Rules Of Attraction#2 Chapter29 Pg125 19/08

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#821

This update was very poignant yet very hopeful. Yes..life is about imperfections..little things are what matters in life and what makes it worth living..you simply captured it, beautifully...👏

Arnav fearful of kushi's stillness ..the image you created..i had a hard time dodging the lump in my throat..

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#822

You have done a beautiful job with this chapter.

You can see the insecurities laid bare and the reality and bits of sadness peeking out from behind the bubble of happiness but not having the power to overshadow it.

They have a perfect relationship in a messed up time. But these two characters give me a lot of hope for their future with the strength and will each of them possess. I leave this chapter with secret smile and few lines from Corinthians which hold importance in my life,

"It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres. Love never fails."

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#823

that was a gorgeous update! I dont know what to say! the way he was admiring her throughout the wedding, I was awestruck! the simple declarations of love brought wide smiles on my face! the idea of his proposal being a statement was beautiful! I loved the chapter!

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#824

Beautiful as always..

U have very well portrayed Arnav's fear,concern,care for Khushi...

he is just coming into terms regarding her illness coz it's only once u start facing it you actually know the seriousness of the condition

I just hope Khushi recovers

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#825

This was a beautifully put together chapter!

We finally see Arnav being hit with the magnitude of Khushi's sickness!

Loved that sad vulnerability you portrayed and the simple things such as not wanting to see her still even in her sleep!

And it's so great to see Khushi as Arnav's strength!

In fact they both are each others strength, when one feels especially vulnerable the other is ready to reassure!

Brilliant!

Continue soon :)

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meera

@jblueday

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#826

enjoyed reading this update! arnav-khushi bond is going strong and i am as anxious like arnav to know what the doctor says!😕hope there would be a ray of hope for her survival.poor arnav he feels scared if she sit still for a few seconds. i was equally surprised at her sudden enthusiasm to dance😆of course she is khushi-always unpredictable😊

continue soon and please pm me😃

👏👏👏

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Raven

@TouchOfArHi

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#827

Uggghhh I'm a stalker... stalked u on Wordpress and now down here... would u care less to stop updating such awesome chapters leaving us cliffhanging and dieing for the next part? Or do u just want to kill us?

*Please answer in detail*

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