~Mysterious~ ||Kriyaansh SS|| *Note-pg155*

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Yogini

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Posted: 13 years ago

#771

Koi na . . . . Main pahucha dungi 50 tak . . . . Tune meri spamming power nhi dekhi 😈

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vaishali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#772

Originally posted by: yogini64
. . . Pata hai 100 se ulti ginti shuru ki . . . . . 6 pages piche mila mere vala reply 😆
rey is not fbi type agent . . . . Matlab shaadi cancel 😭
chal ab jack aa gya hai . . . . . Kriyaansh mil ke peetenge 😆

di aapke reply mein she said that ki rey is not an anti FBI agent...

matlab he is on the good side not the bad one as u have guessed...
shadi hoke rhegi...

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vaishali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#773

no ways...

koi side vli deal nhi chalegi...

murder pata nhi kahan ka bataegi...

SS se related kuch hai toh bol varna nhi...

deal toh dhang ki kara kar...

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Yogini

@yogini64

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Posted: 13 years ago

#774

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

di aapke reply mein she said that ki rey is not an anti FBI agent...

matlab he is on the good side not the bad one as u have guessed...
shadi hoke rhegi...

rey ko to good side pe hi samajha tha maine . . . . . . But ab i'm more confused

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

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Posted: 13 years ago

#775

Originally posted by: surbhi_d3

Thanks a ton! 😃
I am happy you loved it..
Yeah, the kiss to be precise.. 😆
You'll get to know more about Rey in the next part and all your questions will be answered as the story proceeds..
I'll update soon..!

Will be waiting for ur update 😊.

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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#776

nice update.. waiting eagerly for next n do pm me...

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basket_101

@basket_101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#777

Hey Surbhi!!!

Pehle toh sorry for such an early comment 😆

Excuse toh pm pe bata diya 😳

So anyways... Finally using the computer now, with the fan facing in my direction, at max speed 😆

The part... "Mysterious"

The ff is seriously living up to its name!!

Especially for someone like me lol

Anyways... about the part

I honestly LOVED and ADORED Kria's hesitation!!

It was veryy well written!!

And I could actually perfectly imagine how perplexed she probably felt!

I actually have those mental conversations with myself all the time!

(though about a different matter 😆)

The part was seriously awesome... Ab I think I'm gonna start using a thesaurus cause I'm repeating myself every single time..

So for now...

"The part was trulymeritorious my friend!"

😆

But seriously

And then the Rey mystery...

Yeh Kria ki mystery solve hui, toh ek aur mystery add kar di

Lagta hai yeh puure ff mein mujhe sirf confused hi rehna hai 😆

I honestly think Rey is in the FBI though

Iss baar thoda assumption hai, kyunki when he was talking to Akash, one of the lines he said..."with an authority"

So on the basis of that... Maybe he's a senior or something

That would explain why there could be no information traced about him

But then why is Jack trying to find out about Rey... If he was a senior, then Jack would've known

Unless my previous assumption is still intact (Soviet spy) 😆

(must say, I have a creative mind 😉)

Only one thing I'm sure of though

"Confusion hi confusion hai solution toh pata nahi" 🤣

I'm gonna keep all my grand theories to myself, and just wait for the update instead 😆

Eager to read more, as usual!! 😃

Take care!

And continue soon <3

Love,

Hinal 😃 🤗

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star94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#778

plz update soon.. eager to know what comes next🤔

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Surbhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#779

Originally posted by: yogini64
. . . Pata hai 100 se ulti ginti shuru ki . . . . . 6 pages piche mila mere vala reply 😆
rey is not fbi type agent . . . . Matlab shaadi cancel 😭
chal ab jack aa gya hai . . . . . Kriyaansh mil ke peetenge 😆

Maine yeh nai kaha he is nt an fbi agent.. Bt ab tak kuch reveal nai hua h, just wait and read!

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Surbhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#780

Originally posted by: kriyansh24
no ways...

koi side vli deal nhi chalegi...

murder pata nhi kahan ka bataegi...

SS se related kuch hai toh bol varna nhi...

deal toh dhang ki kara kar...

Murder SS se he related h...