ArSha SS- Indore Calling- Part 5,pg 36,The End

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ekiholo

@ekiholo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

hey just loved ur ff!!just read it all at once!it was superb!!thanx 4 da pm!

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Ardour.

@Ardour.

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Tish, it was awesome, as always. Shakti is definitely on a roll and wow, ArSha ke beech me cricket match, superb idea. It was a short but full-on dhamakedar update. Do update asap na.

P.S. - I m sure all ur girlies including me wud hv loved it.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Nice part😊
Kunwar was busy playing wid Kids n these young ones wer irritating him to d core n he was determined to hit boundries when he got a hit from sum1. 😛
He was surprised 2 see her there obviously it was unexpected for him.
God Shaks was too much n he was getting hits ab jhooth bola hai to khamiyaza to bhugatna hoga na .😉
Kunwar had too many questions to ask, but he couldn't ask where every1 was around n wen all eyes were popping out 2 see her there.
Poor Kunwar was pleading for her forgiveness n she wanted to play match, interesting n see every1 was going to join her team.😆
Kunwar kar bhi kya sakta hai cursing k alawa but i don't think he is gonna play with concentration.😕
I am just waiting them to b alone n ask sum questions.😍
update soon

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Palakh Aggarwal

@RudrakshPreesha

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

dat was cute arsha aur woh bhi cricket maaza aayega

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Awesome update ...

Loved it ...

Waiting for next ...

Update soon ...

Thnx for pm ...

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Anki

@KR_anki_ArSha

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

once again awesome update...

short but very nice..

love the way shakti punched amar..

eagerly waiting for the match..update soon..

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Rishita Singh

@..Rish..

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

OMG !!!! It was sweet, hilarious, cute , adorable and what not !!!!
I loved the beginning...haha...the DADA Amar !!!! 🤣🤣
And then he heard her voice and was out...🤣🤣🤣 Loved it and then the mister... hehe!!! Loved it..
And now the battle between Amar and Shakti !!! Omg I can't wait...
take your time !!! :)
-Rishita :D

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Ardour.

@Ardour.

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

Tish, update na,plzzz, it feels like ages and us pe se ye last part ki cliffhanger ending kar di, so, u have to have to update asap.

UPDATE!!!

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Anyaa_012

@Anyaa_012

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#129

hayyeee!!!!:$
urr back wid another Jhakaaas updatee:D
realllyyy Faaabb update :)
luvd it!!
n Amar n Shakti areee suppeer ccuuuteee !!!
luvv dem!!:)
update sooon n thanxx for PM!!:)