FF:SUPERNATURAL-Chapter 12(Updated on Page 41)

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purplekid

@purplekid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#251

Really liked the bar scene! The switching of languages? LOL! Then Sam and Payal sound really cute! :) Loved the update, and I hope you get back soon, so we can have an update! :)

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#252

The bar fight was so freaking awesome! And then the switch of languages,terrific!

I am so in love with the dialogues you use for the characters! I can't wait to use Dean's "Woah! That's a lot of freakin'!" . completely heart this line.

And Sam and Payal are so cute! Sam literally makes me aww every time he smiles!

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Manal

@...manal...

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: peppygeek
The bar fight was so freaking awesome! And then the switch of languages,terrific!
I am so in love with the dialogues you use for the characters! I can't wait to use Dean's "Woah! That's a lot of freakin'!" . completely heart this line.
And Sam and Payal are so cute! Sam literally makes me aww every time he smiles!

I am glad you liked it! I have a horrible sense of humor and I mean it. I have no idea how I come up with those crazy dialogues. Has to be the awesomeness of the characters of the show. They inspire me.
I will never stop saying this...your comments make me SUPER HAPPY!

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Amy

@mz.brar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#254

omg omg omg!!!! thank you sooo much!! i love the fact that khushi cussed him out in hindi!!! awwa and payal and sam soo cute! i knew there would be an instant attraction btw the 2.

So Payal knows about the supernatural world,awesome! y do i get the feeling that soemthign might come after her in order to get revenge on khushi.[or possibly use payal as leverage agains sam!] errr ya sorry thinking to far ahead😆
Have fun on vacation!

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riddhima11

@riddhima11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#255

hey manal..
just came across ur ff.. nd i read the ten chapters in one go..
while reading the story i was constantly thinking of how to actually thank u n appreciate u of the most unique concept you have come up with...
u know, i love supernatural like anything.. n Dean is... i have no words...
m sooo thankful to u for writing something like this bcoz m a big IPKKND fan also...
so first of all a biggg thank u n loads of luv..
now coming to the story.. i like the way u have portrayed each n every character... i mean they have their original essence but still there is this new touch to their lives bcoz of ur fab writing skills...
i have so much to say... but seriously m finding no words...
i also like the way you have patiently introduced the characters to each other...
i love Dean n Arnav without a doubt... n felt bad about Lavanya..even though u hooked her up with Arnie.. 😃
u are an amazing writer... n i would say keep up the good work..
plz pm me.. whenever u update..
continue soon..

loads of love
take care
-pankhuri

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blore94-chennai

@blore94-chennai

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#256

OMG... WHAT an update.. wah.!!

lol.. arnie.. tumhara kya hogaya yaar...

loved the part of .. in tht case... frm kushi.. lol...

and also "ummm.. wht did she say arnie.?.. dnt call m arnie again.

haha... hilarous...

nice update...

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--Sobi--

@--Sobi--

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#257

Loved chapter 9 and chapter 10!!

They are just amazing...I love how u are making a pair of Payal and Sam.

I just cant stop loving Dean...I would love to hear him say Arnie!!!

And as Dean said...that's a lot of loving for a day!!

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@flowers4u

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#258

love it...kushhi showed him with the hindi ...lol. keep on writting...

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Batool Imran

@nav_bat

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#259

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Heya Manaal,

Oh so you are going for vacations? I am going to be missing updates from this FF of your so much, I absolutely loved it, in fact this Chapter was an absolute knock out.👏❤️

Arnav and Khushi, are two hto headed maniacs really!😆 They both are on each others throats even before they knew eachother.😆 'Amateur Hunter'? 🤣 Is Arnav seriosuly crayz or does he throw his brains cells awya when hot on anger?🤣 Khushi wa sright to act the way she did, after all Payal was hardly at fault and Arnav's temper is much more 'bad' than the 'bad' word itself.🤣

Dean, Man he is effingly rocking! The most down cast, f**ked up character in the whole FF, and I am absolutely all over him after this chapter.☺️ And he called Khushi 'Shakespeare' seriously? I thought it would be better if he went with 'Jefferson Starships' with her.🤣

Dean leaned in and whispered in Sam's ear. "Dude. She is the one I was talking about. The bar tender chick. Damn! I tried so hard...but she won't give me her number!"

Now I know what Payal meant by 'shamelessly flirting' 🤣 If this is not being a shamelss flirt, than what is?🤔

Her surprise at knowing she was an Indian was a die for scene seriously it was, I was like, oh man Khushi Kumari Gupta is on fire now.😆

Khushi furiously turned to face Arnav yet again and sneered. "In that case...kutte...kameene...teri himmat kaisi hui meri dost...Khushi Kumari Gupta ki dost ko sabke samne bezat karne ki? Devi Maiyaa ki kasam...chodungi nahin...dekh lungi!" With that said, Khushi grabbed Payal's hand and stormed out the bar, leaving behind a flabbergasted trio of brothers.

And this, this was the last blow to my already badly acheing stomach, because I absolutely went mad with laughing at this. And the look on the two Winchestere face is just something I can imagine. Typical it should be, like the one I have when people blabber in French in front of me.🤣

'Arnie', okay that is the most heart throb word ever, I tell you seriosuly, whever he says that I go into a fit of giggles, even insaner than the one which Anjali keeps having in the show for no reason at all.☺️

Next time Dean says, that I wont be surprised that Arnav will be lighting his corpse of an angry spirit, instead of some other Tom, Dick and Harry's.🤣

Sam-Payal, interesting. You know what I had this feeling on the back of my head for a long time that you would end up having them as a couple, and I am glad it happened that way. 😳 😳 And Khushi was so right with that 'sane' dialouge about Sam. He surely is the only right minded guy in the trio of the Winchester brothers.😳

I am preety depressed, that I will have a long time to pass, until we can get the next update,🥺 But, then, still keeping all my glitches aside, Happy Holidays to you, and have a absolutely splendid vacation.🤗

The update was an absolute die for, considering its a god one to last for a long time now.😳

Thankyou so much for the Pm.

Love,

Batool😳

Edited by nav_bat - 13 years ago