his life to get some peace, his morning conversation with his mother still roaming in his mind, she was hell angry at him for not giving time to his personal life, to Nupur and she had taken promise to him he will take Nupur for date'well date, the most boring thing in relationships and he hated being puppy roaming around your girlfriend, but Nupur liked it, she wanted him to praise her,tell her 24/7 that he loves her, give her his full attention, say her almost after every five minutes "I love you Nupur",

He sighed taking deep breath..

"sometimes I feel it was wrong decision to bound her in relationship, I had said to mom, she is too younger then me and I am 31 years old, a mature person, her and mine thinking, our priorities are completely different..i knew it would not the easy way,"

He opened his eyes and took his mobile after thinking a lot how to say her for dinner as he knew she was angry for last night finally he dialed her number..

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Part 2 Pg 9

here is first part,will wait for ur comments😳

Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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That was really nice part..

liked it...

That's a quite unique concept...

though yet difficult to understand

and most difficult to... feel it.. and make it in proper and convenient way...


well..

I am really looking forward for your ff...


liked it a lot...


new concept...
maria sis...
all the best for it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1...

i the first one to comment

in your new ff...




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Shefali🤗Thank u so much dear for sucha a beautiful comment..i hope u ll like it..keep reading it🤗
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heyy congrats for New FF,well its really different and unique concept,very interesting start,looking forward for it
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congrats for your new ff maria
different start & mayur characterization
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Nice Part..new concept !! loved the part...thanks for the pm..

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