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Posted: 13 years ago
😳😆I LOVE SUPERNATURAL. . .BOTH THE SERIAL AND FANFIC. . .😉JUST AWESOME . . YOURWRITING THATIS.SAM AND DEAN SOUNDS EXACTLY LIKE WHAT THEY WOULD HAVE IF THIS WAS THE ACTUAL SERIAL👏. . ; .HMMM SEEMS LIKE SAM HAD TAKEN A FANCY FOR PAYAL😉COME TO THINK OF IT,THEY WILL BE A GREAT MATCH. . . BOTH SENSITIVE AND SENSIBLE!! THOUGH IN CASE OF PAYAL ITS THE FIRST ONE THAT IS PROMINANT😆SOOO I KNOW THAT ARNAV AND KHUSHI IS GONNA END UP TOGETHER ANYWAY. . . BECAUSE OFCOURSE THEY ARE THE PROTAGONISTS,DUH!😆SINCESAM AND ARNIE ARE GONNA BE WITH PAYAL AND KHUSHI WHY DONT YOU HOOK ME UP WITH DEAN???!!😆IT WOULD BE A GREAT TWIST .. . (NO CLAPS PLEASE😳) SO HAVE A GREAT VACATION AND PM ME WHEN YOU UPDATE😛OH AND ACCEPT MY BUDDY REQUEST ,WONT YOU?
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Helllooo!!!!! I can't believe this! I finally get to come to India- Forums! I missed you all sooo much! Here is another chapter! Hope you all like it! LOVE YOU ALL!

Chapter 11- Wounds

"Where in the world did I park the car?" Khushi questioned herself while twirling the car keys between her fingers. She clearly couldn't get her mind to remember where she had parked her car. "This is all because of that Laad Governor." She kept muttering. "If our paths would have never crossed, Payal would have never lost her job, I wouldn't have abused anyone in public humiliating myself and I wouldn't be here finding my car in a god forsaken parking lot like an idiot!" She didn't even realize when she found her car. Her face instantly lit up on seeing Blush, her car. "There you are my baby! I have been looking for you for ages!" She patted the top of her car and unlocked the door. "Time to go home Blush…. away from all this mess and especially that Laad Governor!"

"How dare you Miss Khushi Kumari Gupta?"

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"I wonder why Khushi's taking so long to bring the car."

"Don't worry…she'll be back." Sam said reassuringly.

Payal smiled. "So Sam….have you always been into hunting?"

Sam smiled back. "Nope. Let's just say…hunting was the last thing I'd ever wanted to do. But…times change….and we have to change….. whether we like it or not. It's…it's a long story. Will tell you some time later."

"You will?"

Sam took a step closer. "Yeah….if you would like to know."

"I would love to."

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"How dare you Miss Khushi Kumari Gupta?"

Khushi's head shot up and hit the rim of the door. "Ouch!" She put a hand on her head and rubbed it back and forth to stop the augmenting pain. She turned and glared at him. "Seriously? Are you on a 'Let's Torture Khushi' mission? Man…that hurt. Ow!"

"I don't care! How dare you abuse me in front of everyone?"

"Why? What about the embarrassment you put my friend through just because she forgot to put ice cubes in your drink? She lost her job for crying out loud!"

"Don't talk to me like that! Nobody talks to me like that."

"Why shouldn't I? Everybody has the right to be defensive when it comes to family. Wouldn't you do the same? Wouldn't you fight for your family….your friends? And who the hell are you to tell me what to do and what not? Laad Governor kahin ka!"

Arnav clenched his teeth as he felt his patience thinning every passing second. "Just stop it."

"Why should I stop? Didn't your parents teach you any manners? Is this how you behave with…."

That is when whatever that was left of Arnav's patience came crashing down. He strode towards her and ferociously grabbed her wrists. He pushed her against the cold pillar and pinned her wrists above her head. "I. Said. Stop. It."

His face was dangerously close to Khushi's now. A chill ran down her spine. For the first time Khushi Kumari Gupta was unable to speak. If looks could kill, Khushi would have died a thousand deaths by now. Nobody had ever held her like this before. Nobody had stood so close to her like this before. Nobody had ever dared to. But today she felt different. Was she terrified or was she nervous?

Arnav's hold on Khushi tightened and he leaned in even closer….so close that even air would have to struggle to make its way through between them. He whispered, "Don't you dare say anything about my parents. You don't know them and you never will. Don't you ever….ever question their upbringing again. I don't have my parents which is why I value them. But how would you know that? You have your parents. Their comfort. Their support. Everything. You don't know a thing about loss….what it's like to see them slowly fade away right before your eyes. You will never feel the excruciating pain in your heart. Never. So, don't you dare talk about my parents or family again."

Arnav held her wrist even tighter. Khushi's hands turned pale and she could feel the flow of her blood halt. A tear trickled down her cheek. "You…you are hurting me."

Arnav tilted his head to see their hands against the pillar. He realized that he had been holding too tight and he instantly let go. He swiftly turned his back at her and closed his eyes upon realizing that he had said a little too much about himself and Arnav Singh Raizada never lets anyone see through him.

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Sam leaned against the lamp post on the sidewalk. "So…..has your friend always been a hunter?"

"Khushi? Oh yeah. Always. She is a born hunter. It's in her blood. It's her passion. The only thing her parents left behind for her. The passion for hunting."

"Left behind? Where are her parents? Are they…"

"Dead. Died while hunting. Her father's best friend was kind enough to take her in." Payal whispered. Sam noticed the change in Payal's tone. The grief and pain for her friend evident on her face. He tried to digress from the topic. "Ummm….Payal…I think Khushi's gone for too long now. We better go check."

"Yeah. We should." Payal agreed. She was stepping down the pavement when she felt her ankle twist and her foot slip. Sam instantaneously put his arm around her petite waist to prevent her from falling while Payal wrapped her arms around his broad chest to keep herself steady.

"Hey….it's OK. You're OK. Don't worry." Payal opened her eyes and looked up. They stood that way, safe in each other's warmth for what felt like ages.

"OK Romeo and Juliet. If you two are done enacting your love scene…how about we head back to the motel?" Sam and Payal turned to notice a frustrated Dean standing by the entrance to the bar. An embarrassed Payal pulled away from Sam's embrace, her cheeks a flush of pink. Sam ran his fingers through his light brown hair. "Yeah Dean. Let's go. Where is Arnav?"

Dean shrugged his shoulders. "Don't know. He stormed out of the bar through the back door five minutes ago. Looked like he was surely gonna kill someone."

Payal started biting her nails. "Oh my god! What if Arnav and Khushi are fighting again……in the parking lot? We must go and check!"

She looked up. Sam caught the glint of hope in her eyes when she would see him. He placed an assuring hand over Payal's shoulder. "Don't worry. Let's go."

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"I….I am sorry. I can understand. I didn't mean to hurt yo…."

Arnav turned to face her. "Please. Save it Khushi. I don't need this melodrama."

"But….I didn't know about your paren…."

"I said ENOUGH!"

Khushi flinched at his loud voice.

"Arnav!"

"Khushi!"

Sam, Payal and Dean came running towards them. Sam and Dean observed the tension coiled between the two. Without further delay, they pushed Arnav inside the Impala. They couldn't afford any more arguments. Sam and Payal nodded at each other before the three drove off.

Payal could feel Khushi shiver as she held her. The color from her face had drained out and her tears wouldn't care to stop. She shook Khushi to bring her back to her senses. "Khushi! Khushi! What happened? Did he…did he do something wrong? Khushi…… speak up!" Payal noticed her friend's bruised wrists. "Did he do this? Khushi? Let's go back home. We need to put some ointment on that." She carefully seated Khushi inside the car and shut the door.

Khushi touched the skin of her wrists that were slowly turning a shade of purple. He had bruised her body. But she was terribly hurt. He had left a thousand….incurable wounds all over her soul. And it would take a long time to heal.

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Eee loveddd ittt😃

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Loved it! Please please please continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Khushi and Arnav Where They Meet They Always Fight.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Poor Khushi.
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Edited by Artemis678 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heya Manaal.🤗
First of all, so sorry for unRESing this comment, after what is like an eternity, but I just feel like commenting, and wanted it to be done in complete sense.😳😳
Okay, so getting to the chapter, I love the title of the chapter.❤️ 'Wounds', it gives such a realstic feel to what lies ahead in the chapter for us.🤗 Great Job with that!❤️
Her cars name is 'Blush'? OMG!😲 Why does that ring a bell in my head, someone else car is named Blush too right?😉 Deans, yes his baby is called Blush na?😉 Now, Khushi even stole that, Aww my poor poor Dean.😆
Honestly saying I am absolutely loving the Sam-Payal coupling,❤️ OMG! They are just soo effing adorable.❤️ Development! That Development! Payal told Sam about Khushi being a orphan, I am sure when Arnav knows hes going to go back to repenting, this makes me remind of that one episode in IPK, when it was Arnav's mother barsi, and Khushi came in to offer her sympathy and he basked her senslessly, then kept fidgetting for saying sorry to her when he realized that they had a a lot in common, and that she too was a orphan.😳 OMG! That episode was so herat touching, for someone like me who hardly cries or gets sentimental, those scenes Iw as on the verge of busting into tears.😭 And this chapter it brought exact memories of all that! Thankyou so much for your aptly done job!🤗 I am glad I reading something so worth it!😃
Parents. How pivotal is there existence in Arnav-Khushi's love story? If you ask me, since I dont see any Anjali here, Arnav's life goes back and forth to his parents, and as much as he thinks he hates his dad, John Winchester, he really doesnt I know. You cant hate blood you never can, he still has that space in his heart for him, but he tends to just hide it always.😳
And, then after all its all about FAMILY. There life is all about FAMILY, and I think that is the most common ground between IPKKND and SuperNatural, because well their stories starts from families, rotates around it and comes back to families yet again.😳 For Dean and Sam hunting started for Family, for love, and for Arnav and Khushi, they met because of fate, but fought because of family, seperated because of family, and are now together because of their family. How ironic.
OMG! That Sam-Payal scene, seemed something like a Rabba Ve scene.😆 And Dean, poor bloke is always the one with no girl at all.🤣 Considering the efforts he applies in having them, in comparision with his other two brothers, who seem to be doing not much and cna still easily attract girls.❤️ I feel for Dean and his fate I really do.😳
And after all behind that hard exterior she still had the heart of a girl, and whatever just might be it, she feels her pain, she connects with him, and that is the most despised thing of all, he cannot bear having anybody see through him, because whenever he has he has always lost that person.😳 Khushi's pain I could feel it, and I dont think Arnav was wrong either, probably because we understand that its in his nature. The last paragraph,
Khushi touched the skin of her wrists that were slowly turning a shade of purple. He had bruised her body. But she was terribly hurt. He had left a thousand….incurable wounds all over her soul. And it would take a long time to heal.
Yes, this was definetly what stole my heart.❤️ How aptly you have put what is in her heart in such summarized senses.❤️ Loved it completely.😃
It was an absolutely hti update, and I am dieing to read more of this amazing story! 👏
Thankyou so much for the Pm.😳
Keep doing a great job with this😃
Love,
Batool😳
Edited by nav_bat - 13 years ago
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Hey Manal..I liked the update, Arnav so true to his character, he has been head down in the world of misery, and when a person is that, a feeling of self-importance, takes place, which is why when Arnav feels victimized by his broken family he fails to see people around him. Arnav fails to acknowledge the miserable life Sam and Dean have lived, Arnav fails to even comprehend that others around him also have a life. It was his pre-conceived notion that Khushi life is a happy fairytale.

It is the tongue which can break a heart, and for Khushi it was a mended one, i was surprised that Khushi tried to mend things by a sorry instead of lashing out at him, but tht's just so Khushi.
All in all i rlli liked the scene, Wonderfully written. I would say it again, You have amazing narration skills! 😳
At the same time am wondering what next? There is no clue of the future developments once again :P 😆

Sam-Payal : Hmm m no fan of Payal, i never liked her, the makers never focused on her growth, background, or even the basic sketch. I would like it if you write more to her so that i can actually enjoy Sam-Payal scenes. Coz what i saw was Payal crying and Upset, Khushi enraged as in the show, Payal spoke of the sad events, Khushi fought for her. Actually you can easily shape up Payal's character to one with substance, because the show presents so less of her. It's just my POV i hope you dont mind, actually I am a fan of Dean and Sam, so when u pair up Payal with Sam, u get it.

Lastly i missed Dean, i will be honest here, he is my fav among the lot :P

Thanks for the PM, will be waiting for the next :)

Lots of Love
Zee :D



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