IPKKND FF:Justice Comes At A Price[Epilogue Upd!]

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-DobByDoDgeR-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#471

Great epilogue... Well done... The story was mysterious and kept me entertained throughout...

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

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Posted: 12 years ago

#472

I never thought I will read an Arshi whodunit one day..but this was just delightful complete with an cute epilogue, this short story had everything...👏 There are such delightful writers on this forum and I am glad I discovered one more here😊

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Amanda D'Souza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#473

@tennismaniac19: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊

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shree10

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Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#474

Enjoyed reading this SS. Nice one and diff genre.

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hashey

@hashey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#475

Just came across this story and read all the chapters. Awesome story. Loved it a lot.

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#476

Funny n cute lol 😆

Edited by princessunara - 10 years ago

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#477

Edited:

Any good thriller is one in which you keep guessing who the culprit is. And you did a fab job. I couldnt guess it till the end.

But I will also appreciate that you left a clue right at the start that Malini spoke about NK's co and Shyam's relation to it. I had wondered then why would she being his fiance would give such a detail away.

I LOVED it that it was Khushi who helped solve the case of Shyam's murder.

I really liked it how you played with the relations of all the characters.

Amidst all this Arnav's and Khushi's love story was so close to the one on screen, and so beautiful... I couldnt help but sigh.

LOVED IT 😊

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#478

good story, kept me guessing till the end... thumbs up all the way.. :)

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#479

A thriller is good when one can't make out the name of the murderer till the end. Here I racked my brains but couldn't guess the name of the murderer till the end. Wonderful story. Hope you write more like this one for our reading pleasure.

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#480

just completed reading this wonderful whodunit! am an ardent agatha christie fan and you've caught the nuances of her writing style... you've a flair formrder mysteries... you managed to maintain the suspense till the very end! the humor and the romance seamlessly blended into it was added bonus!