Shades Of Grey- CHAPTER 12 (PG-143) UPDATED!! - Page 29

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Posted: 13 years ago
WOAH! that was mind freakin blowing!
Like holy shit! What an update!
Khushi is on firee!
Dude you think she was mad?! weill i was seething right along with her.
Screw Adita, I was just about ready to bite Arnav's head off!
Daamn you guys are a talented duo!
Continue ASAP!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey there.
I think I this is some of the best writing on this forum. The Shyam-Anjali chapter-- I can sing its praises for eternity, it was so touching. At that moment, I probably felt sorrier for them than for even Arnav and Khushi. I would love to read more about both of these complicated, wounded characters, their intricacies and their relationship. I am also hoping Shyam will not turn out to be the villain of this story, at least. His feelings for Anjali were just too poignantly described for that. 😭
Coming to Arnav and Khushi, boy this guy has a thing for creating messes he can't get out of. I mean, HER kitchen? Seriously? I am amazed Khushi didn't whack him over his head and pour the peroxide over him for good measure. Though I am glad she is fuming and not drowning in self pity over her broken heart. I think Arnav still sees her somewhere as his teenaged ward rather than a physically and emotionally mature woman. But that is absolutely no excuse for such blatant callousness. I am waiting to see how he makes it up to her. I am also wondering what his reaction would be like if he ever finds himself in the position Khushi did that night? *rubs hands in glee*😉Till then, I am going to sit back and enjoy reading about Khushi terrifying ASR, for a change. High hopes from this story, of course. & need I say it? You two are FABULOUS together. 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was fabulous chapter...

K is such a strong a person...more so than A! She not only survived the night but had breakfast with that woman!

A is an idiot...he has no clue abt her K's feelings...just b/c she said they'll go back to old ways - what does he think? It's a switch???

I'm not sure how I want K to behave...i'll just read! :)

-Sona
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Posted: 13 years ago
This is so well written.. Totally had me gripped.. If you send PMs would love to be included on your list..if not will just have to stalk :)
Intrigued as to why u chose the name for the title though... :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing FF...I am glad I started reading this one...it's pretty interesting very different than the other ones as it says of love that's shared an incredible history, of pains and memories...
Arnav is a dead man now ..I am sure,,,how can he be so insensitive...he knows she loves him.. Then why doesn't he take his nightly adventures in a hotel or in his private bedroom..and not all over the house for her to explore!!
I love this Khushi.. She is bold, confident, and indecent woman...but she is also funny, cute, sweet, emotional and her usual bubbly self.
Loving it you girls, I became a fan of bingala's the games we play and your second chances and now I am fan of this...

P.S. the 3 rd chapter was unbearable full of Shyam...though the chapter was good...please don't do that with us again...we need Shyam in doses..not in a full chapter! Just a suggestion, it's your story, I am reading it nevertheless!!
Thanks for the pm!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome..👏 Every update just keeps getting better.. Loved it..😊 Arnav's definitely rubbed her fur the wrong way this time.. In her kitchen?? Her roses?? Damn.. that was too much.. Adita's going to be minced meet if she ever crosses Khushi's path again.. And well Arnav, I wish she had just thrown that empty vase at him.. 😉 (No..no.. violent tendencies, promise). 😉
Was almost smirking when Khushi gave him an earful.. 😆 Truly well deserved, must say.. So now Arnav's going to try n pacify her.. Its going to be a Herculean task, i guess..😉 Eagerly waiting for the next update.. Bingala and Gargee, you guys definitely need to take a bow for this one..I felt each and eevry emotion of Khushi's right from being attracted to him, jealous, heart-broken, shocked, hurt, her tears, being annoyed and her anger!! 😭 Whoaaa... Its brilliant!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh gr8...u get me into d thnkin process...while reading i have to intellectually awake...

Now lil Doubts dat i wnt to be cleared has Khushi told him dat she loves him...???

I dint get dat properly!!!...

Pls put an end to my confusion...n u dint Pm me dis tym!!!!...:(
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update!

Really Arnav - some tact maybe? Manners... Boundaries... Anything?

Wow, I can not wait for Khushi to explode in his face...

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Posted: 13 years ago
OH GOD!!!POOR KHUSHI...🥺
I DONT KNOW Y ARNAV COULDNT UNDERSTAND HOW MUCH IT HURTS HER😔
AWESOME UPDATE
CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 13 years ago
I resisted reading this FF till now (b'cz it is hard to keep up with so many FFs), but curiosity took over, and then i realize that am sucked into the excitement this wonderful and mesmerizing FF creates. Kudos to both the ladies for a great and entertaining work.

I loved this Kushi, she is kushi as well as ASR molded in one!!
ASR here, is far too mellowed towards kushi if not to others..he wants to be in her good books for a change..;)
And am loving the dynamics of all the characters..be it kushi, arnav, anjali or shyam..
Shyam and anjali's relationship is interesting and intriguing..
Bring in on ladies...am waiting eagerly ...;)
Thanks for the pm...

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