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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mini4

Hey Fiza!!! 🤗

beautifully written n emotionally touching part!!👍🏼
loved d way u hav described d past where mayank n nupur shared a beautiful bond of matrimony👏!
loved dis part where u hav described the growth in their relationship beautifully...showering of affection has turn everyting so beautiful, his little ways of making her believe she belongs to him, care freely holding her hand at times' patting her cheek or touching her head lovingly before going anywhere out.. all were causing so many butterflies to be part of her every min'and how can she forget the morning when she found his hand around her shoulder..that almost made her breath stop..❤️
even d present has been written beautifully!!
waiting to read what nupur's mother gonna do now...
thanx fr d pm!🤗
continue soon!




thanks alot dear
after many days i saw ur comment good to se ya
glad u r liking the way there relation is going...
and feeling this all..
wil cont soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Sanchu--

OMG...nupur finally jag rahi hai...am so happy...but this Tai jaan!!!!
ufff!





yupi she is back...dekha mein ny eid se pehly ek kam tu kerdiya

per mjhy lagta nhi hai mein dosra ker pao gi ...
sorry dear.. per mein eid mein kafi busy hogi hoon.. so shayd update mystery wali muskil hai


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

by gawd super fast speed se update!!!

awsom update fiza .
aha so mayank has fallen i love .
n so is NUPUR ...
m loving their bonding .
haye kitni cute hai n mayank is awsom ...

n u have potrayed deir feeling in such a detail manner ...realy felt like living dem
beautifulll





lol..han ab break lagy ga as kafi kam hai eid k
thanks alot dear
glad u liked it
u they have
glad ur enjoying it n feeling it too
thnku 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Part 19B:

Wow dii sucha lovely part...
Just loved every bit of it...no lies...For the first time i loved the past and present equally...

The past is so beautiful..The way he got used to her being with him, taking care of his smallest things, sharing his life like a frnd and accepting the fact that the feelings r turning into something more beautiful than frndshipl...same is happening with nupur too...and this dsnt seem awkward a bit...Loved how their relationship ws progressing...

And OMGG finally nupur got conscious...Awfff dii im so happy...that part ws so touchy...want to see nupur fit n fine like before...But uff this gandi awrat wont let them live in peace...She is again upto something rubbish...yeh marr kyun nahi jati...apni beti ki dushman...
Anyways dii loved this part loads..
Cont soon..




thanks alot dear
hey thts great
glad u enjoyed it so much... and yes they are moving ahead...
lol
us aurat ko bhool ker abhi un k moments enjoy kero..
im gona give loads of them to u...
i m really happy tht u like the way it is going
will cont soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

Rplyd to u all..pls pardon errors im hell tired… eid is near so loads of work…it a huge chapter… hope u like it

Chapter: 20

Tai jaan: yeah mayank aj kal raato ko buhat bahar rehny lag hai…

Nupur: woh kam hai office mein aj kal….

Tai jaan: hum shilpa se baat ker rahy hain..aur dekh rahy hai zaban ghaz bhar ki hogi hai apki

Shilpa: woh thik kah rahi hai bhabi aj kal buhat kam hai office mein…, phir Samrat bhi naya hai in sab ….

Saying so she took plates n went to kitchen…

Tai jaan: nazar rekhy us per, kafi baghi(do what he wants) kisam k insaan hai woh… kal bhi khain aur dinner per pay gay hain woh

She was hating it the way she was talking filthy about him, she knew he isn't like that and she knew everything about were his dinner was and what not

Nupur: humain pata hai kal unhony bahar khana kahay tha….

Tia jaan: jis k liyan itni zaban chala rahi hoo na.. us ko kabo mein rekhna bhi seekho….. biwi tu samjta nhi hai woh apko…us k kam kerny wali lag ti hoo bus… aj tak ek baar bhi biwi ki tarah paish ana tu door ki baat hai haq bhi nhi diya hai unhony apko… mard hai woh..bahar buhat zarrorat bori kerny waly hain unki

She can't argue yet she can't stay here to…she just left the place from there..gunjan was hearing all this and was abit worried already they way there relation was going 3 months are too much for her to make their relation towards another step yet they haven't even changed from it a bit…

Gunjan: nupur mein ajaoo..

Nupur: aray aao na.. poch kyun rahi hoo bhabi… ajao…

Gunjan: nupur tum mayank k sath khush tu hoona….

Nupur: she was surprised with the question…. Han bulkily hoon…asa kyun poch rahi hoo

Gunjan: pata nhi asay hi mjhy laga tum log abhi bhi wahin hoo

Nupur: asa nhi hai gunjan…she was trying to hide the blush…

Gunjan: n she smiled… acha really..tu kasi baat hai…

………………………

Gunjan and nupur were shopping in the mall,

Diya: aray nupur.. tum …kasi hoo

Diya was mayank 's friend and nupur hate her for many reasons…

A she was a huge chipko to mayank

b. she hated nupur..

c. she was an extreme cosmopolitan and weird taunting girl…

d. all reason are highly irrelevant she herself donot now why she hates her..the most important reason mayank use to take diya's side a lot and that was completely out of tolerance of her..though she knew he do purposefully yet even than she cant help ..she is meant to be hated huh,..but today she was feeling like a winner…huh she even donot know mayank is now mine..the last thought gave her a strange wave flowing through her…

she frown at the sound of her voice…

Nupur: hey diya…

Diya: kasi hoo tum.. aur aj kal tumhra taya zad bhai (cousin) nazar nhi araha hai…

Nupur: woh islyn k woh mera taya zad nhi raah na ab

Diya: matlab…

Nupur: shoor hogay a hai…. Harat hai.. mayank ny tumhain apni shadi mein nhi bolaya

Diya: wht mayank ny shadi kerli… woh bhi tm se..she laugh out loud oh god poor thing…

already she was hating her and now this comment made her go mad…

Nupur: oh really

Diya: aur nhi tu kya..khir asi bussiness deals tu hoti hi rahti hain…dekhty hain woh ab apny liyan shadi ksi se kerta hai….

Nupur: tum ny shayd suna nhi us ki shadi hochuki hai…

Diya: suna hai na… per abhi 3 aur kersakta hai aur woh bhi business k liyan nhi pleasure k liyan.. aj sham wasy bhi hum mil rahy hain… dekh yeah date kya rang lati hai…

Nupur laughed out loud…

Nupur: poor thing u… itna khwab… chalo meri tharaf se tumahin all the best..

Gunjan: yeah kaun thi…

Nupur: mayank ki ladli dost….errr.

Gunjan: tu ap itna ghusa kyun horhi hoo

Nupur: is ko dekha hai ..ajeeb hi hai jaah dekho larko per shoro hojati hai… kapray dekho ..itnay see through hai pehny ki kyun zahmat kerti hai..

Gunjan: yeah sirf mayank ki dost ksay hai

Nupur: aray bhi high skool k doo saal mein thi us k sath… .fasool… chikpko

Gunjan laughed..

Nupur: ab tum kyun has rahi hoo

Gunjan: typical biwi lag rahi hoo wah

Nupur: haan tu kahti hai mayank pass 3 k chance aur hai … ab batao zara….

She laughed more…

Nupur: gunjan ab yeah zayda horaha hai…. Aur tum us mayank ko nhi batao gi k mein mili hoon us se… dekho tu woh mjhy bata ta hai k nhi

Gunjan: matlab ami k kahny per tum nazar rekhny wali hoo

Nupur: nhi… maagr is ko mjhy batna paray ga warna he is dead….

Gunjan: possessive haan… ahme ahem.. mayank ko aj dost ki jaga biwi k saamna kerna paray ga wah..

Nupur: gunjaaa,,, maat tang kero

……………………..

Mayank: nupur itni raat tak mera wait maat kiya ker, bekar mein jagti rahti hoo.. sojaya kero..

Nupur: aray tu is mein kya hua…. Tumko khana kaun day ga, tumhain pata hai is waqt tu saray naukar bhi chaly jatay hain..

Mayank: mein manage kerlo ga nah… pehly bhi tu kerta tha ab bhi kerlo ga….

He was abit pissed of with diya's meeting ..god she cant just control herself ..n he hates it..and than with himself too ..he was feeling like using nupur and not at all giving her anytime he should be giving..plus her late night waiting for him makes things all to more worse foe him…he cant deny he loves it to see her right there for him..it actually make him feel he is home yet…

Nupur: fine…

Though his tone, neither the way he said was sumthing to be angry on, but to many things added to the fact as it appeared she is nothing in his life or she has been Imposed on him like as per her mother in a business deal…or rather still he hasn't excepted her in his life. ..n he even didn't told her about his meeting with diya….

He was lying on bed , thinking something with a smile when she came out of the washroom, her anger burned more looking the way he was dreamily smiling on sumthing…

Nupur: kya baat hai itna kyun muskura rahy hoo..

She too lye down

Mayank: aray tumhain pata…. Aj meri ek meeting thi on dinner…

Nupur: kitni jald bata rahy hoo nah

Mayank: aray yaar bhool gaya tha nah… islyn kah raha hoon donot wait ..aagy suno…pata hai mjhy waha kaun mila.. he turned to his side to face her…supporting his head with his elbow…

And she was feeling like killing him right there…just right there.. itni excitement

Nupur: kaun..she turned to him

Mayank: diya… can u believe it I mean itni saaloo baad… aur tumhain pata hai woh bulkily wasy k wasy hi..

Nupur; ajeeb yahin.. haan wasy bhi is kism k log zayda badlty nhi hai

Mayank: nhi aar kafi achi aur kamiyaab(successful) business woman hai aj woh…

Nupur: good…

He can read the annoyance on her face so much…

Nupur: wasy aj ami ny dekha tha tumahin us k sath..aur us din bhi kisi aur k sath

Mayank: hain..khain unhony kuch suna tu nhi tha…

Nupur: knitting her eyes brows she asked,….. kya

Mayank: woh.. he smiled… she proposed me…

Nupur: KYA… us k deemgh tu karab nhi hoagay hai..

She sat up..and he to …

Mayank: aray relax na usko pata thori tha k meri shadi hogi

Nupur: jhoti..subha mall mein hi tu mein ny bataya tha

Mayank: ACHAAA…tumhain mili thi woh… ohh

Nupur: tum ny kya kaha… aur agar tumahri shadi nhi hoi hoti tu….

Mayank: tu kya.. tum meri shadi hony dayti us se..never..khabi bhi nhi

Nupur: tu abhi kerlo us se….

Mayank: ab mumkin nhi hai…tai jaan chorahy (street) per latka day gi mjhy… wasy tum ny mjhy kyun nhi bataya

Nupur: bhol gai..aur yaad hota bhi tu zarroi nhi …aur ab mjhy need arahi hai…

She turned to the other side, and he placed his face on pillow to hide his chuckled wch he was hiding from so long…

Mayank: is waqt kahna kaun bana raha hai…. Kuch jalny ki boo arahi hai

Nupur: deemgh k sath sath..tumhari naak bhi karab hogi hai…. Sojao..

And this was it.. he lye down and turned to other side hiding his laugh in pillow… and she can feel he was laughing on her back tht was more n more making her angry…

……………….

Moring was still on the fumes of last night..the words" I will mange" he has to pay for them all from the early strt of the morning…

His cloths missing not even ironed..as she didn't send them to be iron

Mayank: nupur meray kapray iron nhi hai

Nupur: nhi tumhi na tu kaha tha tum apan sara kam khud manage kerlo gay tu mein interfere nhi kiya…. Pehli bhi kerty thay nah..so kero…

Saying so she left down. And he giggle

Mayank: meri biwi ghusay mein hai, aur koi jaal bhi raha hai…. Nupur per agay aur bhi chaly ga…as mjhy tumahri yeah shakl buhat mazay k lag rahi hai..

He has his extra set of drees iron wch he wore, and came down..already it was late as nupur didn't woke him up and now there was no tea for him….

Shilpa: kya hua asi shakal kyun banarahy hoo

Mayank: yeah chai kis ny bani hai… he left its as it is…

Shilpa: ek din nupur ny nhi banai tu tum phir shoro hogay…nashta tu kerlo

Mayank: is chai k taste k baad mein kuch nhi kahsakta… ..

He went to poke in kitchen to watch the volcano eruption….

Mayank: aj chai tum ny nhi bani aur apany liyan bana rahi hoo….buhat na insaffi( injustice) hai yeah

Samrat who was entering the kitchen stoped in his track…when he saw mayank grip her arm when she was going away and tht with a changed expression..he has a sweet mischievous smile on his face

Mayank: kya hua.. baat kyun nhi ker rahi..

Nupur: kr tu rahin hoon… aur kasay kero…

Mayank: ab tum asay tu mjhy se baat nhi kerti…he touched her cheek and Samrat was bit embarrassed but he don't want to move away…..koi baat hai

She forget everything it was one of the very few times he touch her like that and the way lovingly he was asking it was making her more lost

Nupur: nhi..

Mayank: oky ..acha aj bhi mein late hojao ga… aj tu diya k office jana hai…

The hand that was still in his grip, she slides it off…and he pressed his lips to hide the smile..

Nupur: thik hai aur kuch,…

Mayank: mein tu sirf khuda hafiz kerny aya tha

Nupur: khuda hafiz… hogaya ab jao..

Mayank: acha bhi jaraha hoo…

….

Nupur was in her room , making her room correct as usual the bed was all messed, his all things were here n there from towel to his shirts tht he try every morning .. the much she was organize he was hell mess…

Nupur: yeah larka nah khabi nhi sudharay ga…

Gunjan: kay hua…

Nupur: dkeho na pora kamra ajeeb kerta hai yeah …. Kapray sofay per, towel bed per.. aur bed sheet uff… sab se bara mess..

Gunjan: she smiled mischievously ab wo tu dekeh ker embarrass maat kero na…

Nupur: KYA… gunjaann… tum na… she blushed at her..and was correcting the bedside… ab yeah dekho… blanket k neechy file… aur aay ga tu pora karma uper neechy kerday ga meri file kaha gai…

Mayank: kero kero aur kero meri shikyaatein.. khub gossip kero apni bhabi se aur kya kay zulim kerta hai tumahra shoor tum per.. he was standing on the door tapping his feet with a smile on his face….

Gunjan couldn't help to smile at his teasing ways…

Nupur: tum phir aya gay office nhi jana hai kya…

Mayank: uff. Khuda yeahi din dekahna tha…qayameet ki nishani hai…shoor se kahti ho k ghar kyun aay.. woh jo file blanket k neechy se barbaamad (nikali hai) hoi hai nah woh chaioy mjhy…

He came forward and nupur was face him… he step extremely close to her making it difficult to hold her gaze n blush… placed his one hand on her shoulder n lean to pick the file.. though he did all pretty quickly yet it was enough to make her nervous n shiver…

Gunjan who saw it strt walking away to avoid any embarrassing situation n reached her room…

Mayank look at her with a smile and saying bye left her to control her heart..

Samrat: kya baat hai meri biwi aj subha subha asi wali muskurahat…

Gunjan: tum bhi tu muskhura rahy hoo…

Samrat: wo tu aj thora embarrassing hai but… kitchen mei mayank nupur k sath dekha tu

Gunjan: aur mein ny bedroom mein… woh dono apna rasta bana rahy hai..sahyd ban chukay hain… ajeeb se khushi horahi hai..

Samrat: mjhy bhi… asay woh dono I mean.. ajeeb se baat hai ….

Samrat went out to wait for mayank in his car and smile wasn't leaving his face…they she was annoyed with diya, the slight closeness between them, the way gunjan said abt the morning, and mayank was actually teasing her was all making his heart warm… they have moved forward and that so easily or rather smoothly without disturbing the charm there friendship have….and above all wht he heard saying to diya was suthing wamred his heart so much…

Diya: oh God so tum ny business k liyan ki hogi shaid I understand n I don't mind that mayank..

Mayank: excuse me…will u mind having ur hands off me… plus mjhy business k liyan us se shadi kerny ki koi zaroorat nhi hai… I want to tu mein ny kerli…

Diya: common mayank Nupur.. sab ko pata hai u donot love her…aur nupur mein as kuch nhi hai, tumahin hazar mil jay gi

Mayank: per woh hazar nupur nhi hosakti… zarori nhi jo sab ko dekh raha ho wohi sach ho.. humara kya rishta hai yeah mjhy tumahin batny ki zaroroat nhi hai…

Diya: woh bekar darpook

Mayank: ENOUGH DIYA… ek lafaz aur nhi …mein apni biwi k baray mein ek lafaz tum se nah suno samjhi tum… kam khatam hochuka hai… just get lost form here…n I think I will prefer k ab se mera assistance tum jasi class ki larki se baat kery…mein zarroat nhi samjhata tum jasi ghatiya klarki k sath ek min bhi place share kerna

He knew mayank didn't said tht all to just make things look good he was extremely anger on her so so much…and he actually didn't meet her after that..all things were tactile by his colleagues ….though this deal was so important for mayank…even than he did it..Now he wasn't afraid for them, for their relationship, for their future n bond… he knows they have actually found there ways to each other's heart..n soul..

Mayank: chalo.. kya baat hai aj subha subha itna kyun muskura raha hai…. Subha hogi hai wasy I tell u ..aur tu bedroom se car mein hai ab,….

Samrat: very funny…. Tu meri behan ko kyun tang ker raha hai..he asked with a smiled earning a chukled…

Mayank: aray tu apni biwi ko tang nhi kero tu kya perdosi ki biwi ko tang kero… maza araha hai kafi zayda woh bhi….

Samrat: meri behan ko tang kerny mein maza ata hai..

Mayank: oye hello u humari kafi personal life hai… ap office chaly..

Samrat: mein soch raha hoon us k shoor k diya hua jawab bhi batao us ko…. She will actually will feel

Mayank: blush… aur sabzi wala us ko tamatar samhj ker lay jay ga… aur yeah mein afford nhi kersakta…. Aj yeah fassol se chai pe ker mera din kafi bora shoro hua hai….

Samrat: lol… tu naraz kyun kiya us ko

Mayank: chalo abhi …ghar ana hai aur us ko mana bhi hai.. mein ek aur din asi chai nhi pee sakta…

……….

It was again quite late in night when he entered his house, and find everything dark. Pretty well knew that everybody is asleep , pressing his neck ,losing his tie he enter pretty quietly in his room, finding it too dark.. oh so somebody took his words seriously, oki….

Changing in his night wear ly down softly on his bed..tossing on the bed for quite time it was it, he just can't take it anymore.. he stood up and look beside him.

Mayank: had hai ..itna hilaliya bed ko uthti hi nhi hai.. wasy tu zari se ahahat per uth jati hai…huh… he moved a bit to her said and poke to look is she sleeping and she was….sigh…ab kya kero….bus buhat hoagay

Nupur..he patted on her shoulder…utho .. nupur…NUPPURRR…

Nupur: kya hai mayank… sony do na…

Mayank: utho na…. pls…he pouted… mjhy bhook lag rahi hai..

Nupur hided her face in pillow to hold her smile…she was all awake when he entered the room, and when he was tossing on bed. She pretty well knew no matter what he nevr have his dinner outside unless its very important ..but then she has to take revenge from him whtevr he said yesterday…. Jao jao khud manage kero…huh

Nupur: tu mein kya kero suno do

Mayank: aray fridge mein kuch nhi hai khany ko… nupur pls utho nah…

Nupur: mayank… she stod up… tu mein kya kero… tum khud mange ker sakty hoo.. tu kero nah…

He frown..

Mayank: oh tu yeah kal k badla liya jaraha hai mjhy se… kya yaar… ek tu tumhary liyan hi kaha tha aur tum hi naraz horahi hoo… per pls abhi kuch bana ker day do kuch bhi chaly ga…. Mein bhooka nhi marna chahta…

Nupur: khud mange kero…

Mayank: kya hai yaar biwi,..okay bhi I am sorry, mein apky baghir kuch mange nhi kersakta ..jaan boch ker tang ker raha tha..ainda as nhi hoga….yeah thik hai…

Nupur: hmm ..chaly ga… layti hoon kahna..rukho…

Mayank: per fridge mein kuch nhi hai…

Nupur: pata hai…. Freezer mein hai kuch asa jo tum is waqt chala lo gay….

Yeah lo…

Mayank: thanku…. Uff..

There were some frozen food, nuggets , some bread and bean salad…

Nupur: tum kya subha se bhookay hoo….

Mayank: hmm… time nhi mila…god I loved it… he was munching like anything…

Nupur: KYA…. Tumhain subha se kahna kahny k time nhi mila…

Mayank: haan tu.. nhi mila… subha itni bekar chai… nashta k mood hi nhi hoo… tum ko pata hai mein tumahray elawa ksis k hath kin hi peeta phir bhi…. uper se kisi ko fikar hi nhi hai k ghar aao ga tu kahan kaun day ga….…kasai biwi ho.. mjhy se pehly hi so gai…

Nupur: oh hello Mr confuse.. tumahrya deemgh fuse ura hua hai pata hai mjhy, ek taraf kahty ho k tumhara intezar na keray, ab kahty ho k mein tum se pehly so gi… had hai…

Mayank: tumhain achay se pata hai k hum bahar raat mein khbai nhi kahy ga… phir bhi…

Nupur: mayank… ab tum had ker rahy hoo… mjhy kyun elzam day rahy hoo

Mayank: ab mein elzam kab day raha hoon…

Nupur: han han..hum hi galat hai bus… na tumhain samjhty hain…na hi tumara kayal rekhty hain…aur na hi humari koi zarroat hai …. Khuda hafiz…ab se sab kuch tum khudi hi mange kern a

Mayank: ab yeah sab mein ny kab kaha hai… nupur kya hua hai..

Nupur: shaba khair.. aura b meri need karab maat kerna…

Mayank : aray….

She turned to other side and slept, after eating his food he to lye down face her, yet hse wasn't…

Mayank: alsa this day was too has to cum in there relation, they actually fight on, sumthing highly irrelevant, its not the first time yet this time I just don't know wht she is angry, on the fact that wasn't allowing her to wait for me, or diya propsed me..chukled… mana paray ga… but whatever it is, the change that I am feeling around is amazing, the feel that I have all rights, I have her 24/7 with me, is amzing… but is more amzing is the feeling he is having form her inside the way she know claims her all righ on him….and this much more bigger than anything..

Nupur.. shaba khair…

Nupur: shut up mayank..

………..

Morning was not less than the other but it was now enough for him to face…its getting on his nerves and he need her back with him…the cute little purpose full fight has now been dragged to much

Mayank: nupur..he griped her hand stoping her to move away..

Nupur: kuch chiay

Mayank: humain kuch chaiy hoga tab hi ap se mukataib hongy… nupur I m sorry nah mein tu sirf asai hi tang ker raha tha..tu khama kha itni se baat ko itna bahra rahi hoo

Nupur: oh I am soo sorry mein tu bekar mein hi yeah batein kerti hoo ….tu tum kyun maafi mang rahy ho…mjhy mangi ni chaiy..mera kasoor hai k tum ko band ker rekha hai… diya thik kah rahi thi bulkily..mein tu yeah soch ahi nhi tumharay pass aur bhi koi option hosktai hai

Mayank: nupur kya bol rahi hoo

Nupur: sahi tu bol rahi hoo…abhi bhi kuch bikra nhi hai mayank u always have a free way to go…

Mayank: NUPUR…

Nupur didn't knew what she was saying she was pissed of on diya, her mother, him to plus herself..she sumwhere was thinking did she really used him for herself..and this all little fight made things worse..mayank wasn't registering anything wht she is saying…it seem it has no meaning..or any connection wht so ever she is saying yet the last thing came was not shocking but immense hurting she thinking of to throwing him out of her life was dam hurting…so causing for the first time in his life ….to out burst on her..

Mayank: kya kaha tum ny…nupur yeah rishtay wasy hi buhat se ifs n buts per bana hai…aur tum ny aj itni bari baat khadi… tumhain yeah lgata hai k mein tumhain chor ker kahin aur jana chahta hoo…how can u even say it…how can u…

Ek baat yaad rekhna nupur.. mjhy nhi pata wht it means to u…but it means a lot more than u ever can thing to me.. is k baray ek aur bar tum nay asa kcuh kaha tu shayd mein sach man lo k tumhin kahin regret hai

She was so scared to look at this mayank..mayank n raising his voice is almost impossible ..and he did…

Nupur: myank woh mera woh matalb nhi tha sach mein…mayank…

Mayank: job hi tha… mein late hojao ga office jana hai…

Nupur: she stopped him…mayank I am sorry… mein woh bus sab k ghusay tum per nikal rahi thi..i don't mean to..bus ami ki baatein diya sab…sir per agaya…

Mayank: nupur its okay ..pls abhi mjhy jany do…

Nupur: nhi asa nhi… mayank asa kuch nhi hai bus woh diya ki baatein meray deemgh per charh gai aur kuch nhi…. Pls I am sorry …

Mayank: he sigh and turned to her who was so in fear to see him angry on her and sumhwere it makes him realize he shouldn't be saying things to her like that…. He cupped her faced

Nupur pls ainda if u donot mean so tu asa kuch bhi humaray baray mein baat khahna pls…don't doubt my feelings on tht…

Nupur: I am sorry khabi nhi hoga.. she felt strange as when he completed his talk and left her face she felt as if he left her..and that wasn't tolerateble the word sorry and the other part came more as a promise to stay beside him for ever

Mayank: she said like a sweet kid and he cant help to smile…. He place plam on her cheek.. sorry mjhy asa chikhna nhi chaiy tha… aur ab mein jao office jana hai…

Nupur: hm she smiled and they went to there respective routine..

He enter the wash room and splash his face…wht got into him tht he reacted like tht… but sumhwere he cant just stand any such word about there relationship ..it hurted hi so much…. Sumwhere in his work he realized mayabe its because of al the negligence he is giving her that she is feeling so …maybe she might be feeling he has no intrest in this relationship or feelings as a wife for her… he has to make it clear to her that he has strt faling for her…she has turn much more than just a frnd to him…so he has to spend sum quality time with her..in this purpse he said yes to the weekend plan of all of them…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed



han yeah baat mein likhn wali thi phir rukh gai
np hum us ko kafi sary aur tareway bata day gay..infact ek OS likho gi tumhara wedding gift...100 ways to make ur wife wake up.. tht will ulitmately wont let her got up..😉😉//yeah thil hai

lov ya too dear


Lolzzz 😆 kitni besharam 😳 ho gayi hoon mein ☺️ m actually blushing like an idiot...😆🤣🤣 le nhi nhi agar gift hi dena hain toh yeh likhna ke hw to handle my Tantrums as u know main kitne nakhre karti hoon...😳🤣🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update..
loved it lodsss
loved it to d coreee...
uff!!! yeh aurat!!! arhhh..let her be ab adat ho gayi ase logo ki...HUH!
hayeee...wht was that!!!
apne meri WWU ki Diya api ka kya haal ban diya...😆
bt god!! she was so mean!! himmat toh dekho 3more chances my foot!! uski toh!! arhhh
bt i loved d way Nupur answered back!!
waise ohh-ooo someone was jealous!!! n behaving like a Wifey!! hmm...😉
Awww...i loved d teasing part...
waise han ase koi kahega toh bura toh lagega hi na biwi hain woh toh khyal toh rakhegi na waise accha maja chakhaya bechare ko..😆
awww...bechara mera MAyank...he was cute!! bechare ko bhook lagi hain n deko toh chai nhi mili toh kuch bhi nhi khaya...awww
OMG!!!!!!! loved d way MAyank answered dat Diya...n awww Samrat watching them was utterly Adorable...😍
loved it sooo much!😳
loved Gunjan n Samrat convo too...n awww
loved MAyank-Samrat convo a lottt!!!!
so kisi ko apni biwi sabji wale se gawana gawara nhi wah wah! 🤣
loved it sooo very much!
m sure they r gonna enjoy der weekend!
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing. beautiful. plz plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely updt fiza
loved possessive nupur & her options for hating diya they are funny.. hope mayank make it clear to nupur that he is failing for her..loved his teasing session ...waiting for mayur's weekend plan...cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
iss ff mein meri hating list mein tai ke baad dia ka naam add ho gaya hai
aaj yeah kal mein chand raat ho sakti hai
yaar kitni jaldi ramadan guzar gaya

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