Twist Of Fate Chapter8 Pg 118 27/07 NEW!

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Sarah

@Crazy_1001

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#501

Oh wow, that was well written! The diction absolutely brilliant, the sentence structure was excellent. The story of course was awesome!

Great job!

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rparash

@rparash

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#502

Loved it...Its awesome...😊

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bookadict303

@bookadict303

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Posted: 13 years ago

#503

Aawwwh :) continue sooon :)

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mak3mesmile

@mak3mesmile

Navigator

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Posted: 13 years ago

#504

I dont know how you do it? There's just a way to your writing that the reader cannot help but be captivated and completely mesmerized before they realize that the update has finished. I cannot explain how beautifully you write. I dont have favorites and that is why every ff i read means something important to me but i never pick favorites. But you, my dear, are something totally different. The story, the characters, the emotions in both your ffs are beyond perfect. All i have to say is thank you...thank you so much for such beautiful pieces of work that i have such pleasure reading. And i hope you never stop writing because till you keep writing you will have readers like me and many others to truly appreciate the hard work you put in.

I also realize that you might not read this comment but i really wanted to let you know that you are doing an outstanding job.

BTW i think this ff just might be my favorite ;)

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mythreye

@mythreye

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Posted: 13 years ago

#505

i just came across this FF. this is soo gud.. is so emotional and just simply fab... i love the way you portray the emotions... you are an excellent writer

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689471

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#506

Just came across your story. Brilliantly written! It's erupting all sorts of emotions in me. Arnav guilt has been his punishment while Khushi's love for him has been her punishment. They have not actually lived but just existed all these years. I really hope they can get pass their situation as it's quite obvious they deeply love each other but both unsure how to go about it.

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207shikha

@207shikha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#507

awww...it made me cry.! so much love...can't bear it.! arnav should know this how much his wife loves her..😭 aww it was really emotional and i completely loved it.