ArSha SS- Indore Calling- Part 5,pg 36,The End

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ekiholo

@ekiholo

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#261

sorry tish...but i must say i m a lil bit disappointed!!akhir vo srif 3 month ke liye NY ja raha hai,,3 janmo ke liye nehi!!so she can say those 3 megical word to him!!neway loved ur ss!!sad coz it has a sad ending!!but u rocked!hope ur new ss will be rocked as well!!
love u dear!!

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#262

Awsm update

but i really thought she would say i love u to him

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Tanishtha

@JugHo786

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#263

really awesum upd8 tish...
jeez.. shaks asked amar to kiss her??? is it true?
damn mukti... worng timing!
shit yaar!... kinds didn't lyk d ending!

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chetna

@crazysky

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#264

it was lovely
although a sad ending
but i liked it...

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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#265

Not a happy ending :( but still I loved it

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Nirjana

@Nirju99

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#266

though it was a sad ending bt luv d whole ss, i hope u ll make another ss of happy ending

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Puja

@puja_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#267

Sad ending...koi nai...i guess evry luv stry dosen't hav a hppy ending...
Luvd d way shaks took d frst step...
Kunwar holding himself ws nyc...n shaks's lyn ws amazng...
N mukti ki tyming kitni wrng hai yar...atleast kiss to krne de deti...
Thnx fr d pm...

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#268

Hey nice update n just loved d ending 😊
I wouldn't say you to continue it because it's your choice whatever u want to do with your fics n if u have decided it than it's fine.
But i was disappointed i mean at the wrong timing of Muks when she interrupted these love birds at very perfect moment.
Kunwar was bringing her to any place where they could have share some romantic moments n it started really well when Shaks was unable to held herself any more. She wanted to be with him n feel him n the way she was giving green signals to him was really encouraging for him.
He knew so well that she wanted him badly n he was enjoying herself over him perfectly.
The moment was intense n passionate when she said him to kiss her but thanks to Muks who called her to inquire about her n gave her
the most hear wrenching news irritating Shaks to d core.
Shaks was feeling guilty now n even she was unable to make an eye contact with Kunwar now n that's y she left him n walked around.
Will not say a perfect ending but it was the end to start a new beginning. 😃
Great work Tish once again. 👏

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#269

love the update... but yes its true some stories have a sad ending

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sujana

@sujana9

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#270

ok tish as u know i always write long coomments coz u dersvee lot more love for ur fablous writings

so start iw as like jumping reading but wen d sad part came i was in dilemna ... why did i not see dis cmg ?😒

but still u r damn good at sad ending i am not asking a cont ... i know u wont 😔

i know few ppl might loved it 😡 i think no need to mention names 😒

ur writings r fab gal god bless u lots 👍🏼

thanks for d last pm on dis ss 😭

i will miss dis ss 😭