Shades Of Grey- CHAPTER 12 (PG-143) UPDATED!! - Page 31

wow the relationship of anji and shyam.. so different... he still is attracted to her but doesn't understand her at all...

oh how could Khushi forgive arnav.. if he doesn't reciprocate the feelings that is understandable.. but can't he give her some time to recover from the heartbreak...

awesome update.. loved it.. i never wanted it to end..

Ooo! Different side of Shyam.. He actually likes her and couldn't get hold of what exactly she thinks about him?? No wonder, with his past..!

fantastic update...

anjali's story z sad...

i liked khushi's comeback 2 the oldman...


thanks 4 d pm

Wow. I'm glad Anjali's doing something and not sitting back. I loved the ending! Fab update!

Brilliantly written...I loved Khushi in this one...she is super awesome...😊

I just want to let you know I'm angry-

I shall be right back when I cool down!

Harshu reporting!
*edits*
So lack of communication or
"difference of opinion" is the only
thing wrong between Shyam and
Anjali. . . .
Poor Shyam, though. . .
He's good in here, and yet, doesn't
have a successful married life! Oh, he
has the basic essentials! But just
that ain't enough in the long run, is it?
And Khushi! I mean, KHUSHI, KHUSHI,
KHUSHI!
Garguuu! I love you for making her
such a strong woman. Yeah, she's
putty in the hands of Arnav! *Oh,
wouldn't we all be??!!*
But she's oh-so-good!! GOOD, I say!
And I hate male chauvinists too!!
I've seen enough of such asses!!
So when I read Khushi blaring her
lungs out, it was like the thoughts in
my head coming out against my
boss!! Hopefully, I do get a chance to
actually do it too!! When I'll finally
quit!!
Oh! Just look how long my rambling
got! And I haven't yet told you about
Arnav's stratagem to get into Khushi's
good books!! It didn't take much now,
did it??
I'll tell just this!!
He's one lucky bas***d to have her in
his life, and I know that he knows it!!
He better realize that in the other ford
too!! Soon!!
Writers getting a clue too?! *wink
wink, nudge, nudge*

Fantastic story. I love this version of Khushi, ASR, despite his formidable brains, remaining an idiot as regards the most important things in life!
But the most interesting relationship is that of Shyam and Anjali, am glad you've given their relationship an extra dimension, an extra edge that is potentially explosive. I loved the vivid , almost photographic description of Anjali's clothes and jewellery that was fabulous.
Wonderful collaborative effort- very intersting to see where the shifts in authorship take place.
Am looking forward to the rest of the story.

I adore this concept.