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medha

@SavageMissMe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

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yeah first to comment! khatam kyun kar diya yaar, ss bana deti isko!

super awesome, and loved every bit!

poor rey- bechara so nahin paa raha tha itne din se! mujhe toh lagta hai ki ab aur bhi kam soyega, romance jo karega, bt we wont be able to see that only😭

koi baat nahin aapke baaki ffs pad ke woh kasar bhi poori kar lenge😆

Edited by medhasainanee - 13 years ago

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Deetha di i toh dead hun... itna hawwttt update...
thodi der main comment karungi jab normal ho jaun

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sapnaarsha

@sapnaarsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

awesme update

the update was hot

atlast rey realised his luv for kriya

they really luk 2 cute wid each other!!!!!!!!

last part!!!!!!!!!!!😔😔😔😔😔

Edited by dildostidance01 - 13 years ago

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Wow amazing update deeta u rocks it's realy cute hwwt and long update it's wnderfull it was fully besed on real liff i love the way you writing

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Loved d way u portrayed their relationship..

U showed d change in Rey's feelings very well..

Kriya is so amazing..i love her.

Vicky is a very good bro...

Overall a hot,sizzling n sensual updt..

U rocked it.

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Preeti ArsHa

@preeti_kreya

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Wonderful Update.. Amazing poor thik se so bhi nahi paya.. After all apni kria ka k effect hai hi aise koi kaise dur reh sakta hai hot and cute kria se... realy she luk hawt in black and cute in white.. And finaly kria ke k effect ka jadu chala and rey ko pyaar ho hi gaya thank god.. Kriyansh KISS n ROMANCE wowww beautiful, hawt and supeb.. bt sad yeh last part tha...:( Bt every good things cum to an end... love HAPPY ENDING<3.. Deetha u r FAB writer.. M Toh big FAN of ur ff,ss,os..!! waiting for ur otHER updates especialy BAATCUTTER please update ASAP !!