Twist Of Fate Chapter8 Pg 118 27/07 NEW!

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smile1412

@smile1412

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#511

Oh ... This is such a heart wrenching story! All those years of separation ... Unnecessary when they loved each other so much n still do... Still never late... Hope they get back together now!

Just caught up with this story... Thnx a lot or the pm! Can't wait o read the next update which is hopefully very soon!! :)

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#512

Really intense!

Nice update though.

Would really love to read more.

Awesome work,

Can't wait 😳

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ipkknd_lover

@ipkknd_lover

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#513

awww wish they would make up soon

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#514

This was like jaw droppingly amazing writing Sona! The pain and the passion so palpable!

Both pining away for each other, Arnav his stubbourn self, wanting to but not giving in? WHY!? *sigh* I feel for them both. She has adapted to his presence in her life again so easily inspite of the turmoil inside! The small gestures - the red, coffee, sugarfree! And the wistfulness in both their tones when they think about each other, I cant wait to be fair godmother and make everything perfect in their life! They belong together!! I hope Aashna is that catalyst! At least they are in each other's sight for now.

This really was beyond beautiful! You are an amazing writer Sona! :)

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purplekid

@purplekid

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#515

AWW! I loved it! Please please please continue soon!

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#516

*SIGH* !!!!!! That was one beautiful update !!!!!
From khushi's buying the red cloth and things for him, to his what if's, Khushi wanting him to touch her !!!!!! Perfect !!!!!!!!
Then the way you wrote in such an amazingly simple way about him knowing that aashna is his daughter !!!
The last part was wonderfully written !!!!! The last line beautiful !!!!! Hope arnav has it In him to forgive himself soon !!!
Can't wait to read more !!!! Thnx for the pm !!!! Update soon !!!