best kept secrets- a d3 ff updated pg 31

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

I love this dosti se pehele jagda, Wow it so so so wonderul. Swayam sharon waise be creating magic onscreen and you FF update has made them all the more sweeter. Wow yaar hats off to you. Kya mast update hai. Par ek request hai jaldi upate karna.

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@-bitz-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Awesome update !!

SwaRon nok-jok for parking space was cute !

And KriYansh note thing was hillarious!

Waiting for the next update!

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Shweta

@Shweta-kriyansh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

medha...a delightful update...swaron ki 1st day fite...rey messes up wid kria...love dit...next upd8 jaldi karo...wait nahi ho raha inki stories k turns read karne k liye...

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medha

@SavageMissMe

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Born2Dance
hey nice part...
swaron toh sirf fight se hi shuru karsakte hein...
rey already lattu... hehehehe...
please update soon...

thank you so much, glad you liked it

Originally posted by: frankyfio
nice reaallly enjoyed reading
n tnx for the pm
pls update ur next part sooon

good to read that you liked it, thnx fr appreciating.

Originally posted by: PD_puja
Amazng frst part...
Luvd it ...
Swaron ki frst meeting mai hi fite...xpected...
N kriyaansh ki frst meet mai MU...xpected...coz kriyaansh n MUs to saath hi chalte hain ...
Waitng fr nxt part...

glad to see you liked it, i guess the first part was probably as you expected but trust me am not gonna let this one get predictable, twists and turns await you, so do read the next part too!

Originally posted by: d3lover90
Loved it..
Awsm..
Pls update soon..
Thnx for pm

thnx, will try and upd8 whenever i can.

Originally posted by: kaba3003
awesome👏

luvd it😃

thnx fr commenting and liking, aishwarya. gla you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: Jiya_ArSha4Ever
Nice first chapter.
I really liked KriYansh and Swaron ki pheli takrar.
Are phele mulakaat mein Kria aur Rey mein MU. Yeh to expected hi tha. Now rey gotta say sorry to her.

thnx, fr this. glad you enjoyed reading it.

Originally posted by: Angel56
really a sweet concept...liked it..nyc..

thnx so much.😃

Originally posted by: achuAR
aww...
Dat was really cute...😍
ab dekhthe hain ki rey kriya ko kaise manatha hain?? 😉😆
Plzz update soon😛

glad you liked it, will ty and upd8 as soon as i can

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medha

@SavageMissMe

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: enrique
It's to cute dear it's nice start really good

thnx fr liking and commenting, its really appreciated.

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron
Awesome update
Swaron fight ye to hona hi tha
Rey annoyed kria
Precap seems exciting
Update it soon
N thanks for pm 😊

glad you liked it, hope i manage to make the upd8 live up to your expectations.

Originally posted by: asmaju
Lovely part meedha.Thanks for pm.
It wqas cute.
First day mai hi Kriyaansh ki Mu start interesting.

Thanks for pm.
Update soon.

thnx asma, glad you found it intresting.

Originally posted by: shiv_sis_square
Resss-God we are late!
--Unres--

OMG Loved it girl!!!! It was an awesome start! We are gonna stalk this thread now...We dont have words it was just amazing!!👏 Now update the next part soon okay..Oh and yea thanks for the PM😛

-Shivangi and Shivika

hey, tum mujhe achcha bol rahe ho, khud dekha hai kitna achcha likhte ho, i read you recent work par patah nahin kyun comment nahin ho raha tha isliye yahan bata deti hoon, it was awesome,simply fab but way too short, nxt time bada banana padega😉

as for my upd8 thnx so much you guys, love you both 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: kritzzz_ArSha
amazing start!!!

thnx!

Originally posted by: yogini64
Kriya is so mischiveous . . . . . Khud late uthi hai aur swayam ke muh pe paani mar ke uthaya 🤣
college me enter karte hi siren ko baja diya 😆 . . . . Gud job majnu 😉
& rey- khud hi chep ho raha hai . . . . Bechari kriya ko confuse kar diya
he's really overprotective for sharon... 😃
kaafi cute hai . . . . 😆 . . . . I was imagining sharon's expression on dat . . . Why rey is calling a guy cute 🤣
bas ab to fireexit scene dekhna hai 😍

thnx yogini. i was rofl while reading your comment. dont know how you do it, but you kind of have a knack to make everything sound hilarious with your witty one liners! thnx fr commenting.

Originally posted by: --Kinjal--
Hey dear
its amazing...
Gr8 start...
1st hi day swayam sharon fighted...lol
n kria rey... hey bhagwan pure lec mein chit chit khelte rehte hai
thanx 4 d pm

thnx so much kinjal, glad you liked it, hope i can manage to keep it up fr the upcoming upd8s too

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chetna

@crazysky

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

it was awesome
loved it

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shemli

@ShemliArsha

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

wow that was really wonderful...i loved this bro-sis convo.their first day was fantastic.swaron ka fight and kriyaansh's misunderstandings.ye tho hona hi dha,after all they are swaron n kriyaansh.this update really helped me to recall first episodes of D3..
Thanks for this ff and for pm
pls upadate ASAP.

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Sreeja Nair

@sreeja_rox

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Phew...1st of all so very sorry for being this late in commenting!!!!!!

Loved loved the promo...right from the beginning where both Kriya and Swayam become late for the 1st day of there college...

Loved the brother sister bond!!!!😳 Hahaha and 1st day pe hi Swayam aur Sharon ka ladai???😆😆 That part was so very cute...

And Rey mistaking Kriya to be the one with whom Sharon had a fight!!!Totally loved the chapter dear...

Update the next one asap😊

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madhura

@madhu_swaron

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

really interestin...😊

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medha

@SavageMissMe

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: kriyaanshd3
loved it yaar...kriyaansh n swaron phele meet main fi8!
*facepalm* in chaaro ka kuch nahi ho sakta hain
waitin for their second meet!

glad you loved it! truly, in chaaron ka kuch nahin ho sakta!😆

Originally posted by: poojadworld
heyyy amazinggg update,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,thnkx 4pm😃

thnx!

Originally posted by: dildostidance19
awesome update medha...
very cute update...
love all convo..kriyam,swaron,sharey,kriyansh..
kriyansh note talk was cute...
waiting for the next part...

thnx so much anki di, glad you liked it!😃