ArSha SS- Indore Calling- Part 5,pg 36,The End

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Jeeya_Angel

@Jeeya_Angel

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#251

Oh gosh tish the last part. 😭

Could not tell you how heavy my heart became when i read the last line. Mere ArSha ki sad ending. I know its just an SS but still...😔

But rest assured dear I won't pester you to continue this SS coz it made sense how u ended the SS. What the use to confess her feelings to him now knowing the fact that she would be leaving in a few days. Whats the point of binding him into commitments? But Bechara Kunwar, when he said 'Shaks' and she left without answering that was a heart touching one.💔

Thanks for giving us such a wonderful SS on ArSha. Overall it was a full fun update to read specially the supposed cricket match and the so ever wanting KISS jiska kachra hogaya due to Mukti's call.LOL

Btw I am already loving your new KriYansh FF.

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#252

dis was awsum tish
i knw sad ending thi
bt again in dis SS too u hv a bold shakti
awww bt in end...bt nvr mind i always love ur work
n i love sad endings too
bt 4 arsha noo

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#253

aweee this SS comes to an end😭 and that too on sad note😭

phewww i dont know why every good things has to come to an end one day...😕

but it was awesome SS...loved it very much

even enjoyed myself reading the last part ...you are an awesome writter tish

thanks for awesome SS

love you

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#254

Tish . . . . . Itni romantic start 😍 ke sath itni sad ending 😔
ye kya kar diya mere dil ke sath 🥺
shaks taking initiative . . . . As she needed to tell him,,,,, why she was there 😊
that was the beautiful kisses ever . . . ☺️
& the phonecall was the perfect moment spoiler 😡
could'nt they be quick 😆 . . . .
she has to leave & her thoughts are justified too . . . . . .
But wat abt him,,,, he wanted an answer for her presence . . . . . 😭
Is there story stuck back to cliffhanger??

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#255

Aww...this was beautiful! :)

I really enjoyed reading this SS and you ended this in just 5 chapters? :(

Well, like you said it's SS so it is supposed to be short. I loved reading this story a lot.

It was getting really interesting when she was so close to him and they were just lost in that moment and about to kiss when Mukti called up and brought them back to reality.

What followed was a turmoil in Shakti whether she should talk to Amar and tell him that she loves him but she was leaving in a week's time and that wouldn't be fair. It's good that she decided to keep it that way and pretend that nothing happened. Though, it hurt her from inside.

An unexpected end, but I love it when writers surprise me! :D

Well penned!

Please update ur FF soon..!

Thanks for the pm

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aishasully

@aishasully

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#256

ohh tish yeh tumne kya kardiya yaar man i never knew u would end it lyk dis well wnt ask for u 2 cntinue yaar but ur ff has 2 hav a gd ending warna i will kill u but this update was nyc sad dey didnt confess but gd writing soz cnt lyk my tab nt wrkin

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#257

yeah its sad ending but awesome tish i loved it...but yeah i will miss it

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#258

tish this was a fab update.

loved it a lot.

Though she didnt tell her feelings but both realised that they feel for eacjh other.dats important.

sad ending tha but completely sad nahi hai.

Thanks for the pm.

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Asha

@Zehnaseeb.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#259

Damn Tish, never thought that u r so good in writing sad endings..

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Anyaa_012

@Anyaa_012

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#260

I love u yaar...:)
Supah dupah awesome SS!!:D
i don't really like sad endings ...
but ur writing made me love it in this SS...:)
Awesomeee :D
n hey i'll be reading ur FF also but didn't comment yet ...
I'm sorry ...:S
i'll surely do for next update of it...:)
...Thanx for Pm..:)