~Mysterious~ ||Kriyaansh SS|| *Note-pg155* - Page 70

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

hell first tym itna bada cmnt i never give any cmnt dat long on any ff/ss/os...hahahahaha *well done shaffy* 🤣 🤣

Originally posted by: puja_arsha

Awesome awesome awesome update... awww...thank you so much Puja! 😃 This really brought a huge smile on my face..
Loved it kehna bahut chota hoga...i hope isse bada koi word hota... Seriously? Was it that good? Unbelievable! 😆
Kria thinking about rey n she has already fell head over heals for rey...amazing... Yeah, she is so much into him..
Loved kria's fite with hre inner voice...so cute... Yeah, I thought it was necessary to bring out her feelings as well as what she feels about their relationship..
N she was thinking about kissing him again n again...😆 Yeah, I know wo part thodha zyada hogaya.. 😆
n rey is also an FBI officer of high rank...hope m rite coz i don't wanna b wrong...i want him 2 b FBI officer... Well, lets see what he really is. You'll get a huge clue in the next part...
N if he is ...how come jack dosen't know about him...waise achaa hi hai...i don't like dat jack...good for nothing he is not aakash...jab dekho kria par shout karta rehta hai... Yeah, Jack is a jerk and I assure you that he will have to pay for it..
Loved kriyaansh's part...
Super awesome... I loved writing that part too..! 😊
Rey came 2 her room from d window...aadat nai jaegi uski...😉 Yup, but I feel that's quite romantic.. 😉
loved d way rey was asking kria 2 realise her feelings for him...super awesome...
N jack kria ke apartment pohounch gya...ab pakka kriyaansh ke beech MUs create ho jaegi... Nopes, let me tell you one thing, I am strictly against having MU's to push the story forward, so there won't be anything like that..
Witing for next part... I'll update soon sweety! 😃
Update soon...m desperately waiting 2 read d next part...
Luv u loads love you too! 🤗 Thank you so much for such a bada wala comment..
xoxoxo

P.S.- i have read it twice already...pta nai ktni baar aur padhungi...m so addicted 2 both ur kriyaansh writ ups...😆 Seriously? Well, that's a huge compliment! Thanks a ton! 😃

Originally posted by: rashi.rose

Wowww very mysterious:-):-) loved it:-):-)

Originally posted by: anjalijayan

nice update 😊

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: kitttu1309.

r u goin to update today????

Originally posted by: LOV_ARSHA_KREYA

Gr8 rey is also FBI agent woww dats gr8.. Nw m egarly waiting for next update.. Please update soon

Originally posted by: sumimita

thanks for the pm

pls update fast... i just can't wait for it...

this update was awsome

Originally posted by: kitttu1309.

okiieesss
waiting 4 it...

Originally posted by: Roxxy47

Amazing part 👏...

Haye Kria thinking about Rey 😍...

To be more precise about the kiss 😳...

Kria accepted that she loves Rey 😃...

How did Rey knew Akash 😲...

Rey is an FBI agent 😲...

WTH is Jack doing in Kria's apartment 😡...

Waiting to know Rey's identity...

Update soon...

N thanks for the pm 😊.