#@$BARRED IN$#.(KR ) ss *title changed.note pg 18 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
aaawww...

a beautiful ending to a lovely story... 😳

lovely yar...

in this story... rey was a total different character... a non romantic guy... who evr thought abt it... 😆

lovely yar... fabulous update...

loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

omggg!!!!!!!!!!!!! deethuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i m dead 😃

hayee!!!!!!! full to filmy 😃
awww dey are one finally...n i m soo hoppy happy ryt nw 😊

meri pyari neend 🤣
aww poor rey...hahahahahahahaha
dis is da after effects of love dear rey 🤣 😉

hawww 😲...listening gals tok wo b chup chup kr...bad manners rey...😉

bt i love da way he confess her...no luv u shove u...sidha kiss...hayeee!!!!!!!!!😍 😍 😍
tjhe bade ache se pta h na ki mjhe kya acha lgega n kya ni...muhaaa :* :* :*

n dat garls grrr!!!!!!😡 😡
house wife kya talented ni hoti
bt love da way rey glares dem...my hero...choo chweet ❤️

n da last line in blue "LOVE IS NT MADE 4 U COZ U R LOVE" dis line jst took my heart 😳 😳 😳
i love dis alot...alot ❤️

n ab rey chain ki neend soyga 🤣 🤣...n usko ni sone dega 😳
i knw i m very naughty na...tbhi to tune name dia h naughty cat 😉 🤣
love u deethu ❤️ ☺️



awww!!!!!!! naughty cat...really u liked it this much...then im very happy ...ye tereliye tha and u loved it...isse jyaada kya chahiye...

haa rey ko na bohut saare bad manners hai...hamesha chup chup ke sab sunta hai 😛

toh aur kya ???? mujhe nahi toh kisko pata haa????* fuming with jealousy*

pata hai woh girls talk likhte waqt mujhe kitna bura laga

haa pata tha wo line tujhe bohut pasand aayega...😳


i know tum bohut nahi bohut jyaada hi naughty ho...

but phir bhi i love u 4r that ☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Wat an update deetha...amazingg
loved evry bit of it...wonderrfull
i love you nahi...directly kiss
kya baat
rey ko ab chain se neend aayegi...
Edited by Kriyansh_jaanu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
hey deetha di...

d update was really fabulous...

finally der r wat dey r meant to b...

kriyaansh...

at first toh u literally gave me a heart attack ven kriya signed d papers...

but but but...

aapka naam filmy queen correct hi hein... hehehehhe...

really d update was simply awesum...

thanx a lot fr d ss...

wish u cud continue it more...

never mind...
Edited by Born2Dance - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Wow deetha . . . . Awesome job! . . . I loved it 🤗
finally rey starts loving her . . . . . I'm so happy 🥳
din kharab kar diya . . . . 🤣 . . . Stupid reaction rey... She actually unveiled a feeling of love in ur heart & u r nt able to understand . . . . U r just connfffussedd 😆
haww . . . . Girly talk listening . . . Bad habbit rey,,,, but still gud job! 😃
pata to chala ki black me hot lagti hai . . . . .
& he's like---
hot?
really?
abbe kabhi thik se dekha bhi hai usko . . . . Toh pata chalega na. . . 😡 😆
damn! . . . Dat gals . . . . . Just b**ching abt her 🤬
but . . . Still they did a gud job . . . . Warna rey ko confess karne me kitne mahine lagte 🤣
vicky . . The saviour 👏 . . . . Jab bhi kriya divorce paper le ke baithti hai . . . . Vo tapak jata hai . . . . & kriya ko lecture deta hai sweet sa 😃
but rey amazed me . . . . 😛
he kissed her to say wat he thinks actually . . . . . .
& to tell her how much he's in love wid her now . . . . To stop her 4m going away . . . . . . Hayee . . . I'm just loving this moment... 😍
& thanx again to vicky for HOTT BLACK SAREE 😉
he hold her waist possesively . . . As to say- She's mine!!! ❤️
loved his mom's reaction 🤣
& finally the moment of love . . . . She's been longing for months . . . . ☺️
fab story! 👏 . . . . . I'll miss this for sure 😳
hope . . . . I've given u a lonnggg comment 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
it wass awsomme deetha yaar i red dis 1 twice i gtaa say it was soo cute and finally they are together yaar am soo happy god this update was supercool u shuld hav cntinued more oh well loved tghe way u ended it it was really cute
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
amazing!!really a good one!
Edited by Rumeli_GkD - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Awesome loved it.
Edited by marauder - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89

Wow this update was a total bliss to read dear.

At first you beautifully described how rey's feelings has been slowly growing for her. Then he scolded those girls for what they were talking on kria. His self realisation was also nice.

I loved Vicky and Kria's bonding in that. Vicky calling her baccha n all. Nice bro and sis feeling.

Then u gave us the scene when rey pulled her for a passionate kiss and kept on kissing her while she was trying to talk. Oh gosh deetha yeh ideas tu kahan se le aati hain. Each time u give us electric shocks with ur romantic scenes.

I also liked the part when rey holded her by the waist so proudly and took her to the party. I was also amused when rey's mom almost fainted when she saw KriYansh at the door.

Aur climax ka kya kehna out of this world.

Overall i really enjoyed reading this SS.


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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
wowee so nyc to c u all happy...

So finally swaron happend, i m rili happy 4 all d swaronians!! itzz tym 2 celebrate 4 u all guyzz...

its so pleasant 2 c after a long waiting happiness😃 prevailing in d forum!!

2moro aftr exam i ll surly watch dis epis. in YT , seeing ur happiness evn i m unable to prevnt myslf 4m watching it now!! but i have 2 wait, qki agar abhi dekh liya toh shayad kal xam mein concntration na lage..

we Kriyanshians have now hardly left wid a reson 2 b happy , yet i m 2day vry delightd 😊to c ur grinnig faces!!

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