~Mysterious~ ||Kriyaansh SS|| *Note-pg155* - Page 79

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

4 chapters mein ek murder bhi hai 😲

Originally posted by: star94

plz update soon.. eager to know what comes next🤔

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

u updating when????

Originally posted by: meevee

WOW Surbhi that was 2 amazing updates...sorry for late comment as I was away...luvd both of them to the core and really enjoying this tale very much now...full-on action and u r narrating it beautifully...waiting for the next part😊

Originally posted by: yogini64

Koi na . . . . Main pahucha dungi 50 tak . . . . Tune meri spamming power nhi dekhi 😈

Originally posted by: alisha.a.s

nice update.. waiting eagerly for next n do pm me...

Originally posted by: basket_101

Hey Surbhi!!! Hey Hinal!

Pehle toh sorry for such an early comment 😆 It's all right sweety! 😃

Excuse toh pm pe bata diya 😳 Yup, I have replied to it, do have a look.

So anyways... Finally using the computer now, with the fan facing in my direction, at max speed 😆 Great! It's really hot over there.. 😛

The part... "Mysterious"

The ff is seriously living up to its name!! Really? That's good. 😊

Especially for someone like me lol True! 😆

Anyways... about the part

I honestly LOVED and ADORED Kria's hesitation!! aww..glad you loved it!

It was veryy well written!! Thanks! 😃

And I could actually perfectly imagine how perplexed she probably felt! Yup, I felt quite happy with the way it turned out to be..

I actually have those mental conversations with myself all the time!

(though about a different matter 😆) Yup, happens with me too! 😆

The part was seriously awesome... Ab I think I'm gonna start using a thesaurus cause I'm repeating myself every single time.. Seriously? awww..Hinal..!! 😳 That's a huge compliment..thanks a ton!

So for now...

"The part was trulymeritorious my friend!" Abhi ke liye isseh kaam chala lete hain, be more creative next time..! 😆 Thanks sweety!

😆

But seriously

And then the Rey mystery...

Yeh Kria ki mystery solve hui, toh ek aur mystery add kar di Yeah, since it is a complete package of Mysterious..!

Lagta hai yeh puure ff mein mujhe sirf confused hi rehna hai 😆 Rofl! Yeah, I think so..

I honestly think Rey is in the FBI though

Iss baar thoda assumption hai, kyunki when he was talking to Akash, one of the lines he said..."with an authority" Nice observation!

So on the basis of that... Maybe he's a senior or something

That would explain why there could be no information traced about him

But then why is Jack trying to find out about Rey... If he was a senior, then Jack would've known That's a nice question. All your questions will be answered as the story proceeds..

Unless my previous assumption is still intact (Soviet spy) 😆

(must say, I have a creative mind 😉) Yeah, of course! 😛

Only one thing I'm sure of though

"Confusion hi confusion hai solution toh pata nahi" 🤣 rofl! Things will become clear from the next part..

I'm gonna keep all my grand theories to myself, and just wait for the update instead 😆 Yeah, that will be easier..! 😛

Eager to read more, as usual!! 😃 I'll update soon..

Take care!

And continue soon <3

Love,

Hinal 😃 🤗 love you too! 😃 🤗