~Mysterious~ ||Kriyaansh SS|| *Note-pg155*

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Hi guys! So, this is the good news or the surprise I was talking about. Yes, I know I had planned to write a single FF or SS at a time. However, this thought was in my mind for quite sometime. So, I thought of writing SS on Kriyaansh. This is a totally different theme and as the title suggests 'Mysterious'.

Since I already have a cute romantic FF running which would be on for quite sometime, so I thought of experimenting with a new theme. This one will be suspense coupled with Kriyaansh.

Let's see how it turns out to be. I won't be giving you a sneak peek of how the story will be as that will kill the suspense.

So, here's the prologue.

I won't be able to update really fast. It will take time.

To all my readers of Will you be mine I'll be updating my FF as soon as possible. The next part will be special and long, so just have some patience.






Prologue

Rey rushed out of his house and was on the phone with Vicky.

"I am sorry! I'll be there in 20 minutes." he answered and put the phone down.

He called the lift which came up after good 5 minutes. Before he could make his way in a girl came out with a lot of cartons; probably a new entrant on his floor.

"Excuse me Miss!" he said while making his way in while she turned around to see a man dressed in faded blue jeans paired with a white shirt.

"Yes?" she questioned and he looked up at her.

She was clad in a plain black long skirt with a small slit at the bottom paired with a red blouse. Her hairs were tied and she was gazing him through her frameless glasses. She looked serious, a bit older than her age.

"Hello?" she said while snapping his fingers in front of him which made him get back to Earth.

"So, are you new here?" he asked sheepishly.

"No. It excites me to pack all my stuff and then shift them back." she replied arrogantly and darted him a look.

"Ok. I can help you with those boxes." he offered while coming out of the lift.

"I can do that all by myself."

"All right. Well, I am Rey. I live in the next house. So, we'll be neighbours." he responded while pulling out his hand for a hand shake but she clearly ignored him.

"What's your good name?" he questioned when she hadn't replied.

"You don't have to know that!" she snapped and shut her door.

''''..

"You were supposed to be here in 20 minutes!" Vicky declared while having a final look at his watch to calculate how long it took his friend.

"I know. I just got caught up with a girl." Rey replied still thinking about her. She was arrogant and rude but there was something in her which mesmerized him.

"Who?" Vicky asked feeling surprised.

Yes, Rey was good looking and tons of girls drool over him but he just didn't bother. He really wanted to know who that special girl was who left Rey enchanted.

"My new neighbour"

"So, how is she?"

"Arrogant. But, there is something mysterious about her. I'll have to find out." Rey answered and quickly took his car keys and drove back home.

He rang her doorbell. The door opened after a few minutes.

"Rey! Why are you here?" she questioned.


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ok, so how was it? Do hit the like tab and don't forget to leave your comments.

I know it's too early for you to predict the story line and if it is actually worth reading, so I hope to have your interest in the upcoming parts.


More of my work--



~Emptiness~ ||Kriyaansh OS||




~Good Bye~ ||ArSha OS||





INDEX

Prologue-- pg 1

Part 1-- pg 12

Part 2-- pg 25

Part 3-- pg 39

Part 4-- pg 53

Part 5-- pg 72

Part 6-- pg 87

Part 7-- pg 107




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Ocean.eyes thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yaay 1st to comment...
Amazing another ss
wil be eagerly waiting 4 the 1st part
nice prologue...
Girl has full on attitude..woa
his neighbour woww
plz update soon
nice title
Thanx 4 d pm
Edited by --Kinjal-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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1st 2 comment...!!!
wow... kriya in specs... damn musn't she look hot!
uff... kriyaansh ka 1st meet every tym itna gusse wala kyun hota hain!
nywys.. pm me next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome concept...thanks for the pm and continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome start
continue and plz do pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesum!!! <3 ty fr d PM!!! PM me d nxt tym also!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yayy another SS
its awesome n sounds interestng
loved the title and the prologue
eagerly looking forward for the first part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting concept
pm me wen u update
awesum prolouge😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow surbhi new SS...m vry exicted...n da prolouge wow man full on mystrious...mai to bilkul b predict ni kr pa ri hu whs gng to b nxt
bt i lyk arrogant kriya n our handsome rey...i cn't cmnt on rey's nature coz kch smjh ni aya ki kaisa hoga bt abhi tk calm...loving it
pls update 1st part asap surbhi
love ya
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yayy another ss...
title suggests that somethin interesting...
hmmn...waitin for for the updt
n nyc prologue...neighbours ah!!

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