ArSha SS- Indore Calling- Part 5,pg 36,The End

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#101

ok so firstly it was kya baat kya baat kya baat

kunwar got a punch from shakti ...

haha so funny

match it interesting ... all boys in shakti team and girls in kunwar team

world war 3

but u r too gud like always ...

u r ideas r great

tusi great ho ...

always write like this no no even more interesting

nd i know ... because u ...great

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@MyDarkPassenger

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#102

am remembering pehle pyaar ka ehsaas...!!! *nostalgic*

you write so well...am goin to say it again and again 😛

such a sweet part...plzz continue soon!

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Jeeya_Angel

@Jeeya_Angel

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Awesome update tish.

Right from the start you made me laugh with this
'Amar roared at ten young, hormone-driven-good-for-nothing teenage lads gawking at a flock of their counter parts who had come to pose as cheerleaders for their cricket match'

I can totally imagine the scene.

I really enjoyed the interaction between ArSha.
Dhamakedar Punch from Shaks and our Kunwar falling to the ground.

A grand salute to you for the idea of having a cricket match between ArSha. We have already seen KriYansh Kabaddi match in D3 now I am eager to read about this one.

Plz update soon.

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chetna

@crazysky

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#104

it was awesome tish...n i thought it was a os...
but u made it ss iam super happy 4 that..

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Amazing part tish:):)
Luvd it:):)
Waiting eagerly for d next part:):)

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Nishtha

@Jade_Precious

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

nt fair yr
itna chota update

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annie mathias

@anniemathiaskr

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#107

FIRSTLY THANKS OR TURNING THIS OS INTO SS

I LOVED SHAKTI ENTRY AND ALL OF THEM STARTED DROOLING HER

THE WAY SE SEES YOUNG BOY AND ASK WHO WOULD LIKE TO BE IN MY TEAM WAS AWESOME WAITING EAGERLY FR NXT UPDATE 👍🏼

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Amazing update Tish.

Wow so finally this turned into an FF.

Lovely one.

Thanks for the pm.

It was very cute.

Wow match btwn Shaks nd Amar would be fun.

K wil wait for ur next update.

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Shweta

@Shweta-kriyansh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#109

awesome one dude...amar's so pissed at the boys for losing a wicket/...then the entry of his girl-shakti...her anger-so cute,...hmmm...match...obvio it is dat boys wud go for shakti and gals wud support our hot hot amar,...eagerly waiting for the match...concentrate kunwar concentrate or if u lose in front of ur lady love...😉...thnx for the pm...😃.