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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
wah nice update .. liked the convo between swayam n kriya ...😆
update soon ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
Finally update kiya !!

SwaRon fight 😳 as always..cute tha 😛

Loved the update and thanks for the PM <3 Update soon 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
guys thank you so much for liking and commenting on muy ff. i really wanted to reply to each of you but i really havent been able to do it. your comments mean a lot to me and ive probably read each one atleast thrice! ya i know youlle probably call me obcesased but it gives me true satisfaction.
thankyou so much and a big hug to all of you!

Edited by medhasainanee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
guys plz do read the post above this before you start reading

chapter 2

Swayams first class had just ended, and hed thoroughly enjoyed it. He had always been a keen learner and this had proved to be a rather informative lecture. Since he had a free period now, he had decided to explore the campus. As he walked down the corridor, he could see the students were too engaged in themselves to even notice that somebody new had entered the college, but he didn't mind. He liked it that way, he was never one to try and get unnecessary attention to himself and this would provide a good opportunity to have a look around without being disturbed. Suddenly he heard some music coming from the other end of the corridor and following it he found himself in front of the huge rehearsel hall of st louie. He walked inside to see a girl dancing to the music, it was the girl hed met previously theat morning, Sharon. Her body seemed to sway to the music perfectly never missing a beat, performing even the slightest movement with utmost clarity. She was son preoccupied that she hadn't even realized that he was there, it was as if she was existing in a world of her own. She was unbelievable, he had to give her that, the only person hed seen dance so well before was kriya. He stood there awestruck taking it all in. the danced lasted a few more minutes and the she ended with a flourish.

Swayam- wow, youre really good!

Sharon- rey, thank god you are finally here , do you know how long I waited for you

She turned around to give him a hug when she realized that it was actually, swayam and not rey.

Sharon- you, what are you doing here?

Swayam- taking a tour of the campus, youre a pretty good dancer.

Sharon- I know that and for your information non dancers are not allowed here so just leave!

Swayam- well who said I don't dance?

Sharon- you dance? You really expect me to buy that? Everybody says the same thing, why don't you try something original?

Swayam- you think im faking? Lets see yo do this!

He turned around to do a hiphop move, one which was his favourite and loked at Sharon.

Swayam- so do you believe me now?

Wow, she thought he really can dance, that was one of the toughest hip hop moves and he made it seem so simple, almost childs play, but no way was she gonna let him get the better of her.

Sharon- really that's all you got? Lets see you beat this

She did an adiago, one of the most horrifyingly difficult ballet steps to such perfection, it felt as if she had being doing it ever since she was born.

Swayam was just thinking which step he should do now when the dance instructor miss Nicole enterd the hall.

Nicole- wow, you guys well done both of you. I already am pretty familiar to sharons dancing prowess, but you seem to posess some amazing dance skills, haven't seen you around here before .

Swayam- maam, im swayam, today is actually my first first day here.

Nicole- well im hoping to see a lot more of you, you should really sign up for the dace team, don't let that talentgo waste.

Swayam- absolutely maam, I was planning to do so already, but your encouragement nevertheless is extremely appreaciated.

meanwhile kriya was in the canteen, she had loads of pending work and she hadn't even begun to do it, she started with English her favourite subject. The first two classes of the semester had been spent discussing wuthering heights, it was supposed to be a classic love story but she had never realy been one for romantic novels, she had always felt that Love had been Glorified.Glamorized, Idealized, to the Point that People were searching for something that doesn't exist without realizing that it could destroy them,wreck havoc with their lives just like it had done with her mothers. She sighed and opened the book she had borrowed from the library and started to read.

Barely any time had passed, when she heard someone calling out her name.

Rey- kriya, oh my god there you are, ive been looking for you for ages!

No, kriya thought, not again, when is he going to realize that I don't know who Sharon is. She saw him making his way up to her and sat down next to her much to the evident dislike of the other girls present there who kept shooting her glances that made her feel they were gonna chew her up alive. Great she thought that was all I needed.

Kriya- look, plz fr the last time I don't know Sharon!

Rey- I know, that was a mistake im sorry, I kind of went crazy there.

Kriya- oh my god, finally realization occurs! Well apology accepted now can I please get back to my work?

Rey- umm, yaa sure, you don't have to be so rude about it!

Kriya- look, im sorry im kinda pissed off today and I have loads of work to complete, besides I haven't even filled up my form for extracurricular activities for which I have to be graded.

Rey- so what are you planning to take up?

Kriya- well dance for sure, but haven't really decided on anything else. Maybe ill join thje student committee

Rey- you dance? Looks like we have something common afterall.

Kriya- ya, I love to dance, its my one and only passion. Basically I live for dance.

Rey- wow, that's great, so have you seen the rehearsel hall? That's where all of us practice and stuff.

Kriya- no I actually haven't got an opportunity to do that. Illcheck it out later.

Rey- you know what im heading that way, I could show you.

Kriya- no thanks ill manage.

Rey- come on, leave this. You can do this at home. Right now consider this my way of saying soory, after that ill show you around the entire college. Now lets go otherwise, sharons gonna eat me alive.

Edited by medhasainanee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res for coming update !!!

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Wowwwieee Amazing update medha darls !!!!😛

Really i loved it to the extremest core yaar..⭐️

I loved the way u write...so natural yet so deep...😉

Loved the start...sharon nd swayam aamne saamne..and perfect entry of nichole...😃

Then bechari kriya...hahaha...love ke baarein mein her thinking...lollx !!😆

Overall it was Mindblasting !!!!👏

Am in love wid ur work yaar...😳

Keep writing for us..(espe. for me..) !!!

Luv u and ur writing skills...😳
Xoxo <3
sweets.. :D

Wohhooo 1st one to comment 😉
Edited by mEgical_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
loved the first part. SwaRon parking lot part and there nok jok was too good.
Loved the chit part of Rey and Kriya.
Looking forward to the next update. Please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
Loved how your naration took the free flow . Nothing seems forced but just appear natural , just like as i said it appears like another D3 happening over in some other dimension or in a parallel universe. SwaRon love hate relation ship seem to be blooming and so does Rey seems to be falling for Kriya. It was beautifully penned down and was a pleasant read.

And yes aur kaun kaun characters aane wale hain is FF mein Nicole Ma'm ke alawa ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
part 1-
loved kriyam brother sister bond first meeting of swaron
& already fighting shuru. 😆 poor kriya. Rey blaming her. 😕 next time pls pm me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
awesome swaron showing them their steps to each other was awesome
kriyaansh convo was terrific loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update medha 😊

I luvd it very much 😳

Waiting for d next part 😃

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