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kharunya

@kharunya

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#121

wonderful OS. I want to read it fully

Will you please give the blog link

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suma.2911

@suma.2911

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

really like your writing style.. would love to read more of your work. - whimsicalArcher here!

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soniachammu

@soniachammu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

It's about Hari Prakash haha

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Sj236

@Sj236

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

ha ha ha!!! Hilarious ending! I was reading it wid such concentration and now laughing like crazy!!!
Hari Prakash and Lakshmi Ji! Seriously!!
All dat gash on d neck and d pool should have given me d guess *LOL* yet another fantastic work of urs reposted
thanx a lottt for dis :)
and for all the other works u hav posted.
I really wish every writer would b kind enough to do this.

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aysemLDG

@aysemLDG

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

While reading I was trying to predict who 'He' and 'She' were. I thought of almost everyone in Raizada Mansion except Arnav and Khushi. Because as far as I know from your writing skill and cute little tricks, It couldn't be Arshi. That's why, I assumed that they were Akash and Payal and I got confused about how could Shyam lust after Payal. But at the end, it turned out to be HP and Laxmi. It was totally a surprise for me.

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IamSwapnali

@IamSwapnali

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

haha.. nice twist.. I don't know how I had missed reading this

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

OMG !!! U got us there lazy!
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Skiran

@Skiran

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Congratulations for the second anniversary of the start of your works Zehra 👏 🥳

I remember Itu asking you about this and that its about Lakshmi, so I couldn't stop laughing while reading imagining Lakshmi, if not for that information I would have imagined Khushi in the place of Lakshmi 😆

The black mark on her flawless white skin 🤣

Entertaining and fun OS Zehra 👏