SS : Control Vs. Chaos Part 8 (Conclusion) - Page 2

Awesome OS.
Thanks for the PM.

Always caught btw their brain and heart😍

Originally posted by: guturgutur

well, we need to get the serial couple into a closet ASAP... the cardboard scene had its merits.. but now, closed armoires in dangerous situations seem like the perfect excuse..

wonderful OS Desi, great start to a week!👏

that was awesome!!!

The title & the story both are unique. Hope u will have a continuation 2 this ... but it was a mind blowing story in between the search they still manage to romance tat was good.

You somehow manage to take your readers to a complete new level everytime don't you?
Awesome OS! Keep Updated.

oh! ok i updated my last comment! i m jus commentin again cuz i saw u had 'liked' it even before i updated it. so im nt sure u read it! haha.. i knw.. i am a hopeless stalker! bt go read! haah

Originally posted by: vish94

coming bak to comment.. wait!

*edit*

yayy!!! loved it!

hope something like this actually happens in the show!

n haillaaa!!! romance in the closet?? 😃instead of 'jungle me mangal'..u changd it to 'almari me mangal'??😉 BUAHAHAHAHA.. nicely done👏!

and arnav is one HELL of an unfair player. always making his moves when he knows khushi wont be able to declince even if she wants to, cuz she, wont hav an option!! hmmm... smart.REALLLYY smart!😳

though, of course, its not like he forced khushi! she wanted it as much as he did! 😳haha😉

well well. cheers to u!⭐️

keep it up!👏

I read both!!! you're a honey!!! Thanks for the AWESOME comments!

Originally posted by: Desi-

I read both!!! you're a honey!!! Thanks for the AWESOME comments!

this was awesome! i would love for this to happen in the real show!!! lol. but seriously, it was so well written, i felt like i was there in person. great writing. thank you so much for the pm! :)