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Mayuri Dev

@mddmayuri

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

first of all thank u for starting such thread thread ...gr8 idea dear

n secondly nice story rashmi...luved it...

luved their scene...

par ud ke end ne pura hilla diya...feeling bad for both of them..

eagerly waiting for the nxt...

Edited by mddmayuri - 13 years ago

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Sonali

@sonalimurat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Very nice part Rashmi

loved it thoroughly

ur description is awesome

Liked ur story

It's really heart touching

So ver Left her at first night

Poor ananya...

Loved their scene ...

thanx to electricity that made their meeting in small period of time

liked bonding beween Jethani Devrani

Hope Veer come back soon

It's indeed very difficult period for Anu

update soon

lov u

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shruja

@shruja

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

thanks for opening RTMC OS/SS gallary!!
banner is beautiful!!

liked 1st contribution by you!
the pain of ananya described very beautifully
and all emotions between veer n ananya were narrated brilliantly!!
loved romantic scene between them!!
electricity ko wrong time pe ana tha!!
and he had to left for his duty!! sad!!
she is waiting for him!! feeling all alone!!
loved it!! do continue!!

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dhwanimehta23

@dhwanimehta23

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Thanx for starting this thread!!!!
the first update is really amazing!!
👏
👏

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Dhanvi

@Freethinker

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

I have only one word for you sweetie...wow...its amazing...keep up the good work...

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Dhanvi

@Freethinker

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Hi Sweetie

can i give a link to RTMC One shot...specially writen for your new gallery...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2984720/rtmc-ff-one-shot

You can copy and post it here...

Cheers
Dhanvi

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Priya Sharma

@Priyart12

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

jb m yha bhi aa gai to yha bhi ek
nona sa cmnt kr du
siggie achi h 👍🏼
ye rules yha bhi aa tapke
rashu k bhi rules hone lag gye 😕
i hate rules 😈
serious 😲
rashu serious bhi hoti h 😕
abt ur ss
bdiya h ji 😃
ye veer bhi na
kitna bura h anu ko chod k chla gya
bt vo bhi kiya krta
ye boss such me bhut khadus hote h 😡
poor anu shirt se hi veer ko yaad kr rhi h 😔
mujhe bhi bhut yaad aati h 😭
bt mere pass uski shirt nhi h 😛
bt pics h bhut sari 👍🏼
veer ab jaldi aa jao na

w8ing for next part n next ss
luv u buddy 🤗

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geetap

@geetap

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

nice concept...and the 1st part was also very good plz continue soon...and bring bak veer fast

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ruchi

@--Ruchi--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

This is indeed a brilliant idea,congrats for that🤗

about the story,very nice...veer as army officer..I can imagine him very well😉 poor anu,he had to go at the very first night...awwhhh...

update soon

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piuli

@prahelika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

okay here comes the comment of prazi the great😆...

first of all a big congo for opening a new ss gallery🤗...

wait main 3 baar bhopu baja deti hoon🥳🥳🥳...

mere aur baki saare di ke naam raushan karna...(err...well that was a bit cheesy 😆but i meant it😳)

now coming to the story...

aww my poor newly wed anu missing her hubby😭...and keeping herself busy in homemaking...

and reminiscing their ahem ahem SR☺️...

of course she'll miss it after all it would have give her lots of babies😆...

though i hate power cuts but sometimes they are really good for health...err romance...

the description of the whole SR scene was very well written👏...it was in fact a really cute 😳scene not a wild SR one😆...i guess that's on the way once veer comes back...

and my veer is macho army guy😍...and he loves his country so much that he can resist the temptation of such a beautiful wife😳...

but next update mein use real mein anu ke paas wapas le aa jaldi se...

bechari frustrated ho gayi hai😕...

update very soon dear...😃

Edited by prahelika - 13 years ago