~Mysterious~ ||Kriyaansh SS|| *Note-pg155* - Page 69

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow..!! such a cute and well..mysterious part..!! u know im getting a feeling that rey is a FBI senior or something..! :P

well update soon k.!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey sry 4 commentin late once agn...
mast update yr loved it
it ws amazing
rey FBI...
interesting
ab tk toh kriya ek mystery thi ab rey hain
wow...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
m so so sorry for commenting late

d update was amazing surbhi😃

this means rey s also an FBI agent😲

update d next part soon😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aashi_arsha

RES


UNRES 😳

OMG !!!😲
OMG !!
Rey also a FBI agent ?😲
he also knows Jack n Akash !!!
GOSH dis is hell mysterious !!😆
Really kuch samjh nhi aa rha aage kya hoga !!!
PLz Update soon !😳
Really wanna knoe evrythn !😳
LUv ya !❤️
-AASHI


Thanks Aashi! 😃
Yeah, Rey is related to all this, I gave a clue.
It is supposed to be hell mysterious! 😛
I'll update soon!
Love you too..! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pkriyaansh

aah

dat was an awsum update and how does rey knows akash and jack sochna padega agla update😕


Thanks Palakh! 😃
Glad you loved it..
I'll update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dildostidance19

hey surbhi...is bar no chota comment...😉

do i have to say...?😛..ok i say it,it was AWESOME UPDATE..👏
story become more mysterious...love it...

jack to rey ke piche hath dho ke pad gaya hai...
so kriya is thinking about rey...sab kiss ka asar hai..😆
and she thinks to kiss him again...😍
finally she call him...
love the kriyansh convo..
ab kriya ki mystery reveal ho gai hai to rey becomes mysterious...😆
looks like he is also a FBI agent...just thinking..
update soon and reveal the mystery ASAP...



Thanks Anki! 😃
Yup, no chota comment.. 😊
Yes, you need to say that if that's the case.. 😉
Glad you loved it..
Haan, yeh sab kiss ka jaadu hai.. 😆
Well, you'll get to know more about him in the next part..
I'll update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: yogini64

Res
unres
REY . . . . . Naam sunte hi jack ko jhatka lag gya . . . . Yeah, since he has heard a lot about him from Kriya..
zaroor koi FBI level ki dushmani hogi inki . . . . . 🤢 Well, that's not the case...
Jisme jack rey ko sirf by name hi janta hai 😆
kriya's state is like---
*kuch to hua hai . . . . Kuch ho gya hai* 😛 poor gal . . . . . Hottie ka charm itna chal gaya hai ki her inner voice is having war wid her mind 😉 Absolutely! She is so in love with him! 😊 Rey ka charm.. 😉
love vs FBI
ahan . . . Love . . . . She's in love wid him . . . . 🤗 Yes, she is! 😃
I seriously LOL'ed on this:
Just a kiss. One more kiss won't cause any harm. And then just another kiss, a couple of kisses, to be precise. ☺️
ye to puri bigad gyi . . . . . 🤣 Haan, bahut desperate act kar rahi hai, pata nai yeh dialogue aise maine likh kaise diya.. 😆
rey must be a very gud kisser na . . . . Tabhi to neeyat badal gyi 😍 Of course! ☺️
now,,, all thanx to dat cheapster who made it possible so soon 🤣 Yeah, he did have a role in that..
hmmm . . . . Baat karni hai phone pe usse . . . . . Bahana bhi ready hai . . . Go on 😛
vo to phone vaise bhi haath me le ke khada tha . . . . . . . 😆 ab to shaq yakeen me badal gaya . . . . . Yahin hoga roz window pe . . . . 😉 Nahi, he wasn't anywhere near the window...he just can predict Kriya pretty well..! Mera hero ko itna despo mat sound kara.. 😆
zyada maza aata hai kya? 🤣
rey has got a new topic to tease her now . . . . 😛 Yeah and aren't you loving it now?
yes . . . She loves u 😃
ye aakash to bahot chalu nikala . . . . 😲
idhar jack ki FBI me rehte huye hi baja raha hai . . . . . Vahan rey ke under kaam kar rha hai 🤔
zarur is taklu jack ko nikalvane ki planning hogi 🤣 Well, exactly Akash kiske liye kaam kar raha hai, you'll get to know soon..
rey ko kriya ki pics kyun chahiye . . . . . . 🤔 Next part mein you'll get to know. Itni bhi koi badi baat nahi hai.. 😛
collage bana ke b'day gift karna hai 😆 Nahi.. 😆
& agar rey FBI me hi hai . . . . To main to bahot khush hun kriyaansh ke liye . . . . 🥳 You'll get to know more about Rey in the next part...
meri taraf se inke shaadi ke cards chhap jayenge . . . . 😆 Abhi relationship mein aaye nahi hain aur tujhe shaadi ki badi jaldi h.. 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shukti_19

I couldn't get it.. Rey is also an FBI officer!! Then why doesn't Jack know anything about it?! After all Jack is also in FBI.. It's really mystrious!


Sweety, you'll get to know more about Rey in the next part..!
Well, what Jack really knows about him is pretty clear..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

hey!!! dis tym i m really fast at comment 😃...good naa 😉 Yup! Itni jaldi kabhi comment nahi karti, a nice surprise! 😃

n hawww 😲 dis part is much awaited 4 mee too...huh!! bt u didn't mention me...bt nooo Sweety, maine Vaishu and Yogini ko isliye mention kia coz while I was replying to the comments, both of them were constantly asking me when I'll update.. I know it was much awaited for you too! 😊 problm coz i m waiting 4 nxt part egarly...n yup i want nxt part of dis only 😊 Yup, next part issi ka milega and then Will you be mine ka..
nooo of ur 1st ff coz u knw na i m xcited 4 "BUBBLE BATH" 😉...hahahahahahahahaha 🤣 🤣 🤣 Bubble bath! 😆 I guess both of my FF/SS are on some interesting points at the moment.. 😉

okh!!! okh!!! coming too dis part nw
surbhiii!!!!!!!!!!!! its awsome sweetheart 😃 Seriously? aww..thanks a ton Shaf! 😃
aww kria thnking abt rey...hayee!!! Yeah, I loved writing that bit..
n dat kiss tooo...actually i was laughting wen kria is thnking abt dere first kiss n den one more kiss n again kiss😳...hahahaha dat was da best part 🤣 Yeah, I know wo part thodha zyada desperate types hogaya..! 😆

n rey *tada* ek dam se tapka 😆 Yup, before she could even blink..! 😆
aww rey knws dat she loves him...haha okk sorry i knw dat ki he knws phele se hi Yup, he knows that and wants her to confess her feelings..

n jack...ahhh!!!! he is jerk
n wait u said na ki he only trust him
n i thnk dat him is gng to b apna rey
is i am rite na??? Sorry, I didn't get you..

okhh!!! rey is FBI agent i m nt at all shocked coz i knw dat he is gng to b any agent n all Hmm..I had been dropping hints from the beginning..

n u knw wht kal soch hi ri thi ki rey pkaa pkaa kria ka boss hoga...tbhi use itna kch pta h...look surbhi tere ff ne meri kya halat kr di h 😆 Rofl! Teri halat kharab hogaya hai.. 😆

jack is come at kria's house...n dat jst to knw who is rey...n u knw wht mjhe bohat strng feeling aa ri h ki jack ne kbhi b phele rey ko dekha ni hoga...i mean aisa lg ra h ki rey jack n kria ka bos hoga n un dono ne hi phele ni dekha hoga rey ko...idk i m rite or wrong...its jst a wild guess Really nice guess, but I won't disclose anything right now. Things will unfold as the story proceeds..

bt sweety i love da update I am happy you did..! 😃
n u tooo...muhaaa :* :* :* love you too Shaf! 😃 🤗

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