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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Omg really??? That was so hilarious, I am still laughing!!! Too funny Z!!!! Loved the OS 👏

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#152

lol 😆

Zahra

it was such a shocking end

all the time i thought it's khushi to whom arnav is worried about

ufff shayam ke hunger ka kuch nahi hoo saktaaa 🤣

loved it

ur first os has the same suspense and shocking essence which ur still carry in ur ongoing ffs

awesome work

thanks for giving us the opportunity to read all ur work

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beenish

@beenish248

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#153

😲 What The Lakshmi and Hariprakash ji 🤣 Oh My God Its so hilirious Di , i can't stop laughing 😆

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Zehra!🤣

I knew something was amiss when Khushi's name wasn't mentioned. And then even Devyani was mentioned by her name.

But still...Laxmi?😆

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Nikita

@zoobie-doobie

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Da eff did i just read ??
Omgee it was simply hilarious! 😆
Like seriously...HP and Laxmi 🤣
i'm absolutely speechless!

Edited by zoobie-doobie - 11 years ago

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sheshnag1952

@sheshnag1952

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

seriously os on laxmi and hariprakash. was very hilarious. when i finished reading i was like 😃😃😃that was wonderful. and zeher when u post your other stories. am desperate to read them .as i have read non of it.

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Shraya Biswas

@ShrayaBiswas

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#157

WHAT THE.!!!!!! hahahaha...I was totally numbed with shock at the end..!!! :D :D xD

too good...too good...awesome ...hats off to you..!!!! xD

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bridgeofdreams

@bridgeofdreams

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#158

What the?!

LOL!

This was your first attempt? So you have been writing shocking OS' s from the very beginning. Impressive.

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Vishwa

@-Inferno-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#159

🤣 That ending tho!

Awesome!

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Tapdance

@Tapdance

Rocker

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#160

A twist in the tale from your 1st piece of writing😆..

Intruiging your stories are.. always:D

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