FF: The Thin Line, part 11 on 49 (upd 6/2))

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Hiruni

@CDlove

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Nisha!!! just read part 7. It's fabulous! wonderful writing. and ooohhh im so excited to see Aranv and Kushi in goa togethr for 3 weeks. Its like a honeymoon 😉. awesome. would we get to see some tangoing soon? ...😉and ehem thanks for listening to my request! 😉 luv ya!

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@---Nisha---

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: CDlove
Nisha!!! just read part 7. It's fabulous! wonderful writing. and ooohhh im so excited to see Aranv and Kushi in goa togethr for 3 weeks. Its like a honeymoon 😉. awesome. would we get to see some tangoing soon? ...😉and ehem thanks for listening to my request! 😉 luv ya!

Your mind has been in the gutter since morning...😆

Have your hot guy if you must. 😉

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

so K is at almost same footing as any other designer in the group...can't wait to read A's reaction (or did he set it up----mostly likely)..

Poor K how is she gonna handle the emotional stress...

-Sona

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399703

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Hey I've been following this FF since part one. My apologies for not commenting earlier. College is keeping me busy :P Anyway, great storyline!! I'm loving the story pace. Keep it up!!

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mayabegum

@mayabegum

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

wow can't wait till your next update! thanks for the PM :D

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princess84

@princess84

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

can't wait till they meet again continue soon

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@---Nisha---

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: bobop
hey..im definitely liking ur story..for one..dont know whhy ur likes went down..u have an amzing ff going on..keep writing..n thx 4 pm

thank you 😃

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

this is a nice turn of events.. dhruv seems mysterious.. Dhruv singh.. so is he Akash's brother and doesn't want to keep connection with them due to some past.. as Dhruv himself doesn't seem happy with the joint venture...

awesome part..

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Rabba-Ve-Delena

@Rabba-Ve-Delena

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#159

So finally I caught up, two instalments together Nisha and you've delivered!
Dhruv and Hiru, I like this, you've introduced parallel leads, I know for a fact they'll be stronger in comparison to PayAsh. I admire how you portrayed everything from Khushi's perspective nonetheless!👏

Also Arnav collapsed no? - Nice deflection!

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580531

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#160

Nisha! 🤗 Hello dear...😊 How are you doing, sweets? Loved the update. ArHi going to Goa!! 😛 How romantic is that?? 😍 This is going to be too good especially since Arnav now knows of Khushi's innocence and going to feel terribly horribly guilty. Oooh, the love is sure to blossom here. Me getting all excited...😃 And, you know what I like the fact that you pretty much update everyday. That's awesome. 😊 Okay,