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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank God Payal got fired!!!
Loved the update!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
😉 ooohhh don't mess with Payal !!! Loving her fiesty and that of Khushi, I know I keep saying it but such an effortless read 👏 well done Manal x
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update...guessing that arnav got payal fired...continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Reserved For Chapter 7 comment.
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Hey Manaal,
Sorry for being so lousy at commenting since the last few chapters, I have had a very busy month, and had to fullfill my reader promises of updating my FF's before i get to some reading.
So Arnav and Dean are on logger heads? Interesting.😆 I was expecting that too happen anyway, Dean never seems to get along with people who are anti-family.😆
That FBI shamble of the Winshesters is the most rocking part of Super Natural. The two of them look so heroic in it.😍 Though after Season 4 specially Sam looks awfully broad in them, i wonder why, they dont suit him as much as they did before.
Arnav here is his typical ASR, is he not? And Sam I pity the guy, he looks to be the most methodically working fellow, who is keeping up with the recked case of his two brothers. Well hes the middle aged one, so much much to expect from him to handle the banter of the two hot heads (this if figurative as well as literal.☺️)
Haha, Dean going Gaga over Khushi? Not much of a surprise there, he seems to be hooked to almost every other girl in town. Hadnt it been for freaking ghost, he woudnt mind catching every other ghost named 'lust'.😆
And what was Khushi so flustered about? I didnt exactly get what you were trying to get too from that, it hit me odd off her to fled from the crime scene just like that, as if she knew FBI would doubt her or something.🤔
Arnav and Khushi's first meet was beyong words. They always meet with a bump or something or that sort, I guess its nature for these two, he seems to be the wall she always clumsily falls onto when she is in some dead fix.😳 How ironic.😳
I still feel bad for La really, I adored her character, was a really sweet thing to be lovable, its bag enough that she had to end up on the cieling burning because of some sicko demon.😡
ArHi, eye locks are always awesome.😃
I will be commenting on the remaining two chapters as soon as I catch up on them.😳
This story is getting really interesting.
Brilliant job done by you dear!👏
And instant efortless read I must say.👏
Thankyou so much for the Pm.😉
Love,
Batool😳
Edited by nav_bat - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Reserved for Chapter 8 comment,I am extremely sorry for the delay Manaal, have been having too much on my plate these days. 😳
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Heya Manaal,
Once again sorry for the delay dear but I just coudnt help it, So coming to the chapter, dear, it was just the awesomest chapter so far, I mean all the three Winchesters together although on odd terms but that doesnt matter much, since Khushi barged in too, and man I already fell in love with her character, its so downright out casted!👏👏
Going in order,
Arnav-Dean banter is the bestest one ever. They never fail to bore me, in fact in between all there rambling, poor Sam looks to me like Big Brother.😆 He must be cursing his fate for landing him into such a mess of people, who have literally lost there nuts.😆
Arnav, is man he already made me a great fan of his.😍 That audacity in his sarcasm, that roughness in his words, its all so mesmerizing I was dazed for a while, in between reading thinking about him.😍
Dean, man he can never stop being hillarious can he?🤣 That Batman thing cracked me up to bits.🤣 And Arnav-Dean saving Sam, I wish I wish we could have more detail to that case.😳
Arnav is already having hunches about Khushi, a misunderstanding without any talks? Now that is what I call ArHi stuff!🤪 *rolling her eyes in exasperation*. Sams too sorted for a hunter, really he seems to be the best in the lot (though i have a nagging feeling that I am wrong, instead Arnav is better), but still that composure of his, its absolutely enchanting.😍 And that 'Dean in Lala Land', that dialouge had me ROFLing, although I would have liked the sound of it even better if Arnav would have said the same thing.🤣
Oh I know, I was whining over that angry spirit fiasco case just like Dean, we have just a lot of these cases in Super Natural, every other mad spirit, is either seeking out revenge, or just lost his nuts and then killed him/her self in redemption.🤢 How sick can that be?🤢 I hope that pervetwa Shyamo lands up that way (Out of context in this FF, but just felt like mentioning).😳
Haha, so Khushi solved the case before them? Now how good can that be like seriosuly, she is the smarter out of the whole lot of those three Winchester. Khushi is one outspoken girl really! And Aranv-Khushi bickering was something I was eagerly looking forward too, Thanks alot for including it.🤗
Another Cheers, for Sam for being the realistic one out of the three, and not actually yanking the hell out of her. And btw, she eats Jalebi's where did she get them from in USA, or was she frying them in the cementary to awaken the corpses?🤣
Dean being Dean coudnt have resisted talking to her after all could he ever?😉 And shes smart enough to not tell her name, Dean would be on her heels all the time trying to have a try at her hooking up with him, or them atleast sharing a kiss to the least.😆
On a serious note, I absolutely adore your Khushi, she is what I call bombastic, the real phataka!🤣
Loved this chapter to bits, absolutely hooked to this blend of two different serials.😃
You are doing an awesome job with it!
Thanks alot for the Pm.
Love,
Batool😳
Edited by nav_bat - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Reserved for Chapter 9.
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Heya Manaal,
Whew, for the third time in the last hour and a half I have been writing the same greeting editing my comments for the chapters, since I only just caught up on them.
Now I know why people prefer short chapters, because it doesnt take long to catch up on them, unlike mine over sized updates in my FF, my poor readers, I do pity them, now that I realize I am one too. You know what I am very lazy, so dont usually comment, but this FF of yours compels me to comment, most probably because of my love for these two serials which I absolutely love to the core. Though I do think Super Natural 7, is a set back to the previous 6 Seasons, I dont know why but I dont find it as interesting as the previouse ones. This is definetly the worst thing that has happened to me.
Erm, sorry for the rambling, just got carried away.😳 So now to the update,
Khushi and Payal have no blood relation for a change thats a absolute wow! So they are childhood besties, now that earns another big WOW from me! I loved how soundly Khushi knows Payal, and her calm nature, and her losing her calm appearing to her as a VERY BIG deal. The need of Jalebis of Khushi to calm her nerves down and get her to thinking straight cracked me up!🤣 Great thinking over there!😃 Haha, three nutheads was alright, but showing attitude from the three nut ehads did not go good with me. I feel for Sam, the poor guy didnt say anything to her at all, he is unnecessarily being dragged into Dean and Arnav fiesty nature over her being a hunter *making a lop sided look*. Payal pays for Khushis jalebies, that is at a moment sweet of her, and outrageous of Khushi to burden her expenditure on her friend.Gosh! She is Sanky here too.🤣
Sure enough, I can say Arnav was the 'angry young man', and Dean the 'shameless flirt'.🤣 Just like Arnav to have a bartender fired out of her job, just because she has just forgotten to put ice in his drinks.😆 Typical him.😳 So the two Guptas are both at odd terms with the Winchesters, this coudnt get any better!😃
On logger heads once again are these two arent they?😆 Man this is certainly show down time! The two are head on head with eachother, he was fuemd because of her, and now she becomes fumed because him, and now this combined fury will get into another disaster. I am expecting Dean to watch back and have fun, while still trying his best to hit on Payal.🤣 And where is our brainy Sam Winchesters, its a good thing he got his tim off from these two roasters.🤣
Not very eventful this chapter was, but one that is going to invite a lot more tustles for Arnav and Khushi.😃
I woudnt say this is the best chapter so far, but certainly take my word its not ad abd as you think it it. You should be mighty contented with it.😳
Thankyou so much for the Pm.
P.S: I hope my delay makes up for my seperate comments on all the three chapters.
Love,
Batool😳
Edited by nav_bat - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
should have known it would be him who else has anger issues for small things but arnav
man looking forward to the next one now
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG To the power of loved your update :D
CUTTO my baby im so so so sorry for commenting so late :/ I love you and have a safe flight :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hiya! Another chapter! Yay! So, this is going to be the last chapter I will be posting before I go on vacation. I will be flying tomorrow. I will try my best to update if I can. I would like to thank all of you who take out time to read my crazy work, hit the like button & leave wonderful comments! You guys are the best!😳
I would love to dedicate this chapter to 'nazibah'. She has been reading, liking and commenting right from the beginning. She has been very motivating all the way long. I would like to thank her for her appreciation and kindness. Love you girl! 🤗 This one's for you! I hope I don't disappoint you! 😳 Hope you all enjoy!

Chapter 10- Start of Something New

"YOU!"

"YOU!"

They both shouted in unison, their fingers pointed at the other accusingly.

Khushi's eyes were set to pop out of her sockets and Arnav's head was ready to burst. He buried his face in his hands while Khushi tried pulling her hair off her roots. If it wasn't for Payal stopping her, Khushi would have definitely been bald by now.

Dean, who was in the middle of gulping down a big bite of his grilled cheese burger, spat the piece out. Sam's drink shot right out his mouth and onto Dean's handsome face. "Sammy!" He cried out disbelievingly as he gathered a pile of tissues and began wiping his face.

Arnav raised his face from his hands and frowned at Khushi. "Are you following me...you...you amateur hunter?"

Khushi's mouth formed a wide O. "Amateur? Did you just call me an amateur hunter? Ha! Is that why I solved the case before you yesterday? You...you...hot headed maniac?"

"Don't talk to me like that. Nobody talks to me lik.."

Dean got off his stool and went over to Khushi in hope of lightning the atmosphere but didn't realize...he had actually made it worse. He show- cased his killer smirk. "Shakespeare? What are you doing here?"

"Ask your friend about that! He is the reason we are here!"

Arnav's eyebrows furrowed in confusion. "Me? What did I do?"

Sam butted into the conversation. "Yeah. What did he do? And who is we?"

Khushi pushed Payal forward. "My friend. Your stupid friend got my best friend fired just because she didn't put two freakin' ice cubes in his freakin' drink to calm his freakin' mind!"

Dean smiled. "Woah! That's a lot of freakin'!"

Arnav glared at Dean while Sam stood puzzled. "Ummm...what are they talking about? Arnav? You got her friend fired? But when?"

Khushi heaved a sigh of relief and smiled at Sam. "Finally! The sane one steps in! You know...I knew it right from the beginning...you are the only normal one out of the lot! Yeah...so...your partner's love for ice cubes cost my friend her precious job! And neither I nor my friend will take that shit from anyone!" She pointed her finger at Arnav. "Especially not him!"

Dean leaned in and whispered in Sam's ear. "Dude. She is the one I was talking about. The bar tender chick. Damn! I tried so hard...but she won't give me her number!"

Sam turned and looked at Payal. He couldn't help but stare. She was without doubt, one of the most beautiful women he had come across in months. Her long luscious dark brown hair cascaded down her back. Her big hazel eyes were laced with worry and tension. She nervously kept chewing her bottom lip. Arnav and Khushi's bickering pulled him out of his sweet reverie. He rolled his eyes and placed his hand on Arnav's shoulder. "Arnav. Apologize and let go. It was your fault. She lost her job unnecessarily." Payal smiled slightly at Sam.

Arnav shrugged Sam's shoulder and looked at him incredulously. "My fault! It is not my fault that she wasn't able to follow orders properly. And Arnav Singh Raizada never...mark my words...never apologizes!"

"Arnav?! You...you are Indian?! How didn't I notice that before? No wonder! You do have Indian looks."

Dean laughed. "That is how Arnie is. He doesn't let anybody know anything about him. But Shakespeare...why do you sound so surprised?"

"It's Khushi. Quit calling me Shakespeare. And I am an Indian too."

"Oh."

Khushi furiously turned to face Arnav yet again and sneered. "In that case...kutte...kameene...teri himmat kaisi hui meri dost...Khushi Kumari Gupta ki dost ko sabke samne bezat karne ki? Devi Maiyaa ki kasam...chodungi nahin...dekh lungi!" With that said, Khushi grabbed Payal's hand and stormed out the bar, leaving behind a flabbergasted trio of brothers.

Arnav tightened his stubbled jaw while Sam and Dean stood perplexed. After what seemed like ages of stunned silence, Dean spoke. "Ummm...what did she just say Arnie?"

Arnav gritted his teeth and muttered, "Dean. This might be the last time I am warning you. Don't. Call. Me. Arnie. Again!"

They were so involved in their arguing that they didn't notice Sam slip through the crowd and exit the bar.

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Sam couldn't tolerate the constant arguing between Arnav and Dean. He needed some fresh air. He slipped through the crowd and made his way out the bar, surprised to see the same girl standing alone on the pavement. He didn't know why...didn't know how...his feet automatically made its way towards her.

"He...hey..."

Payal was waiting for Khushi to bring the car from the parking lot when someone called behind her. She jumped in shock and looked back.

"Relax. It's me."

Payal rested her hand on her heart. "Oh..."

There was an awkward silence between the two for a few seconds.

"I am..."

"I am..."

They began at the same time and then smiled.

"You first." Sam said.

"Ummm...I...I am really sorry for all that happened inside. Khushi shouldn't have talked to your friend like that. Actually...she is pretty overprotective when it comes to me. I apologize on her behalf."

"Nah. You don't have to be sorry. It wasn't her fault alone. She was doing what any other friend would do. Arnav shouldn't have done what he did. I apologize on his behalf. He...he has a very bad temper."

"Yeah. I noticed that. It's OK." Payal couldn't help but admire him. It was impossible how someone could be appealing to such an extent. She was mesmerized by the mischievous dimples that studded his cheeks when he flashed a smile, his grayish blue eyes and the flop of sandy brown hair that lazily drooped over his forehead.

"Thanks. I am Sam." Sam held his hand out.

Payal smiled and shook his hand. "And I am Payal."

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Edited by seriallover17 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Res:

Yipee! Me first :)

Edited:

Fabulous update!

Wow! Sam and Payal, sounds nice!

I was giggling like an idiot when Khushi abused him in Hindi, and giggled harder when Dean asked Arnav what she said!

I actually, really liked the way Dean called Khushi Shakespeare. I found it very cute :)

Enjoy your trip! :D

Edited by Tanitha - 13 years ago

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