D3 FF- Friendship and Love Redefined DISCONTINUED - Page 30

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome updates ..!
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Wow amazing ff:-):-) plz pm me next time dear:-) loved it:-)
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This is a really nice ff please do pm me when you continue :D

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Posted: 12 years ago
Enjoy 😊

Chapter 13

Rehan: shivam!!
Shivam: oh hey buddy..kaisa hai?
Rehan: buddy ke bache..mumbai chala gaya n call bhi nhi karta..bhul hi jaa tu toh
Shivam: aare yaar haan baat hi nhi ho pata..waise aaj janab ko meri yaad kaise aaye bta zara
Rehan: aare yaar..i am getting married and next week engagement hai
Shivam: woah hoh!!dude!!..give me a break…kab kaise and bhabhi kaun hai!!
Rehan: uske liye toh tujhe yanha Dehradun aana hoga
Shivam: arre..pa..
**Rehan cuts him in between**
Rehan: no if and buts!..you are coming means you are coming and hello puch nhi rha hun,bta rha hoon..you are coming!
Shivam : yes sir!
They both laughed
Rehan: thik.. and abhi bahar jaa rhe hai..so will tak to ya latr okay.. and be in touch
Shivam: yeah yeah.. and uss chudail ko bhi mana lena mere behalf mei,abhi toh baat karegi nhi
Rehan: tumlog dono nhi sudhroge!.*chuckles*..thk hai..byee
Shivam: bye
*call ends*

IN MUMBAI
All were in canteen

nil: bhut bhook lag rha hai yaar
Vicky: hai yaar
Rey: tum dono ko iske siva kuch aata hai ?
All laugh
Vicky: Aiee Rey khane de na yaar
simmi: bhuk toh mujhe bhi lag rhe hai
Sharon: hmm me too
Amar: mei abhi tum tab ke liye kuch lata hu ( mai abhi tum sab logo ke liye uch lata hu)
Amar goes while others just chit chat
Just then Vicky's phone ring
**tring-tring**
Vicky saw the caller-id and was not very happy
Nil noticed this
Mil: kya hua?...Aise kyu dekh rha hai
Vicky: ku…kuch nhi…Just a minute
And Vicky excuses himself and goes outside the canteen
Others were busy
Swayam whispers to Nil
Swayam: Vicky?
Nil: arre kuch call aa gaya tha..aa rha hai
Swayam gave a small nod

Vicky in boys locker room
Vicky sees around if anyone is there or not and then receives the call,the person had benn ringing him continuously
Vicky: hello
Caller: kahan ho tum?
Vicky: college
Caller: ghar aa jao..abhi
Vicky: bu..but dad,I cant mere classes hai
Vicky's dad: tum chinta mat kro..i will talk to them ..i want you home right now
Vicky: but dad aise kaise?.. and..and..
Vicky's dad: listen we have to discuss that matter and its important
Vicky: but Dad mei bola tha na i..
Vicky: I don't want to hear a word,Vicky!..come home!
His father disconnects the call
Vicky was frustrated
Vicky: arghh!!
He takes his side bag and walks out of the boys locker room,he msges Nil that he his going back home because he is not feeling well and then switched off his cell.

IN DEHRADUN
Kriya got ready and here the gang was ready with the plan
Kriya: chale?
Rehan: hmm and got up
Aaliyah got up
Aaliyah: aah!!..aa..sit..i think I twisted my ankle
She sat on the bed
Prateek: tum thik ho?
Aalityah: dumbo I was shouting na..dard ho rha hai
Kriya: arre kya hua..ruk mai spray le aati hu
Kritya goes nad brings the spray and sprays it
Kriya: tu bhi na pagal hai
Aalyah makes a puppy face
Aaliyah: aare aare aisa karo you all go,mai yhe rhti hu
Just tehn smriti enters
Smriti: kya hua and tum kyu nhi jaoge?
Kriya: mum usne apna ankle twist kar liya
Smriti: aare tum log na khayal nhi rakhte ho apna,zyaada dard ho rha hai beta?
Aaliyah : nhi aunty thik hai, bas socha yhe rest kar lu nhi toh dard badh jayega
Smriti: hai hai bilkul tum yhe raho,aaram karo
Kriya: par tum akele kya karogi?
Aaliyah: aunty hai na ccompany ke liye and waise bhi aunty se bhut shikayyte karni hai tumhari! *laughs*
Kriya sighs
Kriya: sure?
Aaliyah: yeah
Rehan: kay then,chalo and hum log jaldi aate hai
Vivan: bye babes
Aaliyah: bye *smiles*
Kriya ,rehan n vivan are out,prateek turns and winks at her and shows thumbs up!

After everyone was out and after finally being successfull in convincing kriya's mom that she is fine,aaliyah got up
Aaliyah: chal beta aaliyah, kamm pe lag
She opens the cupboards and drawers
Aaliyah: ye ladki na!..kha rakh di dairy arghh
Finally she opened a drawer and was about to close it when she saw a black coloured dairy with written in gold KRIYA GHAI
Aaliyah jumped with excitement but then remebere she had an "injury".
Aaliyah: mill gaya!!! *does a small victory dance *
Aaliyah: sorry K but ye toh kholna padega...


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here's chapter 13!..i noe comparatively short tha and nothing much but could update this only,14th update will be up soon, very soon! 😃


-Thankyou

Shreya and Kanishtha

Edited by muzzy_sk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow. . . .awsome update. . . . . . .at last kriya k gang ko kriya ki dairy mil gayi, . . .jst hope usme kriya ne apna pura past likha ho. . . . . .*finger crossd*. . . . Vaise yeh vicky and uske dad k bech kya chal rha h?? . . .joh bhi ho,i jst lovd the update. . . .nxt part bhi jaldi update krna and plese nxt time bda vala update i want. . .ha ha ha. . . .chola jaldi se nxt update krna. . . .
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice,,,,

waiting for the diary to open
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update dear...
Waiting for diary to open...
Update soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update and thanks for the pm :D
cant wait to find out whats in the diary

Nikki <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update ..!
Loved it ..!
Thanx 4 d pm ..!
Update soon..!

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