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Posted: 13 years ago
aweaum update yar but next time update soon...
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Liked the update ... esp the friends all together and having a nice time...update soon guyz
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awesome thanx for the pm
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Guyss the updates are ready n vo bhi ek week phele se but our net not wrking..phele kanishtha ka n whn the update ws ready mine's (shreya) also not working ..all bad things haapen at once! I swear!!...arghh.. Our xams starts on 7 before that we want to give 2-3 updates but...uhh god noes... M here from celphne..hope our net gets btr soon :(..
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Guyss the updates are ready n vo bhi ek week phele se but our net not wrking..phele kanishtha ka nhi kr rha tha n when the update ws ready mine's (shreya) net also not working ..all bad things haapen at once! I swear!!...arghh.. Our xams starts on 7 before that we want to give 2-3 updates but...uhh God noes... M here from celphne..hope our net gets btr soon :(..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome parts...
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Posted: 13 years ago
No explaintion needed we think for the late update…Check out the above

post* and its damn date!!..arghh*..okay now here's chapter 12,exams are

over!!! :D

Enjoy :)

Chapter 12
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Everyone in rehersall hall [Sunday hai…But for charity event thay all are

here]

Rey: guys…Charity event pass aa rha hai…we have decided about the

dance for that love story couple one that Sharon and Swayum will be

doing,but kisi ne group dance ke bare socha hai?

Nilesh: But humara theme kya hoga?

Simmi: something big!!

Neha: haan par what?

Sharon: fusion!!

Everyone looks at her

Sharon: ya fusion!!… Sab apne apne dance forte use karenge…what say

guys?

Rey: hmm…Not a bad idea Sharon!

Sharon: Rey it me! * fakes the haughtily look*

Rey: ya ya…of course of course

Sharon smiles widely at him

NiCky: Sharon baba…err Sharon mata ki jay ho!!...

Everyone laughs

Sharon: Vicky, Nilesh tum log!!...arghhh!!* fakes anger *

She goes towards them as if she will hit them

Nilesh: abe bhaag!!...maarte bhut joor se hai!!

And nilesh jumps and stands behind Rey and Vicky behind Neha

Everyone laughs at this

Rey: aacha Sharon chodo!!...ab kamm pe dhyaan dete hai..

Sharon sighs heavily but then smiles

Swayum: so songs kaun kaun se honge...umm.there will be 12 of us

performing

[Note: ye ff bhut phele se start hua hai...n khatam nhi hua hai vo alag baat

hai :D :D..Tanni is still dancing in the weakling team, do not bash about

it plzzjj]

Vishakha: umm..english and hindi both ,right?

Vicky: hmm..it will sound much cool

Nilesh: mixing ka prob nhi hona chahiye…sab phele dekhna hoga

Rey: err…swayum idhar aa na,kamm hai

Dono side mei hai and group cannot hear their talk (no gutter minded

thoughts guys!! :P :P)

Swayum: haan…bol

Rey: Vo clg ke annual function ke budget mei thoda prob ho gaya hai

Swayum: dikha

Rey shows him the file

Rey: dekh hum ne itna arrangements liye the .. n calculation ke hisaab se

vo itna hona chahiye,dekh toh

No reply

Rey : n agar ye Dj pe itna kharcha hua toh…swayum?

No reply

Rey: Swayum..*looks up to him, follows swayum's gaze n bingo>>>Sharon

:D,Sharon sees that Rey has caught them so turns away immediately*…in

dono ka kuch nhi ho skta

Rey: itna ghurega toh dar jayegi..

Swayum: hmm…hmm...Kya!!...kya!! Mai…Mai toh nhi..

Rey laughs lightly

Rey: abe mere samne nautnki mat kar...aache se janta hu.. bas usse ke

khayalo mei rhta hai hamesha

Swayum: Aare vo toh…mai tohh…

Rey looks at him with an evil smile and Swayam shuts up and makes a

baby face and rey smiles

Rey: aaj kal bada bhav de rhe hai tujhe..kya baat hai??..hmmm..*grins at

him*

Swayum: Aare aisa kuch nhi hai…

Rey: aacha dono abhi ghur rhe the ek dusre ko and kuch nhi hai

Swayum: voo…Rey!!...tu meri khichai kyu kar rha hai..Chal kamm dekhte

Rey smiles

Rey: hai..hai..kamm krte hai! * laughs softly*

Dehadun

Kriya sitting on her couch, her mom in her room.

Bell rings: Ding–dong!

Her mom opens and sees four excited face, smiling ear to ear

Smirti: Aare beta tum sab, Rehan tum kitne din baad aaye ho

Intoducing: Rehan :D. he is Vivan's elder brother. And knows Kriya as

well.

Rehan: aare bas aunty abhi aaya hu..andar bhi nhi aanae denge ? *smiles *

Smiriti : oh sorry sorry beta

Smilriti : kriya dekho kaun aaya hai..

Kriya sees him and runs in full speen and hugs Rehan

Kriya: rehan!!!…..gosh kitne din baad mill rhe ho.. actually dekha jae toh

saal baad!!.. * hmmm*

Rehan: aare job tha choti kya karta..waise mai last yanha se gaya tha tab

toh tum boarding mei chali gye the na..i guess 11-12 ke liye. (rehan calls

her choti ,sweety n ol..Treats her like a lil sister)

Kriya: yup!!..vo mom ka transfer ho gaya tha na shimla esliy

Everyone is sitting in the living roon.

Rehan: teri padhia kaise chal rhe hai?..hmmm

Kriya* lokks at her mom*: thik hai bhai

Rehan: maine suna tha ki tum Mumbai chali gye the..*looks at smiriti*

Kriya: hai..vo vo..but mann nhi laga so wapas aa gye

Rehan : oh

Kriya : waise aap aachnak se??..n ye sab bhi…u look very happy too..

Rehan *blushes a bit*… vo mai yanha invitation dene aaya tha

Kriya: invitation?..kya chiz ka?

Rehan: marriage..i am getting married next month and next week mera

engagement hai

Kriya: engagement!!.. Marriage!!...woahhh!...bhai aapne btaya bhi

nhi..how rude!!..waise bhabhi kaun hai?? * evil smile *

Rehan: aare mil logi mill logi chinta mat karo...

Aaliyah: vhe na kriya hume bhi nhi milaya hai...huh* grins*

Rehan: tum dono na

Rehan stands up and hands over the card to smiriti

Smiriti: congratulations beta

Rehan: thankyou aunty *smiles**taking aashirvaad...Good boy :D*

Rehan: waise kriya*turning towards*I need your help yaar. We need to go

shopping for the engagement

Kriya: kya!!...Engagement next week hai and aapne shopping nhi ki

hai…bhai aapka kuch nhi ho sakta..

Rehan: aare aare meri hyper active behna!!..calm down,sirf kuch chize hi

baki hai n tumhare bina toh nhi skte

Kriya smiles

Rehan: toh free ho?? oh abhi chale??..ye teeno bhi yhi hai *loks towards

smiriti* thik hai na aunty??

Smriti: hai hai beta..aise bhi ghar mei hi baithe rhti hai..thoda bhara bhi

ghum aayegi

Kriya: thik hai I will get ready and come

Aaliyah: psst..psst..

Vivan turns towards her

Vivan raise his eyesbrow.* smriti kitchen chali gye hai and only 4 of them

are sitting*..

Aaliyah: guys…mission yaad hai na??...abhi aacha time hai…

Preteek: hmm..sahi hai..but kare kya!!

Rehan: plan...kya bakk rhe ho tumlog??..

Vivan: bhai baad mei btata hu…abhi rukhiye

Rehan looks at them with a brow raised but then ignores thinking it to

something kidish prank

Kriya comes out fully dressed up..

Smiriti: abhi ruko tumlog sab...thoda kuch kha lo,phir jana..mei abhi

sandwich n kch lati hu

Prateek: Aare par aunty ap itna sab kuch

Smriti: aare toh aise kaise jaoge bhala...tum sab kriya ke room mei baitho

mai abhi aati lati hu sab

All get up and go to kriya 's room

Rehan: heyy!!...aaliyah tumhara bhai kaha hai abhi??...

Aalyah: bhai?oh vo!..vo toh Mumbai mei hai abhi

Kriya: kaun??..

Aaliyah: aare mera cousin bhai hai..tum jab boarding mei chali gye thi tab

vo 2 saal ke liye yanha tha…btaye the..yaad hai

Kriya: oh ya ya..kafi sune tumlog karnamo ke bare. U people were seriously

crazy

Prateek: haan vo toh the!! *grins*

Rehan: usko phone laga toh..meri engagement hai and usko bhi hona

chahiye

Aaliyah *smiles*: abhi lagti hu..pakka soo rha hoga *laughs*

Kriya: tumlog baat karo..mei kitchen se aati hu [ kriya exit]

***Tring—Tring***

Bhai: hey….*totally sleepy*..bolo..

Aaliyah: so rhe ho..pata tha

Bhai: Toh phone kyu kiya??!!

Aaliyah: Aare haad haal hai...subh ke 11 baaj rhe hai aur tum soo rhe

ho!!...huhh

Bhai: Toh Sunday hai na!!…aacha fine bolo kya hua

Aalyah: nahi bataungi..huhh…sote rho tum bye!!..

Bhai: aare sun na..

Rehan: aaliyahh..phone do..tum dono na nhi sudhroge..

Aaliyah : jo bhi huhh

Rehan shakes his head and takes the phone

Rahan: hey shivam!!

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So here's the 12th chapter.
Again sorry for late update.
Hopefully agli baar itna late nhi hoga...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
yipppeee first one to comment
loved the update it was awesome
loved it
Madhu_ArSha thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wowww. . . .
Awsome update. . . . . .
M so happpy. . . . .
U dnt knw hw happy i was wen i saw ur pm. . . . . . . . . . . . . .
I thought,
u left dis ff. . . . . . .
Bt,i m realy vry glad to see u continud. . .
I m realy vry happy. . . . .
Tat u continud it. . . . .
Thank u,
thank u,
thank u,
thank u,
thank u,
thanks a lot 4 continuing. . . . . . . . .
M sooo happy. . . . .
Nd update was reallly awsome. . . . .
Bt,wat was tat. . .
Shivam n voh bhi aliya ka cousin. . . .
I was xcpctng tat uska cousin koi lousin mai se hoga,
bt i was realy shockd. . . . . . . . . . . . .
To knw it was shivam. . . . . . . .
Bt itz k. . . . . .
Nxt part jaldi update krna.. .
M vry realy much xcitd to knw wat hapn nxt. . . .
Nyt part jaldi update krna. . . . . . . Egarly waitng 4 it. . . . .
Update as sooon as posssibllleee. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Egarlyyy waitng 4 it. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Madhu_ArSha thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
WWowww. . . .
Awsome update. . . . . .
M so happpy. . . . .
U dnt knw hw happy i was wen i saw ur pm. . . . . . . . . . . . . .
I thought,
u left dis ff. . . . . . .
Bt,i m realy vry glad to see u continud. . .
I m realy vry happy. . . . .
Tat u continud it. . . . .
Thank u,
thank u,
thank u,
thank u,
thank u,
thanks a lot 4 continuing. . . . . . . . .
M sooo happy. . . . .
Nd update was reallly awsome. . . . .
Bt,wat was tat. . .
Shivam n voh bhi aliya ka cousin. . . .
I was xcpctng tat uska cousin koi lousin mai se hoga,
bt i was realy shockd. . . . . . . . . . . . .
To knw it was shivam. . . . . . . .
Bt itz k. . . . . .
Nxt part jaldi update krna.. .
M vry realy much xcitd to knw wat hapn nxt. . . .
Nyt part jaldi update krna. . . . . . . Egarly waitng 4 it. . . . .
Update as sooon as posssibllleee. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Egarlyyy waitng 4 it. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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