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Firebolt

@Firebolt

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Loved the note at the beginning.. and i consider myself forewarned! I'm afraid i can't put check mark for all the options though and so i was reconsidering but then you said sex drugs and rock and roll... Well how can i say no to that?

So Khushi is a who*e? Oh HOH you want to make her as different from the show as you possibly can, dont you? 😆 No seriously how do you come up with such stuff? <3

For a minute i thought she was the wife then towards the end i was like ofc she isn't the wife.. this is HOH we're talking about...😆

Okay i'm intrigued...

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Bob123

@Bob123

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Love it

Really interesting

Cantvwait to reaf more

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Intriguing chapter *dark looks* Nothing like MS at all. Really looking forward to it.

But, but, the last line has me hooked, so update soon:)

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HeadOverHeels

@HeadOverHeels

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Note: The blog comment link might take a while to work... It's Blogger after all. Meh!! 😕

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AllSmiles86

@AllSmiles86

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Now that's what you call a cliffhanger! Brilliant job on starting a mysterious yet thrilling fiction!

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smileyhug7679

@smileyhug7679

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

wow another one

i was thinking hope u dont end ur MS soon..

but hoping this one will keep us occupied

read all ur warnings

and hoping to hang on till the end

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Nats1219

@Nats1219

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Read your disclaimers HOH and I'm in no matter what... this one already has makings of a wild ride! XOXO Nats

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Asma

@anjaani07

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: HeadOverHeels
Note: The blog comment link might take a while to work... It's Blogger after all. Meh!! 😕

Hey, i was going to PM you about that, i'm not seeing an option to comment on the blog, it just directs me back to the chapter itself? Although I can see there is one comment so I guess its working for some...

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Excited!!!!! Another FF by you !!!!!!!!
Amazing start !!!!!!!!! Very interesting !!!!!!!
I though for a moment that his wife was Khushi !!!!!!
Can't wait to read more !!!!!!!! Thnx for the pm !!!!! Update soon !!!!