Rules Of Attraction#2 Chapter29 Pg125 19/08

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#831

ohhh he's so sexy and damn she's adorable! they are both so sexy! the plane fainting thing was cute and the pub scene was ultra sexy but the highlight without a doubt was khushi's demand to go dancing and then dancing herself like a crazy person to boom boon boom! loved the update

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Shruti

@addicted2ksg

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#832

Oh my gooosh the end of this chapter hahaha :D So naughty!!

I love how protective Arnav is towards Khushi (wish he was more like this on the show too) :) Sweet update!

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Janet Grace George

@janetdennis

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#833

as always...great update...i totally love the way u write...eagerly waiting for the next update...

also for twist of fate...

thanks fr the PM

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Neha

@melovemayur

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#834

Whenever I start to read an update, I will be thinkin to use a word apart from beautiful..but always end up with that!

It was beautiful! Everything! Esp the last bit!

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jazzpreet

@jazzpreet

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#835

beautiful update. i love how arnav is always worried for her.

loved the last line too! cant wait for the next update! i hope they have an UHHMAZING time at the club!!! ;)

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#836

Finally we got the update 10Q. The update was really full of concern & care from Arnav. Poor guy got horrified when she fainted on him. I love the way Khushi seduce him to go out for dancing. OMG how sexy would have been when he said those line "I can't wait 2 get you naked Khushi" with his husky voice hope Khushi doesn't pass out again.😉

Edited by ndevi - 13 years ago

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#837

I'll just get this out of my system, Sister.

Fave line: "I can't wait to get you naked Khushi."

And, can I be writerly and say that if you had written "I can't wait to see you naked" or "I want you" or any such thing, it would have not have had the same impact. Don't ask me to explain why because these things are visceral, as you well know.

Accuse me of overusing the word "evocative" and I will accept it, because your writing is exactly that. You are one of those half dozen writers that when I see your PM in my Inbox, I immediately turn off my own music, because I know you will either include music or will transport me by your words alone. No distractions required.

Maya

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#838

Yay You updated!! Glad you are feeling better!!

Really good chapter.. like the struggles and apprehensiveness each of them is going through.. I am glad khushi has gotten back the will to live again!!!

Loved the last line!! HOT