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Posted: 13 years ago
We haven't yet seen Akash N we have only once heard of Payal being Khushi's sister(but seemingly not in the same type of work?). Wondering, if at all these PayAsh shud hook up, shit will hit the fan aye?!!! Cus I dont know how else will Khushi come into Arnav's life...esp when he hates brothels and hates sex without emotions! Khushi has caught his eye though lol...one cant blame a man for noticing a good looking woman right?

Intrigued with the women being judgmental about this whole sex trade thing. I couldn't swallow Khushi's life...had to shove it down my throat saying this is how it is for the poor girl. It sucks. Intrigued with Shyam & Anjali's relationship. Intrigued N Riveted by your story telling...AGAIN!

This one is a class apart Anne. Kudos to you for handling such an unconventional story, not to mention scandalous as well!!! Die hard romantics are going to be scarred for life with every update for sure! Keep them coming as and when you can ...take your time, no issues. Cus this ones going to be a treat for us 😊

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Edited by cheeeky - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ahh the age old debate of how taboo subjects are treated in the subcontinent, where women are told that these threats to their happily married lives are women with high libidos (and God forbid a woman should have that) and should be looked down upon because they want your husbands cock and nothing else, because they always have a choice...

I love how you are dealing with this Anne.. I feel like I am reading about people I know because who doesn't know a elitist delusional female?

Self will is the most over rated and falsely advertised attribute to man.
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Posted: 13 years ago
am having a hard time even imagining arnav with lavanya!! wht the!!😲 no ways..can't do it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Brilliant story so far. The characters - you can see a little of them already and I like!

But the real deal is the things that prostitutes have to go through. It is so easy to judge them for what they do. But do they really have a choice? Do women like Lavanya and Anjali (I mean women of better fortune) really know what is behind that facade?

And it almost feels like Khushi and Arnav may have exchanged characters this time!

I cannot wait to see where you take this one!

And Mystic Skies update later today? Trying to kill us, eh? :D:D


Edited by meera30 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I love how it's the men who sympathize with the prostitutes, and the women don't at all... cos normally it's the other way round...but it's like role reversal.. and its good that you've shown this :)

Hmmm i'm not keen with Arnav so loving and intimate with Lavanya lol i just can't let myself imagine it :) but yeah really interested to know how this story is going to develop.. cos right now i have no idea (which is a good thing) ...

Fantastic update :) Thanks for the PM ...
(PP... really hope it's readable soon... miss it loads... looking forward to MS too )
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved your stories as regular reader

awesome writing from your part

how do you manage to be so creative??


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Posted: 13 years ago
wow..that was very good!

Interesting rift between shyam and anjali... and lavanya and anjali opinions.. no comment

hmm arnav keep thinking about khushi.. interesting!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh my! I really wonder how a self righteous man (or so it seems) like Arnav is going to succumb to a lowly (in his opinion) wh*re... It'll make for an interesting read i'm sure...!

So PP is going to be published... ? *squeal* i am so exited for you! Although (A very selfish part of me!) hopes that you'll complete PP2 as a fanfic!
Edited by Firebolt - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Just two parts and I'm already loving it!!!!!!
Great story can't wait to read more...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update!
There is a lot of misconception about prostitutes and you have portrayed that really well in this update!

Forgot about La!
I didn't think that you would make her Arnav's wife!

I could not imagine Arnav and la being that intimate! All I saw a a blur of people!

All n all great update!
OMG, MS!!!!
Can't wait!

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