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Samana Dahar

@samana

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Awesome OS.
Thanks for the PM.

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pere

@pere

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Always caught btw their brain and heart😍

And the heart always wins!

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Vishwa

@vish94

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

coming bak to comment.. wait!

*edit*

yayy!!! loved it!

hope something like this actually happens in the show!

n haillaaa!!! romance in the closet?? 😃instead of 'jungle me mangal'..u changd it to 'almari me mangal'??😉 BUAHAHAHAHA.. nicely done👏!

and arnav is one HELL of an unfair player. always making his moves when he knows khushi wont be able to declince even if she wants to, cuz she, wont hav an option!! hmmm... smart.REALLLYY smart!😳

though, of course, its not like he forced khushi! she wanted it as much as he did! 😳haha😉

well well. cheers to u!⭐️

keep it up!👏

Edited by vish94 - 13 years ago

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gowri1712

@gowri1712

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: guturgutur
well, we need to get the serial couple into a closet ASAP... the cardboard scene had its merits.. but now, closed armoires in dangerous situations seem like the perfect excuse..

wonderful OS Desi, great start to a week!👏

that was awesome!!!

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

The title & the story both are unique. Hope u will have a continuation 2 this ... but it was a mind blowing story in between the search they still manage to romance tat was good.

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Radhika

@TheInkMistress

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

You somehow manage to take your readers to a complete new level everytime don't you?
Awesome OS! Keep Updated.

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Vishwa

@vish94

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

oh! ok i updated my last comment! i m jus commentin again cuz i saw u had 'liked' it even before i updated it. so im nt sure u read it! haha.. i knw.. i am a hopeless stalker! bt go read! haah

once again, GREAT job!

my comment was on page 3 btw!

Edited by vish94 - 13 years ago

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Sarah

@Desi-

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: vish94
coming bak to comment.. wait!

*edit*

yayy!!! loved it!

hope something like this actually happens in the show!

n haillaaa!!! romance in the closet?? 😃instead of 'jungle me mangal'..u changd it to 'almari me mangal'??😉 BUAHAHAHAHA.. nicely done👏!

and arnav is one HELL of an unfair player. always making his moves when he knows khushi wont be able to declince even if she wants to, cuz she, wont hav an option!! hmmm... smart.REALLLYY smart!😳

though, of course, its not like he forced khushi! she wanted it as much as he did! 😳haha😉

well well. cheers to u!⭐️

keep it up!👏

I read both!!! you're a honey!!! Thanks for the AWESOME comments!

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Vishwa

@vish94

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Desi-
I read both!!! you're a honey!!! Thanks for the AWESOME comments!

haha!! well i know i know! jk jk ... n no need to thank me dear! or, in mamiji style, menssionnss naat!! 😉 u keep the good work up n i'll keep the commens comin! cheers!!

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jazzpreet

@jazzpreet

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

this was awesome! i would love for this to happen in the real show!!! lol. but seriously, it was so well written, i felt like i was there in person. great writing. thank you so much for the pm! :)