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newmoon2011

@newmoon2011

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

superb update...thanks for the pm

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aakriti

@aakriti120

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

heya anne..

read both chapters just now..

interesting and unique..

lavanya and arnav relationship..hot but something is missing i guess..

will look forward for the next part..

many thanks for the pm..:)

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Nisha

@Nrp77

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Dang, I didn't get to this new FF until it was 20 pages deep!?! Damn work and the need for sleep!!! eee

First I have to say wOw!!! I love how Mystic Skies starts off all picturesque in Nanital and FAO starts off in a brothel...hahaa You were right when you said that you will take this one low...hahahaa 😆 Love that you are so diverse when it comes to your writing!!!

I can't believe Arnav is married to Lavanya in this and that Anjali is looking like she's going to be a snooty pampered princess and Shyam will never be able to live up to her expectations...eee I think this one is going to be quite interesting... Love when I get to see the unexpected and Khushi living in a brothel definitely falls under the tag of 'unexpected'...hahaha

Anyhow, can't wait to see where you're going with this one...😊

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Anya_jain

@Anya_jain

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

God.. Khushi a prostitute.. waiting to see how the story unfolds.. Pls do update soon.

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.Kryptonite.

@.Kryptonite.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Hey!

Thanks for the PM!

Coming to the plot, anything written by you has to be brilliant,so i'm not missing any chapter of this FF!

Character sketch is creative,plot being unique!

I feel raged about Anj and Lav.. its so bad to categorize not knowing entire truth..

Khushi, hmm interesting as ever!

Arnav, need more part to analyse him,. and please update FAO!

Make a poll, i say!😉

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

The reality is already setting in!

I don't know if it makes me a bad person to be so interested in the subject matter of a stroy, but I can't get enough.

I love Shyam's character here, he seems to be the level headed one in the family.

Arnav and Lavanya are married and in love? Wow! You sure know how to throw a curveball!

I don't agree with Lavanya and Anjali. As easy as it is to say that the poor women have a choice, I really don't think they do! I mean, even if they get into prostitution temporarily under dire circumstances, they can never leave, they are trapped! And people who are well off should not speak at all, if they can't sympathize with them. You know, if u have nothing good to say, say nothing at all...

Loved it! Waiting for the next part!

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@boyznaka

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

OoOh!

How I love a snobby Anjali! I do hate hers and Lavanya's opinions about wh**es in general(I can't be sure if they're completely right or not, 'cause I think we can't generalize such an opinion :/), but I do love this slightly bitchy, shady side of Anjali. And I also love the fact that she isn't the pati-vratha woman. (Seriously. That woman needs a backbone.)

Anyway, excellent concept. And I lurrvvee bold stories. Not because of the obscenity, of course, but because they show a darker-yet-there side of life. So, yeah, excellent concept.

Thanks a lot for the pm, btw. :)

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angellovergirl

@angellovergirl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

OMG!

this update was so awesome!

cant wait for the next part

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#159

Running off to your blog! 😃

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#160

intense update anjali and la are so closed minded and shyamn yes i said shyamn wow his id different and arnav interesting loved the update loved how shyam put it out for anjali she wished if she had a husband who knocked her around loved the update can't wait for more khushi and her friend both were hurt by the clients poor girls some women are forced and then their are the few who enjoys it never will understand that

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